1. This site uses cookies. By continuing to use this site, you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Learn More.

Succubu (German)

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Wathayus, Nov 27, 2011.

  1. Wathayus

    Wathayus Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2011
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    Da Sieht man mal wieder wie Tüchtig die Deutschen sind oder? ;D

    Hier ein Dialogue über einen Beschwörer und seinen Dämon.
     

    Attached Files:

  2. kysadhuras79

    kysadhuras79 Avid Affiliate

    Joined:
    Sep 28, 2011
    Messages:
    224
    Likes Received:
    0
    ohne fleish kein preish
     
  3. King Borgy

    King Borgy Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 27, 2011
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    I've put it into translator and it seems pretty much awesome, any chance of translating it into EN?
     
  4. recreation

    recreation Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2011
    Messages:
    33
    Likes Received:
    0
    legst dich ja ganz schön ins zeug, sind aber relativ viele schreibfehler drin, der dialog gefällt mir aber trotzdem recht gut ;)
    hab ich deine erlaubnis das ganze zu übersetzen? irgendwie denk ich englisch passt besser zu deinem dialog^^"

    @King Borgy: I'm gonna try my best if i get permission from Wathayus
     
  5. RajasGrime

    RajasGrime Avid Affiliate

    Joined:
    May 10, 2011
    Messages:
    963
    Likes Received:
    18
    This... needs a mod.
     
  6. Wathayus

    Wathayus Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2011
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    Selbstverständlich alle meine Dialoge dürfen übersetzt verändert und Sonst noch was werden,
    Entschuldigt bitte wenn da Fehler drin sind das sind meine ersten Dialoge ^^
     
  7. Wathayus

    Wathayus Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2011
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    I promise i work on Translation But my English is not the best but i work for it.
     
  8. Wathayus

    Wathayus Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2011
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    Okay here it is.
    The English text.
     

    Attached Files:

  9. Wathayus

    Wathayus Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2011
    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    @ recreation


    Sind da echt noch Rechtschreib Fehler drin ich hab das schon durch ein Rechtschreib Programm laufen lassen aber ich sehs mir nochmal an.

    Sicher mit meinen texten darf alles gemacht werden.
    Ich denke die Englische Version Solltest du dir nochmal ansehen, weil mein Englisch milde gesagt schlecht ist ;D
     
  10. TDream

    TDream Avid Affiliate

    Joined:
    Jun 23, 2011
    Messages:
    714
    Likes Received:
    0
    Hier ein gut gemeinter rat von mir Modify/änder deinen beitrag anstatt hier doppelt zu posten..

    but the dialogue is good I like it thx.
     
  11. Victhedic

    Victhedic Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2011
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    I cleaned up the translation for my own use, if anyone wants me to share.
     
  12. King Borgy

    King Borgy Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Nov 27, 2011
    Messages:
    2
    Likes Received:
    0
    'course we want it, up it now!
     
  13. Victhedic

    Victhedic Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2011
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    I changed a few things here and there, but most of the stuff is the same. Just added punctuation and cleaned up the bad Engrish. Is it still Engrish if the original language was German instead of Japanese? Gerlish? Engman? Whatever.

    Might have missed one or two things, but feel free to fix it yourself :p
     

    Attached Files:

  14. booster

    booster Avid Affiliate

    Joined:
    Sep 19, 2011
    Messages:
    332
    Likes Received:
    1
    we germans call it "denglisch" or "denglish" --> deutsch and english

    you know, we don't live in germania but in deutschland. germania was about 2000 years ago ^^
     
  15. Victhedic

    Victhedic Potential Patron

    Joined:
    Dec 1, 2011
    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    It completely slipped my mind, actually. I blame the booze. :v
     
  16. Pim_gd

    Pim_gd Swell Supporter

    Joined:
    Jan 25, 2013
    Messages:
    717
    Likes Received:
    44
    Fixed some typo's in English version of the dialogue.
     

    Attached Files: