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Zan's Dialogues (Advanced BE now up!).

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Zan, Jun 27, 2012.

  1. Zan

    Zan Potential Patron

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    Good day, fellow SDTers. I'm relatively new to the game and I've been playing around with a lot of the features and I especialy like how easy it is to create custom dialogue. Since a couple of my fetishes are not very well covered by existing dialogues, I figured I'd make some myself, and post them here in case anyone else shares the feeling.

    > First up is a scene I call "Chemistry Experiment" or "The Formula". There are various porn flicks fitting this theme and they've always done something for me, so I couldn't resist making my own SDT version.
    A chemistry professor and his student/lab assistant have been conducting experiments on a newly-discovered bio-chemical compound to discern its effects on the human body in certain mixtures. All is proceeding quite straightforward and uneventfully until:
    "Formula number LXIX has been administered to both myself and the Professor. Effects are both numerous and varied.
    Notable effects of the formula on myself seem to be: refined physical figure, heightened libido and onset of tremendous arousal marked by warm, almost burning (yet pleasant) sensation in oral and genital regions.
    The Professor seems similarly affected to myself. That, and... dramatic genital size increase. My own body seems to be reacting sympathetically to this change. Salivary and genital fluid production is increasing as I speak."

    (I use "Professor" as the dialogue name for this scene, and the lines are written with that in mind, but I've left the dialogue name as *YOU*, so feel free to pick whatever you want. It should still make sense.)

    Here is the code I personally use for the scene:
    charName:LabStudent;mood:Normal;bodyScale:1.045;arms:back;throatResist:50;hair:samus,1,1,1,1;iris:normal,56,100,137,1;breasts:63;skin:light;nose:normal;lipstick:0,197,64,109,0.459;eyeshadow:55,26,99,0;sclera:255,255,255,1;blush:196,80,77,0.157;mascara:0,0,0,1,0;nailpolish:255,89,149,1;eyebrow:180,142,61,1,89,67,51,1;hairhsl:85,0.29,0.16,0.98;skinhsl:0,1,1,1;hisskinhsl:0,0.88,1.17,1;bg:3;hisSkin:0;hisPenis:1,1.2,1.2;balls:1,1.3;hisTop:shirt,238,242,245,1;hisBottoms:slacks,27,29,29,1;hisFootwear:loafers,0,0,0,1;collar:tie,14,40,70,1,255,255,255,1;cuffs:none,0,0,0,1,79,0,0,1;gag:none,0,84,0,1;panties:briefs,255,167,188,1;top:bra,255,167,188,1;armwear:wristglove,255,255,196,1;bottoms:jeans,14,40,70,1,14,40,70,1;tops:shirt,255,255,255,0.816;legwear:pantyhose,215,186,162,0.784,255,255,255,0.8;legwearB:shortsock,255,255,255,0.8,0,0,0,1;footwear:school,63,118,162,1,200,203,203,1;eyewear:mari,0,0,0,1;headwear:none,255,0,0,1,0,84,0,1;tonguePiercing:none,6,0,60,1
    I use Kuroryuu's "Lab" background. I won't attach it without his permission, but it can be found in his BG thread.

    I would appreciate any constructive feedback as this is the first dialogue that I've posted, and I couldn't say I'm perfectly happy with it. Any advice on whether I should touch it up to make her more resistant to the formula and retain her beginning personality for longer, or whether I should just make her more submissive and "into it" from the beginning, would be useful. If I get conflicting opinions I can always make more than one version.


    > EDIT (28/06/12):
    The Friendzone scene is complete! I know I promised BE first, but this one was pretty much done and I didn't see the point in delaying until I'd finished that, so here it is.
    To clarify, this is not one of the friendzone revenge type scenes I've seen around. It's more of an alternate path where, when the topic comes up, one road leads to perma-friendzone, the other leads to... this.
    So, you've gone over to your friend's house while her family/roommate/housemates are out. You're just chilling out - maybe watching a film where a lewd scene causes some sexual tension, or just playing video-games and getting a little excited - it's up to you. But anyway, someone makes an ambiguously sexual comment, the topic turns tentatively to sexual relationships, you get your pent up feelings for her off your chest, and before you know it... well, you'll have to play the scene ;)
    (Just a quick disclaimer - I originally adapted this scene from rle68's "Pregnant Neighbor". I'm pretty sure I changed everything in the end, but just in case there's a bit of a line or two left over, please just take it as a sign of my appreciation of his work. XD I don't mean to steal.)


    >EDIT (21/07/12):
    BE is done! So get your finger on that "t" key my friends, because here we go. (I really wish there was a breast size increase wildcard, but as it is, you'll just have to expand as you see fit when prompted by the dialogue.)
    So, either you and your girlfriend decide to have sex for the first time, or a trusted friend of yours decides to reveal her secret to you, but either way, she explains that she has a very odd trait that only becomes apparent in the bedroom. Cum makes her breasts grow. Whether ingested or applied directly to her bosom, male ejaculate causes her to experience heightened sexual desire and dramatic swelling of her mammaries. Now this of course means the more she's had, the more she wants, and snowballing of hawtness ensues. Have fun~ :D
    Now, if anyone wants just plain BE without the gradual mindbreak or some other form of BE initiation, then let me know, because I can probably edit it fairly easily to suit your tastes.

    >EDIT (15/01/13):
    The Advanced BE dialogue is finished and working! This dialogue is designed to work with sby's Breast Expansion Plus mod, and only really makes sense if you do. It is also designed to work with the settings I use. Basically this means having it configured so that the breasts grow when the girl swallows cum or the guy cums in her throat, and having no (or very very slow) breast reduction over time. The numbers are also set up with the specific breast growth rates I use, but it shouldn't be too hard for anyone that has basic knowledge of the Advanced Dialogue code to alter the {"set":{"beastsize":"+__"}} (or the checks, I suppose) to whatever works better with their preferences. I will upload my settings for the mod to allow people to use the ones the dialogue is designed for if they wish. (The mod itself may be found here.)
    (Scenario is pretty much the same as the old BE dialogue, but it no longer implies that her breasts grow just from being cum on, as sby's mod does not support this.)

    Again, any constructive feedback very much appreciated.


    EDIT: 09/04/13
    I have attached an example folder of how to load the Advanced BE dialogue, and associated mod from sby. Simply unzip this folder, then paste the unzipped version into the Mods folder of the Loader. Then, open Mods.txt in the Mods folder and make a new line. Type "BEGirl:BEGirl" (minus ""s) and save. Open Loader.swf, and hover over the bottom left of the screen, here you will be able to load the BEGirl character from the sidebar. Enjoy.

    For the future, I plan to write a hypnosis-based scene, and perhaps another transformation scene. After that, I don't have anything in particular in mind, but if anyone has any requests, particularly for scenes pertaining to forms of transformation or mind control, I may take them into consideration. However, I am currently in the process of moving house, so forgive me if my updates are a quite slow (or nonexistent) for a few weeks.
     

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  2. кальмар

    кальмар Potential Patron

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Epic stuff! Keep it up!!!
     
  3. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Just checked over the "Friendzone" scene, and it was a lot more complete than I remembered, so I've finished it off and I'll upload it now.

    Thanks! Glad someone of the hundred-and-so downloads liked it enough to comment XD But hey, nobody hated it enough to either.

    EDIT: Noticed a minor grammatical mistake in "Friendzone". Reuploaded with it fixed. If anyone spots any more in either scene, please let me know. However, bear in mind that I'm English, so some spellings may be a little different (eg: "-izing" is usually "-ising" in British English).
     
  4. кальмар

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Friendzone" and"Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Oh man!... The wait is killing me. When are we going to get a chance to see that BE dialogue?
     
  5. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Friendzone" and"Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Sorry about the delay on the BE dialogue. I've been super busy these past couple of weeks and this has had to take a bit of a back seat. It will be done though, hopefully sometime this week.
     
  6. HentaiBob

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Friendzone" and"Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Definitely looking forward to it! :)
     
  7. loophole145

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Friendzone" and"Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Great work so far! Can't wait to see what you'll come out with next :)
     
  8. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues. ("Friendzone" and"Chemistry Experiment" up, BE coming soon)

    Thanks for the positive feedback guys!

    And just to prove how much I appreciate it, I've updated with the BE dialogue for your SDTing pleasure. ;)
     
  9. SpectralTime

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE now up).

    Huh... came by to say how much I enjoyed your other two, and found you'd updated! Anyway, I enjoy them, particularly since they're a welcome relief to the flood of incest and "domination" dialogues. I'm not knocking either, but they're just not my personal turn-on, if you know what I mean.

    Well... I'm not sure just how prevalent the mindbreak is, but on general principle I wouldn't mind a version without it. What do you mean by a different initiation?

    Also, nuts! I was hoping there WAS a wildcard to that effect.
     
  10. evilmoers

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE now up).

    I think - I like 'em #harharhar# !
     
  11. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE now up).

    @SpectralTime:
    Well thank you, sir. Glad I could pleasantly surprise you.

    I'm guessing you wrote that before playing through it, but you'll probably have seen the mindbreak is not incredibly prevalent. I just wanted the girl to get more into it as the scene progressed, so I set some Ahegao-triggering lines, and then some lines later in that she only says while in that mood. By a different initiation, I mean another method that triggers the growth, in place of contact with cum. Dunno what else would work with in the constraints of the game, but I'm open to suggestions if people prefer some other method. I was actually thinking of combining the BE and Formula scenes to have the BE be part of the formula's effects, if anyone wants to see that, for example.

    Yeah :/ Apparently messing with the dialogue mechanics is really tricky. I'd really like individual clothes removal to be wildcards too, but I don't think it's going to happen any time soon.


    @evilmoers: Thanks!
     
  12. JakTenba

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    First off these dialogues are great.
    Now I'm a story person I like to think about what happens before and after the porn stuff so I got to thinking in the BE dialogue how exactly do the irls breast shrink. Is it like you wait an hour or does she have to scrub herself vigorously or do they just stay that way
     
  13. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    *cough* *splutter* Oh my, I'm alive. Apparently moving house and starting at a new uni didn't kill me after all. So yeah, new semester, easier classes, and a lot more free time means I may actually have time to write some dialogue.

    Plus, I return from my absence to discover that Mr. sby has created the most phenomenal Loader mod I have ever seen, and one that caters very much to my tastes. So I may rework the BE, and even the Formula scenes to incorporate the use of that mod.

    Also, thanks JakTenba. I guess they'd just shrink gradually over time? Sby's mod even has an option for that. I prefer to think of it being slower than his default settings though. Sort of like a wake up in the morning and they'll be back to normal type of timescale. Scrubbing them away just sounds painful o.o
     
  14. zzaapp002

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    Welcome back!

    I really enjoyed your "formula" dialogue.
     
  15. Zan

    Zan Potential Patron

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    Thanks! And thanks again, I'm glad somebody likes it. I know all of them have 1k+ downloads, but I never know whether people actually like them once they download, heh.
     
  16. TotalSticks

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    I really enjoyed it, added a science-y background and someone's Abby Sciutto (NCIS) hair, and turned out to be quite enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
     
  17. dantethedarkprince

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    Excellent job 8). I still love the BE dialogue. Although the Chemistry Experiment goes rather well with my Abby mod ;D
     
  18. Zan

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    ...How did this never occur to me? I must try this out.
    See, this is why I love feedback. Not only do I know people like my stuff, but I get new ideas for how to use my own dialogues XD
     
  19. dantethedarkprince

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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    I don't know if you know or not, but the Abby hair in my mod zip is not the only one. TOlive made a better version, but I didn't know about it when I made mine ;D
     
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    Re: Zan's Dialogues (BE, Friendzone, Chemistry Experiment).

    EDIT: YOu may also want to (if you haven't already) take a look at this thread:

    http://superdeepthroat.ryonani.com/index.php?topic=3111.0

    Kona made a thread with all the advanced dialogue settings. It could be very useful.