A few corrections are needed:
-Two intro lines are disabled with the "-" in front of them.
--charName:"Squall" line is displayed as an actual dialogue line. That requires a "-" in front.
---The code for clearing other dialogue when this one is loaded is:
DEFAULT:
all:"CLEAR"
That doesn't go in the finish: line
----The wake line is missing the first " before the word What
wake:... What happened? I've been using my GF too much."
Its a fairly decent dialogue. I'm not making these notes to bash you, but to help you and others out. I recommend you read up at this thread: http://superdeepthroat.undertow.club/index.php?topic=1640.0 to help you out in the future or ask other dialogue creators for advice.
That thread is finally being updated with more techniques and tips. Sadly its creator doesn't come around much anymore...
