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HOMESTUCK Dialogue: Willing/Excited Vriska

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by juxpo, Jan 7, 2013.

  1. juxpo

    juxpo Guest

    I've recently created a very shallow and basic Vriska dialogue that I only made as a way to test out how to "program" dialogue. I enjoyed the process and am now planning on making a full length scenario with Vriska. Once I've posted that one, I am open for requests.

    I've included the dialogue for Vriska as well as hairs from other Homestuck characters, which I did not create.

    I hope you all enjoy. 8)
     

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  2. dagelbagel

    dagelbagel Guest

    This is great stuff, thanks a lot!
     
  3. Pim_gd

    Pim_gd Swell Supporter

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    Wanted to download and fix dialogue with the DialogueChecker but I'm seeing some weird stuff in here. All the lines start with TT%3A and there are 8's instead of b's in the dialogue.
     
  4. f93

    f93 Casual Client

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    The 8s are intentional - notice the ;;;;) emotes in the text? Vriska has a thing about the number 8. Her dialogue in Homestuck is peppered with them. She talks like that both online and in-person. A Nepeta dialogue would involve her narrating everything in third-person.
    The TTs may be a joke about the chatlogs. If so, they should be change to AG (her chat handle is arachnidsGrip, TT is tentacleTherapist).
    If it bothers you, here are two slightly fixed-up versions of text:
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    Both have the TTs removed, one has the 8s switched for bs.
    Hope this helps.
     

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  5. Pim_gd

    Pim_gd Swell Supporter

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    Strange character.
    Anyway, the checker is picking up that the [pre-cum] lines should be [pre_cum] lines.
     
  6. hypocrite

    hypocrite Potential Patron

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    I thought it was pretty good.
     
  7. AaRL

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    If its one thing I always see with new dialogues around here. Its the lack of triggers within them... there are none. You should really take a look at the sticky Dialogue Guide at the top in the dialogue section for more details. You'd be surprised how a dialogue can change for the better with a few well placed mood changes and arm movements to say the least
     
  8. f93

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    I came across a whole bunch of Homestuck dialogues uploaded with a collection of hairs and character codes. None of them had any triggers added, but I could try knocking some together.
    Contents of folder: Jade (eager and naive), Nepeta (naive and an unfinished eager), Rose, Terezi and Vriska (what looks like the OP from this thread and an angry one).

    Edit: I whipped up a new Nepeta one from the unfinished dialogue, out of sheer boredom more than anything else. http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=4291.msg62364#msg62364
     
  9. f93

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    After fixing up those MLP dialogues, I figured I may as well try to complete some for something I actually know the characters from.

    EDIT: These dialogues/hairs have been moved to their own thread, because it's weird for me to be linking to this post in the middle of someone else's thread.