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Combox' Insatiable Dialogues: Super Orgasmic Girl & Forbidden Schoolgirl Secret

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Combox, Nov 10, 2011.

  1. Combox

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    These are my dialogues for the game, with the objective to provide sexy, substantial, and intense dirty talk.

    The text is heavily coded and takes full advantage of the dialogue actions that were introduced in SDT v1.11b to make the experience more vivid and engaging. As new coding tools become available, the dialogues are updated.

    Sentences are generally two lines long, as they appear in the game, to avoid too much text scrolling by (usually allowing for a cough/interrupt or two). I realize text speed can be adjusted with mods, but wanted to make things more leisurely for the player.

    Please let me know of any errors, and I'll update as needed. :)



    "Forbidden Schoolgirl Secret" - Updated 2 Dec 2011

    This dialogue is rooted in the ever-sexy schoolgirl teen dream:
    A lollipop-sucking, superficially innocent, pigtails-haired, prom princess-aspiring, Daddy issues-having, essentially inexperienced, barely legal cheerleader.

    The twist is that you're at risk of tripple-discovery:
    Her Mom, Dad, and teacher are having a meeting in the next room to where you're tainting their sweet little baby girl.

    The text is flexible enough that the fun can happen in a class room, principal's office, locker room, janitor's closet, or pretty much anywhere at a campus, and you can be a student, teacher, coach, janitor, stranger, or even a dean! (Name your character in the Custom tab)

    Inspiration comes in no small part from Kitty of The Pit's comics, but in general from girls where I've felt guilty about doing them.

    I recommend setting resistances pretty high to reflect inexperience, and - of course - choosing your favorite school girl.



    "Super Orgasmic Girl (Insatiable)" - Updated 15 Nov 2011

    This dialogue reflects the ideal dirty girl: She loves it hard, deep, and pumping down her throat. However, the main theme is that she cums very fast, hard, and repeatedly.

    I remember dating a few girls like this, and there's nothing quite like it (though none that came just from giving head). Its like an ego-joyride when she spasms out of control, makes you feel like a sex-god when you've barely begun.

    For this theme in particular the dialogue actions are a perfect asset, so that her orgasms are backed up by facial animation.
     

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    on the first look it's pretty good, but have you even tested it?
    *, YOU* --> *YOU*
     
  3. Combox

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Ah yes, I see that now.

    I did playtest extensively, but English is not my native language, so that one slipped my mind. (Used punctuation from my own language)

    Updated, thanks!
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    The best dialogue.
     
  5. Combox

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Thank you very much!

    I plan to update the dialogue with particular focus on implementing the new "custom dialogue types", though currently I can't get it to produce the results I intend.

    The code doesn't seem to allow multiple custom types to produce a single line. Have anybody else experienced similar issues?
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Gotta say this is one of the best dialouge's I've seen so far. Awesome job
     
  7. Combox

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Updated, primarily to incorporate the new dialogue actions of v1.11.1b.

    Hey, thanks a bunch! :)
    Writing up dirty talk turned out a lot more fun than I imagined, so I'll probably do a few more.
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    With the updated version she never stops talking. Each dialogue line happens immediately after the last one.
     
  9. Combox

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Thanks for letting me know.

    I played around with it for some time, but didn't encounter the issue myself though. Hmm...

    Any specific line where this happened? Or does it occur for all lines?
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    It's not specific to any one line. Once she starts she just never stops unless the cock is in her mouth. It's only with this dialogue, the old one still works normally.

    Edit: Oh, it's not happening now. Must have been a one time bug.
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    looks like it took a lot of effort to create this monologue! you're doing a great job, implementing the dialogue actions like that. you have a good feeling for emotion and body language.
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Imho the best dialogue so far! I would really like to see more lines form you (I especially like the resistance, first_throat and first_dt lines), maybe a non orgasmic version? I would be interested in what you come up with for held, vigorous and wake if not making her orgasm.

    kudos!
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    ok. is very good
     
  14. Combox

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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Thanks for all the praise, people! I'm really flattered! :)

    I can assure you all, that I'm currently working on my next dialogue. The next one will focus on quite a different theme (not orgasms), while still fully utilizing all the coding tools available for the game so far, to enhance the experience.

    I actually spent some time brainstorming a few different themes, but believe this one should appeal to most people while staying fresh and... steamy...

    Stay tuned!
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Great dialogue! Looking forward to your next one. :)
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    really good,,
    good work.....and conversion swf?
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Updated!

    "Forbidden Schoolgirl Secret"

    This dialogue is rooted in the ever-sexy schoolgirl teen dream:
    A lollipop-sucking, superficially innocent, pigtails-haired, prom princess-aspiring, Daddy issues-having, essentially inexperienced, barely legal cheerleader.

    The twist is that you're at risk of tripple-discovery:
    Her Mom, Dad, and teacher are having a meeting in the next room to where you're tainting their sweet little baby girl.

    The text is flexible enough that the fun can happen in a class room, principal's office, locker room, janitor's closet, or pretty much anywhere at a campus, and you can be a student, teacher, coach, janitor, stranger, or even a dean! (Name your character in the Custom tab)

    Inspiration comes in no small part from Kitty of The Pit's comics, but in general from girls where I've felt guilty about doing them.

    I recommend setting resistances pretty high to reflect inexperience, and - of course - choosing your favorite school girl.



    Sure, I'll look into it. Perhaps make a big "thematic package" swf (e.g. schoolgirl dialogue, hair, and background), if I figure out how.
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    :P
     
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    Re: Insatiable - AKA Super Orgasmic Girl

    Ah yes, I did remember and reconsider that. ;)

    So I did some English grammar research, and to my understanding this is how you generally use commas in the vocative case. Here's a few independent examples:1, 2, 3.

    It all depends on context of course, so please point out which lines where you think I should adjust. :)
     
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    he did'nt mean the grammar dude
    *, YOU* -> wrong way to use
    , *YOU* -> right way to use

    the comma should not be inside of the ** because they are calling a program variable...
    ;)