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Need Help to enhance my Dialogue

Discussion in 'Help' started by Darvid, Jul 9, 2014.

  1. Darvid

    Darvid Potential Patron

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    Hello guys.

    The problem I have with my dialogue is, that my english isn't very good. So the grammar sucks and everything seems a bit "monotonously"/boring... But I'm very happy with the idea so I would be veryyy thankful if some of you could help me a bit with this and upload the corrected/upgraded dialogue here. :)
    btw: I choose the dialogue "Throat a snowman" (wich i found in this forum) as the basis, because it fits very good.(thanks for uploading)

    Ok here is the story behind this dialogue:
    An innocent teen girl called Sasha found a magic book 2 weeks ago. She is very interested of having sex with men or give them a blowjob. But she is very shy so this is more or less impossible to do. So when she was alone in her room, she tried to summon a creature from this book to try a few little things with it. For her surprise it did really work and so she did this since 2 weeks every day.
    And there this dialogue continues.

    I downloaded a few male mods here for this like Blanca, Humanite, Gorilla, The Beast, werewolf.(thanks for uploading)

    I hope there is nothing i forgot to say.

    Greets from austria
     

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  2. Darvid

    Darvid Potential Patron

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    I will send this dialogue to the "dialogue"-Category. I am too impatient to wait for some help. :P
    But would be still nice if you could send me an upgraded dialogue there. thx