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ZERO's dialogue: Update 9/15

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by ZERO, Sep 11, 2011.

  1. ZERO

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    Sorry, I got bored of doing this, however I will leave these dialogues up for anyone that still wants them,


    If you like this or legend of zelda, please help second the zelda request topic if you haven't already. ;D


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  2. anonymous

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)

    I'll be honest, I've been very skeptical of the whole dialogue thing, and I don't really care for dialogues in general... but my sheer love for the Zelda series and Saria in general forced me to read your dialogue.

    It's not bad, but plenty grammar/punctuation errors, which is a boner killer for me.

    Regardless of whether or not I like dialogues or your dialogue, I approve and I applaud you.
     
  3. kanefora

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)

    Nice! Leliana should be next!!! =DD
     
  4. DevilJinKazama

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)

    Your Saria looks pretty good.

    I'm kinda looking forward to seeing what you can make of the rest.
    If I might be so bold: If you're doing Leliana, what about Morrigan?
    I'd absolutely LOVE to have my SDT Morrigan have some of her spirit.
     
  5. ZERO

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)


    I think I fixed some of the grammer mistakes, if you could point out the mistakes in a pm I could fix them right away and it would help with future dialogue. Not that you have to or anything, I mostly glad you even read my post! ;D Also to know your a Zelda fan is an extra win!
     
  6. anonymous

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 again (fixed grammer(Maybe) and some mistakes)

    My only big problem was that you used "your" when you meant "you're". I fixed some other things if you want to look it over, but I'll remove the attachment in a bit.

    Also, you said "chocking", when it's "choking"
     

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  7. ZERO

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 again (fixed grammer(Maybe) and some mistakes)


    Thanks Anon! I fixed it and added a new character.
     
  8. kanefora

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    Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/12 ZELDA! and some other things

    It would be good, if Leliana and Morrigan monologue will be based on their romances ^^

    Also Morrigan monologue should have place after events from Witch Hunt (You heard about that DLC - It allow Morrigan and Warden finally be together)

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    Also, you could write dialog for Merrill or Isabela from Dragon Age 2. Or even for Bethany ^^