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Nude and Scared

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Crivers, Jul 27, 2016.

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  1. Crivers

    Crivers Potential Patron

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    Watching TV the other day I got an idea for a dialog. It's not too fancy.
    I've tested it in several loaders Samoth's and WeeWillie's.
    Pick a beach or nature background, I like FF Beach in WeeWillie's bundle.
    Bodies are defined in the dialog, penis size, etc... Make sure you set a Dialog name as she will reference you multiple times. Restarts trigger transitions but that is a little wonky sometimes. I haven't added any random dialog after the last transition. If there is any interest I could carry the story a little further.

    It's only the second one I've ever made. Let me know what you think.

    Based on a popular TV survival show. The man in this episode finds a plentiful source of food the the woman is allergic to it. A compromise is found and he becomes her food source, at first. The food source starts to effect him in ways you'll just have to find out. Plot progression is short, about 3 finishes. Some may find it a little disturbing at the end.
     

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  2. Hank East

    Hank East Swell Supporter

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    It would help if you included a description of the dialogue in the thread. Doesn't have to be anything too fancy.
     
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  3. Slingerbult

    Slingerbult Casual Client Content Creator

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    Man, I'll never look at oysters the same way again. Props for originality!
     
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  4. Crivers

    Crivers Potential Patron

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    Sorry, I couldn't figure out how to do that Spoiler button thing everyone else does.
     
  5. fleet

    fleet Club Regular Staff Member Moderator

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    When you make a post, you should notice a line of icons above the area where you enter text.
    One of the icons is a plus sign (+). If you click on it, a drop down menu will appear. Spoiler is one of the items in that drop down menu.
     
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  6. Crivers

    Crivers Potential Patron

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    Thanks, got it and updated. If I decide to do more dialogs I'll turn this into one of those "My Dialog" posts.
     
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    yolo23 Potential Patron

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    Hey man, i don't now if it's me but personally i'm blocked to the first so help would be good ;)
     
  8. heppers

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    Some of the dialog doesn't display for me :(
     
  9. tmb

    tmb Vivacious Visitor

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    Running the dialogue through Pim_gd's DialogueChecker 3.05 (DialogueChecker (Latest version: V3.05, 4 September 2016)) reports no error but that it requires Pim_gd's DialogueActions mod (Pim_gd's Mods - DialogueActions v4.05 (4 Sep 2016)).

    Dialogue was checked in 41 ms with v3.05 of the DialogueChecker.

    Your dialogue looks clean to me. Have you used a spellchecker for your dialogue?

    What about loading the dialogue ingame, then going to the dialogue log? Is that clean of any errors?

    By the way, your dialogue makes use of the following dialogue mods:

    VariableArithmetic by Pimgd, through the use of VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_girlcharone - trigger, VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_girlchartwo - trigger, VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_guycharone - trigger, VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_girlcharthree - trigger, VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_guychartwo - trigger, VA_SET_VARIABLEBYNAME_da.charcode.load_guycharthree - trigger.



    DialogueActions v2.04 by gollum/Pimgd, through the use of RESET_RESIST - trigger, da.charcode.load - variable.



    DialogueActions by gollum/Pimgd, through the use of start - linename, HIDE_PENIS - trigger, HIDE_HIM - trigger, AUTO_SELF - trigger, PULL_OFF - trigger, AUTO_OFF - trigger, CLEAN_ALL - trigger, END_FLASH - trigger, AUTO_NORMAL - trigger, SHOW_HIM - trigger, SHOW_PENIS - trigger.



    VariableArithmetic has been integrated in DialogueActions from DialogueActions v2.00+ onward.

    Don't forget to mention these dependencies when you release your dialogue!

    Hope this helps. :)
     
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