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BlackBird's Dialogues (MLP~UPDATED:6/28)

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by BlackBird, Jun 22, 2015.

  1. BlackBird

    BlackBird Potential Patron

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    So I've been on these forums on and off for awhile. Recently got back into it and remembered I wanted to try to get into dialogue making.

    Dialogues:

    View attachment Pinkie's out of frosting v2.txt
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    You've spent a day with Pinkie Pie and she takes you back to Sugarcube corner for some cupcakes. She out of frosting though and yeah you get what comes next basically.
    The dialogue does have some dialogue actions but besides that I don't think you'll need anything else.
    There's a little bit of intro dialogue that sets up the scene a bit.
    Also her arms are usually on his legs but if you progress through they move around. If you want to move them manually pulling her up makes her put them behind her back. Pulling her down makes her put them on her legs.

    ***Fixed all the minor problems Pim_gd posted about. Also added an option to pull her up during the start to skip the intro and get right to business. After that the pull up/down functions work as stated above.

    View attachment Cadence's Wedding Day.txt
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    This is based in a semi-non-canon Equestria.
    It is Princess Cadence's wedding day and she's having some time alone in her Canterlot Royal Suite. In this world Queen Chrysalis is impersonating Princess Celestia but still controlling Shining Armor. A changeling enters the Royal Suite to break Princess Cadence.
    -How to Play-
    Basically he is holding Cadence the entire time. So whenever he is no longer holding her than your mouse should be on the left to allow dialogue to occur. All her hand motions are controlled by the dialogue as well.

    Intro:
    Just introduction lines that set up the story. Can be skipped by pulling her up.

    Part 1:
    She's angry. Upon first deepthroat you will ejaculate immediately and once she pulls off I highly recommend moving the mouse over to the left to let the dialogue happen.

    Part 2:
    She's still angry. Don't bother trying to make her passout here. One ejaculation will lead to the next part. Again once his hand is off of her move the mouse left and let the dialogue occur.

    Part 3:
    She'll be normal mood now. You can use her how you like but to advance you'll have to make her passout. Once she wakes up then let the dialogue happen.

    Part 4:
    She'll be ahegoa mood. Use her how you like. Pulling her up puts her arms behind her back. Pulling her down goes into face fuck style. In order to advance you have to make her passout again.

    Part 5:
    She'll be happy mood. Success! You broken Princess Cadence. Use her as you please! Pulling her up puts her arms behind her back and also puts her in normal style. Pulling her down is face fuck style again. Having her lick the penis will put her in handjob mode.


    Dialogues I plan to work on(in no particular order):
    • Applejack
    • Molestia

    ***I plan to eventually work on my version of Molestia. I also plan to continue this semi-non-canon world storyline of the changeling breaking ponies. Seeing as I just did Cadence I could branch out to the Mane 6 as sequels or do Celestia as a prequel.

    Any feedback is appreciated! Enjoy~
     
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  2. Lizoran

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    Re: BlackBird's Dialogue(s) (MLP, eventually more?)

    gotta say, it's pretty good, even more so for a first try.
    Also any plans on doing Molestia (Celestia)?
     
  3. BlackBird

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    Re: BlackBird's Dialogue(s) (MLP, eventually more?)

    Thanks, yeah when I get into something I kind of want to do it as best as I can.
    To be honest I never tried the Molestia dialogue...that is until now...

    Yeah I think I'll consider it haha. At first I thought to do it as more of him dominating her, but I kind of like the original formula of her ordering him a bit more.
     
  4. Pim_gd

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    Re: BlackBird's Dialogue(s) (MLP, eventually more?)

    You should consider fixing your name insertions (the Dialogue Checker calls them variable substitutions).

    Here's an example:

    Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers.
    Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
    Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 32, col 55 near "(...) you ? (...)"
    Line 32: intro6:"[NORMAL_MOOD][LOOK_UP]Is there anything I can do to make it up to you *YOU*? [intro7]"
    Stripped Line 32: intro6:"Is there anything I can do to make it up to you ? "

    A fix:

    Line 32: intro6:"[NORMAL_MOOD][LOOK_UP]Is there anything I can do to make it up to you* YOU*? [intro7]"

    there's another 48 like this one.
     
  5. BlackBird

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    Re: BlackBird's Dialogue(s) (MLP, eventually more?)

    Ah thanks for the explanation.
    I used your checker and fixed any major issues and was a little confused about those issues.
    I'll def fix it and do it like that from now on.
     
  6. BlackBird

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    Re: BlackBird's Dialogue(s) (MLP, eventually more?)

    Update!

    Fixed "Pinkie's out of frosting" as well as added a skipping mechanic for the intro

    Also added a new dialogue. "Cadence's Wedding Day"
    Enjoy~
     
  7. Lizoran

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    Damn :o, that cadence dialogue was great, im definitely looking forward to the other ones.
    Great work man
    Edit: Also could you tell me what mods the dress is made out of
     
  8. BlackBird

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    Thanks, glad you enjoyed it =P

    The dress and veil are from Kir's thread: http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=888.msg9479#msg9479
    The stockings and heels are just vanilla.
     
  9. blauer

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    Please do -- this latest dialogue was fantastic, I'd love to see more in the same style.
     
  10. Nameless

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    Cadence's Wedding Day was phenomenal! It would be truly amazing to see versions with the mane 6.
     
  11. michealdark

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    I'm having trouble with "Cadence's Wedding Day". For some reason, none of the dialog is showing up in the boxes
     
  12. Nameless

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    Make sure in the Options tab, in the 3rd column that Dialogue is checked. You might also have to remove her gag, some Dialogues don't work with it on.

    BTW, BlackBird any progress or new dialogues in the works?
     
  13. michealdark

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    Okay, I tried all that and still nothing. Like the boxes will appear for dialog, but they'll be completely blank. I tried it on both the site and with the loader and still nothing
     
  14. michealdark

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    Okay, I got it the Wedding dialog to work now. I went in and found this one weird character appearing in certain spots. Deleting all instances of it seems to have worked. And now that I've experienced it, it was AWESOME! Thank you Blackbird for this! I hope you come back with versions for Luna and the Mane Six
     
  15. BlackBird

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    Hey y'all

    Been MIA for awhile. Busy with school and other games but I do want to and plan to come back to this and work on that semi-non-canon world story line I was talking about.
    Winter break is very soon so hopefully I'll have the time and motivation to continue[​IMG] on.
    Before my sudden hiatus I was working on[​IMG] the next episode entitled: Break the Rainbow
    I first like to set up scenes and the character before writing any dialogue so think of it as a small teaser;
    Break the Rainbow.png
    Hope I can get to it soon.

    Happy Holidays,

    ~BlackBird

    PS: I made that RD character a long time ago and I believe I had trouble finding her hair, at least one I liked enough and believed I settled on the one in the screenshot. So if there are others out there that y'all can post that'd be much appreciated (I've been gone awhile so I can't recall which I tried, also the new site is new to me but so far it's pretty nice)
     
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  16. michealdark

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    Hmm, can't wait to see this. I've been wanting to break RD in-game for awhile now
     
  17. Firestorm5

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    I must know where the pinkie SWF clothing mods are from