sby
: Thanks man, means a lot coming from you!
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JGUIDO
: The flavor of each chapter is intended to be a bit different so that the saga as a whole will cater to a wide variety of tastes. As for length, chapter 4 took the longest to write and probably contains the most lines of all chapters, but that's also because of the branching. My plans for chapter 5 so far seem to be doable with just two branches so it will probably be less complicated.
As for your issue: Line repetition is always a potential problem when you have spoken lines by her. Her mouth being occupied (even accidentally) risks breaking things. In such situations, it's better to try the line again through a general line substitution so as not to kill the dialogue progression completely or miss important plot content. There are several solutions:
1) We can use HIDE/SHOW PENIS at the start and end of a chapter to permit uninterrupted banter at those times. I do this to varying degree in chapters 1-3, but I wanted chapter 4 to start
in medias res as it were.
2) We can otherwise limit her speech to non-oral positions and rely on him speech and her thoughts in oral positions. Can be combined with 1 though. If I really wanted to avoid line repetition 100%, this would be the way to go.
3) You can use hand job mode. This is a neat trick as it pulls her off the cock if she's sucking it and switches the mouse action to the hands while locking her head in a speakable position. It is still possible to interrupt because holding the mouse button will move her head as normal, but accidentally doing this is pretty unusual.
The problem is immersion. Let's say she gets really pissed and wants to yell at him in an oral position. Is it appropriate that she strokes his cock meanwhile? Probably not. Is it realistic to suddenly put away his cock back back into his pants while she rants? Nope, probably not very likely either. So at that particular point which I think you are referring to, that is exactly the problem. She talks in an oral position while his cock is still out while she is angry. In retrospect, it would probably have been better to adapt the story to allow for him to put away his cock at the end before her rant to avoid this. I'm learning a lot from this project, and one such thing is how to build stories and chapters that work with the game mechanics of SDT and its mods. I hope this will make chapters 5 and 6 easier to write (the way the plot has developed, I reckon this will be a 6-part saga now with chapter 6 being a sort of "endless mode") and give me a template of sorts to work with for future projects.