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What is sexiest for you in a dialogue [Guide my work]

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by astounded, Nov 11, 2012.

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What is sexiest for you in a dialogue [Guide my work]

Poll closed Nov 18, 2012.
  1. Girl is eager from the start

    22.2%
  2. Girl is reluctant then becomes eager

    26.7%
  3. Girl is reluctant then becomes resistant/forced

    6.7%
  4. Girl is forced from the start and becomes eager

    26.7%
  5. Girl is forced the whole way through

    17.8%
  1. astounded

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  2. cwking420

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    Do I have to pick just one? :'(
     
  3. booster

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    "sexiEST"
     
  4. astounded

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    Everything on the menu looks good. It isn't a matter of only getting one thing, just of the ordering of the dishes ;D
     
  5. Kyro

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    Depends... Therefore I no click any.

    Any of them could be sexist, it just depends on how you look at it. >.>
    (doh... how did i miss the ''e''... oh well, I'll leave it here anyway)

    Hmm, well I don't see any single one more sexy than the other... and don't prefer one over the other. >.>
     
  6. Adrien

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    I dont clearly understand the difference between 3 and 5, so i voted 3.

    I prefer when the girl is humiliated and forced, not because im a bastard, but because i dont think a girl who become eager is very realistic
     
  7. astounded

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    To me, reluctant means she is hesitant/disinclined. E.g. "I'm not sure about this"... So by-
    #3 I mean going from "I'm not sure about this" to "hell no" by the end of the dialogue.
    #5 starts with "hell no" and "HELL NO".
     
  8. Adrien

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    So, both are hot
     
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    Can I be difficult and write-in "Is very eager but 'acts' reluctant"? :D
     
  10. AaRL

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    I went "Girl is reluctant then becomes eager"

    Like introducing the to something she hasn't tried before, then in the end, shes begging you for more.
     
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    They can all be sexy. The key is using it well and crafting a sexy and compelling dialogue. It doesn't have to be that compelling to be good, but really what matters is the effort and creativity. It works no matter how you start it out; as long as you begin and end strong.
     
  12. astounded

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    I'll take that as an out of band vote. Thanks
     
  13. Jazzsession

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    I totally chose 5 for reasons Im scared of....
    ...but...

    I chose 2 if on a train, and maybe 4 if its 24 hours past the sabbath on a hot july morning. And what are the qualifications of 1? Does she have experience? Can we discuss age?

    But definitely 5.

    "No, no , FML![ADD_TEARS] БББББББББББББ I won't! [CLENCH_TEETH]"{"mood":"Angry"}

    >:3
     
  14. astounded

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    LOL
    I'd love to see a dialogue from you with lots of #5, unless it is on a train, or on a hot Monday.
     
  15. Jazzsession

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    I'll get to it then.


    It may still involve a train just more of the human trafficking type than the happy little engine/green egg type.