- Nov 13, 2015
Woud feel pity for draftees. Volunteers knew what they signed up for :/
Yes, the camera is attached to his suit.How did he record the deaths? Does he hae body cam?
Yeah, because it's not totally given away by the titleAnd to end of one of my occasional walls of text, I'm betting the final target at the end of this series will be the empress herself. Just a hunch.
I must say though, despite my complaints, focusing on the main villain throughout the chapter to lead into the hero's final confrontation with her is a pretty solid idea. Under different circumstances where there's more to dislike about the villain, I can see this type of setup making her death feel very satisfying rather than tragic. I'd say stick with giving antagonist-point of view sections because they're pretty great.Thank you guys for your opinions :D
Miku is my favorite character in this chapter and I enjoyed writing about her very much. Perhaps that's why I got carried away and made her too sympathetic. Originally, I only intended her to be a rich spoiled stupid kid who went to where she shouldn't (she still is though, after all that's what everyone else thinks of her). As the result, I was conflicted when I had to write to her end. Letting her survive just makes no sense while a quick simple death is too anticlimactic after all of the built up, so finally I decided to make it a tragedy.
But don't worry, characters like Miku are very rare. Most are gray. This is a war after all, who has never dirtied her hands? So you probably won't see a sweet and innocent girl has to die a horrible death again. Probably
Yes, the camera is attached to his suit.
Yeah, because it's not totally given away by the title