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Slutty Dialogue Mod

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Sayuma, Aug 20, 2011.

  1. Sayuma

    Sayuma Potential Patron

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    ;D I extracted and re-wrote most of the dialoge, didn't add extra lines cause I was laazy, and kept some of the lines similar, but modded almost all of them. Now you can have a very happy submissive cockslut slave. I suggest using a blindfold on her to really get in the mood.
     

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  2. anonymous

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    No you're stupid. I'll fix it anyway... but you're still stupid.

    Topic moved... twice.
     
  3. Sayuma

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    Sorry, didn't see a place for this immediately. ^^; Thanks for moving it.
     
  4. Knives

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    Ok, from what I've noticed working around with my own dialogue, you got a few things wrong, here.

    Stuff in **'s only appears when the blank name space is filled with, say, "Todd", or you know, "Lord Voldemort", whatever. You've just arranged it slightly wrong:

    In this line, the arrangement creates a space before the name, and leaves the comma and capital letter 'D' misplaced. Mostly, only a few others are spaced oddly, but it does ruin the grammatical progression from time to time.

    You need to seperate it it with a comma, or space it correctly, and try not to put the *YOU* and such at the beginning of sentences.

    And later on:

    Again, no big deal, but in-game, the *FINISHES* tag automatically adds' times' in there. So, in game, your abiove sentence spits out:

    "Just seven times times master?" Etcetera. Nothing major, just thought these tips might help. I am a Grammar Nazi, so it might as well help the community, asides from being insufferable.
     
  5. Sayuma

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    Thanks, I might have missed a lot of little things like that 'cause I was just trying to mod the whole thing fast as I could. I might write more mods tho, and I will keep it in mind. ^^ ;D