WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 8.9 3/27/19) Added Sister (14 Viewers)

[gekker]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

1. She might orgasm just by fucking if her arousal is 100. If you get her up to 100, then get her arousal back down to 90 before she has a chance of cumming, it's considered a denial.
2. She just automatically starts masturbating when her arousal is 100. If you change position or drive her arousal down (probably from slapping or whipping), she'll stop and its considered a denial.
What do you think?

This is an amazing and creative idea, hope you implement it. The later bit about the different slave interactions sounds cool also, but it sounds like it'd be pretty difficult. All for it if you can pull it off however, and am glad we mat eventually get a nice harem. 4 or 5 diverse girls and I'd be on cloud nine.

 

[Bruce]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Thank you for your detailed post! You did something with Ashley's dialogue that I like a lot, dunno if that was aimed at me but thanks anyway!

What was it that you liked? Was it that there were more spoken lines than thought?

I love the way she responds when forcing it in (docile broken) ;)
I'm really looking forward to the Succubus, I like a seductive theme.

I actually just meant the vanilla weights, I think they work fine the way they are :)

Ah, then yes, that feature is listed in my poll under "jewelry". Right now it's not looking too popular though, so I doubt I'll work on it for some time.

That one surely got my vote :)

You could make a response to the 'no' option when asked to touch herself.

I thought of that as well. I think I want to have orgasm denial as part of breaking the succubus. However, the way I see her personality is that when unbroken she wouldn't be the type to ask permission, even when her pride is low. I'm thinking about two ways for denial:
1. She might orgasm just by fucking if her arousal is 100. If you get her up to 100, then get her arousal back down to 90 before she has a chance of cumming, it's considered a denial.
2. She just automatically starts masturbating when her arousal is 100. If you change position or drive her arousal down (probably from slapping or whipping), she'll stop and its considered a denial.
What do you think?

I think you're a genius.
This also touches a more general thought about slaves' orgasms: I really like 1., in fact I would prefer if she doesn't have to touch herself to orgasm from fucking (for all docile broken slaves). Another thing is that both Ashley and Plexia usually orgasm a lot slower then him from fucking, is there a way to slow his arousal down?
Sby released Animtools 14 btw, can't wait for what you come up with :)

Personally I would prefer more content (lines, spoken lines) for existing characters to new characters.

It looks like you are not alone according to the poll. People seem to want more lines with the existing characters. I'd like to get an array of characters first though, since part of the game is supposed to be having a harem of girls. You might have one be your whore while another is your private girl. You may pick girls to whore out to maximize profits. I'd like to add powers to the more fantastic girls that you can use on others. I'd even like to try to add some special moments, such as being able to fail with the succubus and she escapes, but if you have Plexia broken and loving, she'll step in and save you, putting the succubus back into her place. Not sure if the effort for that though is worth it.

Btw, are you finding any lines that seem to repeat more than others? I'm not sure how people play the bundle, so I'm not sure which areas people might be lingering in and thus hearing a lot of repeats.

The idea is really great. I would still prefer more lines in response to various activities for broken slaves though (the ones that trigger the most "endgame").
As to repetitiveness, there really are no lines that seem majorly more repetitive then others. Not meaning to say your dialogue is repetitive at all, I just like playing your bundle too much ;). there are some small things I noticed though:
Pretty much all the fuck and anal lines with 'generic' (all 6 categories) seem to fire more often then others. [edit]This somehow doesn't seem to be the case anymore, thank you! (they still fire relatively often but not overly so)
Last time I checked Plexias thought lines triggered relatively often compared to situational lines. This was with alpha 5 though, I haven't checked her extensively in alpha 6. [edit]Same for this
Plexia doesn't respond to slapping once it doesn't effect her mood.

P.S. another thought for the Succubus: Maybe the succubus would be suited for some sort of middle ground between Ashley and Plexia regarding Whipping. Make it add pain and loose love/arousal/pride when she is not aroused enough, make it add a little arousal and a little pain when she is aroused (but maybe still trying to coerce you into fucking, she is a succubus after all).

I like that idea! As a matter of fact, Ashley slightly works like this. When Ashley isn't aroused, fucking her makes her pain go up a bit, and her arousal goes up very slowly. Once she's a little bit wet though, her arousal goes up much faster from fucking.

You could also use [ah_hard] if arousal is low and [oh_soft] if arousal is high to acoustically underline this. I think you could also generally use [moan] and [oh_soft] triggers more in the various fuck/anal lines.

[edit]I just played around with set breath levels a bit. It seems something like a generic 50 is a good start for most occasions she enjoys.

 

[hey_there]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Hey WeeWillie, just wanted to say here thank you for making all of your dialogues! They're all really something special and I can tell a lot of work has gone into them. Your Slave Bazaar's code so far is especially on a whole new level! I've got an idea in the back of my mind for a dialogue, and just looking at and learning bit by bit the code you've made so far for the Bazaar has helped me get an idea for how to make mine (some day... probably far away haha). Thanks so much again for them, and really looking forward to anything new you do, to either your current dialogues or later ones, in the future :) I've voted for three things for the Bazaar, and really can't wait (expression wise, take the time you need) for the succubus!

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

So sounds like Pim_gd isn't having time now to play Bazaar, so I'm switching over to the young virgin instead of the succubus. She was voted highly, and she'll be slightly easier to do than the succubus anyway.
Other things I'll be looking into from seeing the results of the last poll are:
More speech variations
A Talia sex scene
More audio noises
A better compliment/insult system

A sister was voted highly too, but given I'll have a Daddy's girl and a young virgin, I'm not sure I want to have so many young girls in the roster. Succubus will be after the frightened virgin.

A new poll is up. I'd love to hear you answers. I may change what I focus on depending on the feedback. Thanks!

 

[Nevermourned]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

My two cents, you're doing the work, and I think that the best quality comes from you doing the work you want to do. You've gotten tons of accolades, one person not enjoying it does not detract at all from the coolness... And I like that there's exotic options in there. I like having the choice between a more normal female, and one who isn't even human. You're one of the only ones to do that option and it's awesome.

So if you really want to go with the highest rated then of course that is of course your prerogative... however it sounds like you're doing it for the wrong reason and if you were set on the Succubus and excited for her and aren't excited for the innocent girl, then I honestly think it'll turn out not as good as you know it can be. What I'm trying to say is you're doing awesome work and while I'm glad you listen to our opinions please don't be bound by them. This is your thing, you have designer's rights to do what you think is coolest.

As for the most recent questionnaire, a bit more detail. I play male the most and sometimes shemale, but never female because I can't cum with the female, and that's part of the fun for me. I do think breaking them should take a bit longer, it's a hard thing to balance because you want to mix realism with porn, but I feel as though it's a bit too quick at the moment, for me personally. And I like them best when they're broken, BUT, I like breaking them more than I like them either being broken, or before they're broken. I do enjoy them cussing me out and having a mouth, and I enjoy them being utterly helpless and despondent, and I enjoy them being broken... What I suppose I'm saying, is that I appreciate the whole emotional range and the process, more than any one particular stage. I'll typically start a new game instead of continue with an old character to go through the breaking process again.

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

So if you really want to go with the highest rated then of course that is of course your prerogative... however it sounds like you're doing it for the wrong reason and if you were set on the Succubus and excited for her and aren't excited for the innocent girl...

Thank you for the detailed response and feedback. I do color what people want with what I want. But I also really like knowing that people are enjoying my work, so I try to balance what I want with what everyone else wants. For example, I've never given the option for pregnancy as a feature, cause it's really not my thing. As for the young innocent, part of the reason I'm changing is that she's the one I wanted to do the most :). Since SDT is so cartoony, I enjoy letting my inner demons fly free. I would never want to actually hurt a real girl or woman and make her cry, but there's something I find arousing about abusing a fictional girl. In this cartoon format, I love begging, crying, whipping, choking, and humiliation, so as you can tell I've been keeping myself covered already. There is so many hours of development packed into the Bazaar already though, I'd like to get maximum covered for everyone else's desires as well.

 

[aztlan]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

So sounds like Pim_gd isn't having time now to play Bazaar, so I'm switching over to the young virgin instead of the succubus. She was voted highly, and she'll be slightly easier to do than the succubus anyway.
Other things I'll be looking into from seeing the results of the last poll are:
More speech variations
A Talia sex scene
More audio noises
A better compliment/insult system

A sister was voted highly too, but given I'll have a Daddy's girl and a young virgin, I'm not sure I want to have so many young girls in the roster. Succubus will be after the frightened virgin.

A new poll is up. I'd love to hear you answers. I may change what I focus on depending on the feedback. Thanks!

Excellent. All of these (young virgin, more speech, more noise) sound good.

 

[Nevermourned]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Ah, well, I feel a bit embarrassed now, maybe jumped the gun or went a bit too passionate. I'm glad that you're doing it then because in addition to her getting top choice she's the one you really want to do next. And of course! There are numerous things I and affiliated characters do in fiction that would fill me with rage and a desire for bloody justice when I hear about them being done in real life. The healthy recognition of the difference between fantasy and reality, nothing wrong with it. And you are welcome for the detailed feedback, and I can assure you that the Bazaar covers quite a few of my desires as well... I very much enjoy the work. And I will stop talking now lest my foot find it's way into my mouth, please be well!

 

[Bruce]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Huh, seems like I'm in the minority here enjoying the docile broken slaves the most :) I voted for Plexia, but I play Ashley equally much.

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Huh, seems like I'm in the minority here enjoying the docile broken slaves the most

Actually, that's not true. Docile Ashley is divided into "Call me Daddy" and "Call me Master", so adding those two together means the favorite currently is Ashley as a Docile Slave.

 

[elebram]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

I like too much slave market, i suggest to insert something like "pinch nipple" like mistress plaything.
Fantastic the new character :P

 

[RagingBanana]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

i don't understand how to progress after breaking slave, or i can't progress? it says "she feels unsure" so there should be something more.

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

i don't understand how to progress after breaking slave, or i can't progress? it says "she feels unsure" so there should be something more.

Every girl has a pride and love rating. If she is unsure, one or both of those must be low. The higher those values, the more the girl will earn when pimped out. Once you've broken a girl, you can still pimp them out to earn money, which you can use to buy items like clothing. I hope to add more girls, so in the future you can use the money to buy more slaves.

 

[Nevermourned]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

On Pimping, my two cents again, I enjoy the concept and like the idea of breaking the slave and then training them to essentially be prostitutes, long-term investment in property, using them to earn you money. I like that more than what's probably the stated purpose of buying, breaking, then selling the broken slave for a profit. However as of yet, I haven't seen any of the potential renters... repeat, so it's a temporary thing at best. Would it be impossible of game-breaking to allow for the same kind of 'Pimping' customers to come back later, regenerate as it were, and allow for a kind of permanent business around 'Pimping' the slaves?

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

However as of yet, I haven't seen any of the potential renters... repeat

There are 9 customers, and they do repeat (unless something broke). Time needs to pass though, which means you spend some time with a girl, then return to the foyer. If you stay with a girl and never leave, then time doesn't pass, so you won't see new customers. The idea is that you'd go back to the shop to buy new things, or move to a different girl. Since there are only two girls right now, I guess there isn't much switching over.

 

[MAGPIE]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Hi I know this might be a very noobie question, but how do i return to the main menu upon loading the game?
what happens is after i load it the game immediately starts to load all of the custom clothing and i don't know how to get back to the main menu to the custom options bar you're talking about to load the dialogue.
So is there a command to get back to the main menu after it starts or can i just load the dialogue through the in game mod table normal for it to work?

 

[aztlan]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Wait for everything to load, then go to the character folders and load Slave Bazaar. (Tap "Y" key, go to "Custom" on the bottom left and scroll through to find the Slave Bazaar, click it, then move the mouse cursor up-screen or type "Y" again.)

 

[MAGPIE]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

To: WeeWillie

Just got the Bazar story working and its great! I was a little disappointed that there were only two slaves but with all of the content in-game it makes up for that :)
But could we expect some additional girls in future?
such as another fantasy type or reality type?

I also got through sorcerous girlfriend and I really enjoyed that one as well.
would it be possible to add some position content for that as well?

 

[WeeWillie]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Just got the Bazar story working and its great! I was a little disappointed that there were only two slaves but with all of the content in-game it makes up for that :)
But could we expect some additional girls in future?

You've missed out on previous discussions where I've said the Bazaar is an alpha, which means it's not a completed product yet. I'll be adding more girls, but they take a significant amount of work to create because of the spoken line count and complexity. I'm currently working on a young virgin, and after that will come a succubus.

I also got through sorcerous girlfriend and I really enjoyed that one as well.
would it be possible to add some position content for that as well?

I've asked the players, and everyone would rather I continue to flush out Bazaar than go back and work on my older dialogues. It takes time to create and modify these, and time is a very precious resource. So sadly, unless there's a large demand, I probably won't go back and touch my older dialogues for some time.

Thank you for the kind words!

 

[MAGPIE]

Re: WeeWillie Dialogues (Slave Bazaar Alpha 6 1/15/15, added Daddy's Girl)

Makes sense not to go back, especially since the older one has a end and everything as well.

Yeah i would rather see more development out into Bazar as well. Its such a cool expansion on the game as a whole!
I hope the other characters come out awesome.
will there perhaps be a character poll for others to come?
though I could understand that you may not want to to leave focus on your characters you're already working on :)