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Slut stir up you!

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by ksk, Oct 3, 2011.

  1. ksk

    ksk Potential Patron

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    Hello!

    This is my first dialogue and my first posting!


    Situation:
    The slut is accustomed to deepthroat blowjob,and stir up you.
    She will show her serving techniques(self mode),and sometimes, she will enjoy being forced by you(forced mode).

    In these 2 dialogues,sometimes you take turns offence and defence(the words like "my turn","grab my head"..).
    At that time, please switch to manually.

    I'm not familiar with English(I use translation software).
    I think there is a mistake in grammar,and Stiff sentence.

    If someone like these dialogues,please fix!
    And I want more slutty word(Slang) for these dialogues.

    Thank you!
     

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  2. Queen of Clubs

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    I did some slight editing to the forced version (to make it sound more natural, as you said you used a translator) I have tried to keep it as close to the original as possible.

    EDIT: I made some really amateur mistakes on that version...so I have uploaded a new and improved version (whilst still keeping as close to KsK's original as possible)
     

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  3. ksk

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    THank you for fix!!
    The dialogue became more wonderful!

    I want to know more slutty and cool texts in english...
     
  4. Queen of Clubs

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    I have also made an edit to the 'self' version ;D, again I have kept as close to the original as possible.

    And I took my time to proof read it this time, so there shouldn't be any amateur mistakes! :-[
     

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  5. ksk

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    Thank you for more fix!!

    I'm loving it!!
     
  6. ksk

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    female_boss

    Hello

    I tried to create a new dialog.
    Maybe,grammar still fucked up...but enjoy it!
    If possible,please correct as you like!

    Situation:
    She is your boss (company,army,pirates,bandit,secret society,etc).
    You made ​​a great achievement at work,and she promise if you could do, she would give you any reward what you want.
    And your demand is her throat...
     

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  7. Xiombarg

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    Looks like an interesting set of Dialogs here!

    Goes well with my 'Office Lady' persona. I'll have to post that set of hair/BG/Code somewhere...

    Always nice to see more fuel for the Imagination ;)
     
  8. ksk

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    Thanks!

    I made it to express "High‐handed female give *you* the reward".

    But I am not not familiar with English.
    I need more fix about the grammars and representations.
     
  9. booster

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    hi ksk, the boss dialogue is a great idea, thank you for that! i hope you're not offended that i allowed myself to pimp it. keep in mind that english isn't my native language either, so there are surely some mistakes left, but i'll fix them if someone points them out
     

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  10. Queen of Clubs

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    I've edited the 'forced' version, I'll do the 'self' one tonight.

    Same as before, the dialogue has been kept as close to the original as possible...just re-worded to make it sound natural.

    EDIT: Self version added, sorry I took so long! :-\
     

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  11. ksk

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    Thank you !

    Both great dialogue!

    Now,I'm struggling to make new dialogue..
    About "Deal with the devil"