Dialogue was checked in 87 ms with v3.07 of the DialogueChecker.
I found 69 issue(s) with your dialogue, of which 0 were severe, 28 were major issues, and 41 were minor issues.
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 5. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 5: intro:"[ARMS_HIS_LEGS] Ah! A ghost! What the H*ll are you doing?![intro1]"{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 5, col 5 near "intro:" Ah! (...)"
Line 5: intro:"[ARMS_HIS_LEGS] Ah! A ghost! What the H*ll are you doing?![intro1]"{"style":"Him"}
Stripped Line 5: intro:" Ah! A ghost! What the H*ll are you doing?![intro1]"*{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 6, col 6 near "intro1:" Shh, (...)"
Line 6: intro1:"[ARMS_HIS_LEGS] Shh, please calm down. Don't go. Let me explain myself.[intro2]"
Stripped Line 6: intro1:" Shh, please calm down. Don't go. Let me explain myself."
Line Usage - Major: Line 6 is unused!
Line 6: intro1:"[ARMS_HIS_LEGS] Shh, please calm down. Don't go. Let me explain myself.[intro2]"
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 13. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 13: intro8:"Maybe you can suck my d*ck. I need to go pee anyway from being so scared, and I can't when I'm erect.[intro9]"{"style":"Him"}
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("ck. I need to go pee anyway from being so scared, and I can't when I'm erect.[intro9]"") in a variable insertion (*ck. I need to go pee anyway from being so scared, and I can't when I'm erect.[intro9]"*) on line 13, col -1, near "Can't create snippet - parsing error".
Line 13: intro8:"Maybe you can suck my d*ck. I need to go pee anyway from being so scared, and I can't when I'm erect.[intro9]"{"style":"Him"}
Line Usage - Major: Line 14 is unused!
Line 14: intro9:"Okay. Let's go."
Line Usage - Major: Line 25 is unused!
Line 25: general2:"I'm starting to feel weird as I'm sucking him. At the same time, it feels good. Is this what it means to feel arroused?"{"style":"Thought"}
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 26. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 26: general3:"Wow, this is the best h*ad I've gotten in my life. Are you sure you've never done this before?"{"style":"Him"}
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("ad I've gotten in my life. Are you sure you've never done this before?"") in a variable insertion (*ad I've gotten in my life. Are you sure you've never done this before?"*) on line 26, col -1, near "Can't create snippet - parsing error".
Line 26: general3:"Wow, this is the best h*ad I've gotten in my life. Are you sure you've never done this before?"{"style":"Him"}
Line Usage - Major: Line 26 is unused!
Line 26: general3:"Wow, this is the best h*ad I've gotten in my life. Are you sure you've never done this before?"{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 27, col 8 near "general4:" I-If (...)"
Line 27: general4:"[LOOK_UP] I-If you're wondering, I did read some romance stories on stuff like this while waiting for you."
Stripped Line 27: general4:" I-If you're wondering, I did read some romance stories on stuff like this while waiting for you."
Line Usage - Major: Line 27 is unused!
Line 27: general4:"[LOOK_UP] I-If you're wondering, I did read some romance stories on stuff like this while waiting for you."
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of double quotes was found on line 28. This could indicate a coding error.
The line contains at least one single quote - did you perhaps type a single quote where you should have used a double quote?
Line 28: general5:"[ARMS_HAND_JOB] I'm gonna try using my hands as well, if you don't mind?
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 28, col 8 near "general5:" I'm (...)"
Line 28: general5:"[ARMS_HAND_JOB] I'm gonna try using my hands as well, if you don't mind?
Stripped Line 28: general5:" I'm gonna try using my hands as well, if you don't mind?
Line Usage - Major: Line 28 is unused!
Line 28: general5:"[ARMS_HAND_JOB] I'm gonna try using my hands as well, if you don't mind?
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 32, col 8 near "first_dt:" And (...)"
Line 32: first_dt:"[HAPPY_MOOD] And on my first time?! Well, time to get started."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 32: first_dt:" And on my first time?! Well, time to get started."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 40, col 11 near "vigourous:" Could (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 40: vigourous:"[COUGH] [COUGH] Could you slow down a bit? I'm new to this after all."
Stripped Line 40: vigourous:" Could you slow down a bit? I'm new to this after all."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 40, col 9 near "vigourous:" (...)"
Line 40: vigourous:"[COUGH] [COUGH] Could you slow down a bit? I'm new to this after all."
Stripped Line 40: vigourous:" Could you slow down a bit? I'm new to this after all."
Line Usage - Major: Line 40 is unused!
Line 40: vigourous:"[COUGH] [COUGH] Could you slow down a bit? I'm new to this after all."
Line Usage - Major: Line 41 is unused!
Line 41: vigourous:"Judging by your vigor, I must be doing a really good job for a newbie."
Line Usage - Major: Line 42 is unused!
Line 42: vigourous:"You're a really fast learner. I'm impressed. Honestly."{"style":"Him"}
Line Usage - Major: Line 43 is unused!
Line 43: vigourous:"What's this feeling between my legs? My underwear is wet now. Does this mean I'm starting to like this?"{"style":"Thought"}
Line Usage - Major: Line 44 is unused!
Line 44: vigourous:"This is actually becoming pretty fun to do. Could you come back next time?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 45, col 9 near "vigourous:" Come (...)"
Line 45: vigourous:"[HAPPY_MOOD] Come back next time, please. I've become addicted to this."
Stripped Line 45: vigourous:" Come back next time, please. I've become addicted to this."
Line Usage - Major: Line 45 is unused!
Line 45: vigourous:"[HAPPY_MOOD] Come back next time, please. I've become addicted to this."
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of double quotes was found on line 47. This could indicate a coding error.
The line contains at least one single quote - did you perhaps type a single quote where you should have used a double quote?
Line 47: wake:"Awww. I'm still a ghost. I thought I died and came back to life.
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 48. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 48: wake:"In a way, being a ghost in this world, with your p*nis especially, is heaven for me. Please, don't go. I'm begging you."
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("nis especially, is heaven for me. Please, don't go. I'm begging you."") in a variable insertion (*nis especially, is heaven for me. Please, don't go. I'm begging you."*) on line 48, col -1, near "Can't create snippet - parsing error".
Line 48: wake:"In a way, being a ghost in this world, with your p*nis especially, is heaven for me. Please, don't go. I'm begging you."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 49, col 6 near "wake:" This (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 49: wake:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] This is it. This is my heaven."
Stripped Line 49: wake:" This is it. This is my heaven."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 49, col 4 near "wake:" (...)"
Line 49: wake:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] This is it. This is my heaven."
Stripped Line 49: wake:" This is it. This is my heaven."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 50, col 4 near "wake:" Choke (...)"
Line 50: wake:"[ANGRY_MOOD] Choke me again, you beast of a man-[NORMAL_MOOD] whoa there, what was that?"
Stripped Line 50: wake:" Choke me again, you beast of a man- whoa there, what was that?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 52, col 10 near "lick_penis:" So (...)"
Line 52: lick_penis:"[LOOK_UP] So this how you first start right."
Stripped Line 52: lick_penis:" So this how you first start right."
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 53, col 32 near "(...) like licking (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 53: lick_penis:"Licking this is like licking a salty lollipop that never melts in your mouth. This is so addicting."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 57, col 7 near "pre_cum:" So (...)"
Line 57: pre_cum:"[LOOK_DOWN] So this is what comes out before it releases?"
Stripped Line 57: pre_cum:" So this is what comes out before it releases?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 60, col 7 near "pre_cum:" I (...)"
Line 60: pre_cum:"[ARMS_HAND_JOB] I never read about this. What does it mean when it's throbbing?"
Stripped Line 60: pre_cum:" I never read about this. What does it mean when it's throbbing?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 67, col 11 near "cum_on_face:" Gosh, (...)"
Line 67: cum_on_face:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] Gosh, this feels amazing. I don't think I can get enough of him now, especially with it all on my face."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 67: cum_on_face:" Gosh, this feels amazing. I don't think I can get enough of him now, especially with it all on my face."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 70, col 12 near "cum_in_mouth:" This (...)"
Line 70: cum_in_mouth:"[SWALLOW] This is the most sustenance I've had since I died. Thank you"
Stripped Line 70: cum_in_mouth:" This is the most sustenance I've had since I died. Thank you"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 74, col 12 near "cum_in_mouth:" I (...)"
Line 74: cum_in_mouth:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] I really want him to fill my mouth again. This feels so good."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 74: cum_in_mouth:" I really want him to fill my mouth again. This feels so good."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 76, col 13 near "cum_in_throat:" The (...)"
Line 76: cum_in_throat:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] The feeling of this in my stomach and throat is addicting to me now."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 76: cum_in_throat:" The feeling of this in my stomach and throat is addicting to me now."{"style":"Thought"}
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 79. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 79: cum_in_throat:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] She looks so adorable and hot with with my c*ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 79, col 13 near "cum_in_throat:" She (...)"
Line 79: cum_in_throat:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] She looks so adorable and hot with with my c*ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 79: cum_in_throat:" She looks so adorable and hot with with my c*ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."*{"style":"Thought"}
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."") in a variable insertion (*ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."*) on line 79, col -1, near "Can't create snippet - parsing error".
Line 79: cum_in_throat:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] She looks so adorable and hot with with my c*ck shooting down her throat. It's driving me over the edge."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 81, col 10 near "cum_in_eye:" Hey! (...)"
Line 81: cum_in_eye:"[ANGRY_MOOD] Hey! Just because I'm a ghost, it doesn't mean nothing can get in my eye."
Stripped Line 81: cum_in_eye:" Hey! Just because I'm a ghost, it doesn't mean nothing can get in my eye."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 82, col 10 near "cum_in_eye:" Ow! (...)"
Line 82: cum_in_eye:"[ANGRY_MOOD] Ow! That burns."
Stripped Line 82: cum_in_eye:" Ow! That burns."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 83, col 10 near "cum_in_eye:" Please (...)"
Line 83: cum_in_eye:"[ANGRY_MOOD] Please have better aim next time, or else I might actually haunt you."
Stripped Line 83: cum_in_eye:" Please have better aim next time, or else I might actually haunt you."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 84, col 10 near "cum_in_eye:" I'm (...)"
Line 84: cum_in_eye:"[ANGRY_MOOD] I'm not a masochist, you know. E-Even if I do read some books about that stuff. Not that I fantasize about them or anything."
Stripped Line 84: cum_in_eye:" I'm not a masochist, you know. E-Even if I do read some books about that stuff. Not that I fantasize about them or anything."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 87, col 7 near "swallow:" Wow! (...)"
Line 87: swallow:"[HAPPY_MOOD] Wow! That was actually delicious and refreshing."
Stripped Line 87: swallow:" Wow! That was actually delicious and refreshing."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 110, col 10 near "pull_off:" Amazing. (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 110: pull_off:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [COUGH] Amazing. He's really starting to feel great my mouth and throat."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 110: pull_off:" Amazing. He's really starting to feel great my mouth and throat."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 110, col 8 near "pull_off:" (...)"
Line 110: pull_off:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [COUGH] Amazing. He's really starting to feel great my mouth and throat."{"style":"Thought"}
Stripped Line 110: pull_off:" Amazing. He's really starting to feel great my mouth and throat."{"style":"Thought"}
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 111. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 111: pull_off:"D*nm, she feels great. I didn't think ghosts would be this good."{"style":"Thought"}
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("nm, she feels great. I didn't think ghosts would be this good."") in a variable insertion (*nm, she feels great. I didn't think ghosts would be this good."*) on line 111, col -1, near "Can't create snippet - parsing error".
Line 111: pull_off:"D*nm, she feels great. I didn't think ghosts would be this good."{"style":"Thought"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 112, col 10 near "pull_off:" If (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 112: pull_off:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] If you'd like, I can take you to my home to continue this. To be honest, seeing you take me down your throat is both adorable and extremely hot."{"style":"Him"}
Stripped Line 112: pull_off:" If you'd like, I can take you to my home to continue this. To be honest, seeing you take me down your throat is both adorable and extremely hot."{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 112, col 8 near "pull_off:" (...)"
Line 112: pull_off:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] If you'd like, I can take you to my home to continue this. To be honest, seeing you take me down your throat is both adorable and extremely hot."{"style":"Him"}
Stripped Line 112: pull_off:" If you'd like, I can take you to my home to continue this. To be honest, seeing you take me down your throat is both adorable and extremely hot."{"style":"Him"}
Syntax - Major: An uneven amount of asterisks was found on line 114. This could indicate a coding error.
Line 114: held:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] Do that again! Stuff that huge c*ck down my throat again you magnificent monster!"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 114, col 6 near "held:" Do (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 114: held:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] Do that again! Stuff that huge c*ck down my throat again you magnificent monster!"
Stripped Line 114: held:" Do that again! Stuff that huge c*ck down my throat again you magnificent monster!"*
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 114, col 4 near "held:" (...)"
Line 114: held:"[AHEGAO_MOOD] [DROOL] Do that again! Stuff that huge c*ck down my throat again you magnificent monster!"
Stripped Line 114: held:" Do that again! Stuff that huge c*ck down my throat again you magnificent monster!"*
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 116, col 4 near "held:" Wait. (...)"
Line 116: held:"[COUGH] Wait. Give me a moment to breathe."
Stripped Line 116: held:" Wait. Give me a moment to breathe."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 119, col 5 near "drool:" Sorry. (...)"
Line 119: drool:"[DROOL] Sorry. It was too much for me to swallow."
Stripped Line 119: drool:" Sorry. It was too much for me to swallow."
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 120, col 28 near "(...) one will (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 120: drool:"[DROOL] I hope no one will collect this and think it's ectoplasm."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 121, col 7 near "drool:" I (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 121: drool:"[DROOL] [AHEGAO_MOOD] I have to admit. Seeing you drool like that is really driving me over the edge."{"style":"Him"}
Stripped Line 121: drool:" I have to admit. Seeing you drool like that is really driving me over the edge."{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 121, col 5 near "drool:" (...)"
Line 121: drool:"[DROOL] [AHEGAO_MOOD] I have to admit. Seeing you drool like that is really driving me over the edge."{"style":"Him"}
Stripped Line 121: drool:" I have to admit. Seeing you drool like that is really driving me over the edge."{"style":"Him"}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 122, col 5 near "drool:" You (...)"
Line 122: drool:"[DROOL] You must have been holding in a lot."
Stripped Line 122: drool:" You must have been holding in a lot."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Double space on line 128, col 77 near "(...) ghost? Oh (...)"
You can disable this check manually by putting #DialogueChecker-NoDoubleSpace# at the top of your dialogue if you prefer to keep double spaces without the checker complaining about them.
Line 128: finish3:"[LOOK_UP] How can you still be erect after all this, especially with a ghost? [LOOK_DOWN] Oh well. I guess I'll continue."
Stripped Line 128: finish3:" How can you still be erect after all this, especially with a ghost? Oh well. I guess I'll continue."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers:
Space at start of new line on line 128, col 7 near "finish3:" How (...)"
Line 128: finish3:"[LOOK_UP] How can you still be erect after all this, especially with a ghost? [LOOK_DOWN] Oh well. I guess I'll continue."
Stripped Line 128: finish3:" How can you still be erect after all this, especially with a ghost? Oh well. I guess I'll continue."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before exclamation mark) on line 130, col 9 near "finish5:" ! (...)"
Line 130: finish5:"[ANGRY_MOOD][LOOK_UP][ARMS_HIS_LEGS][TAP_HANDS] *YOU*! Can we please go to your home before morning arrives? I want to do more, and sucking you isn't enough for me anymore."
Stripped Line 130: finish5:" ! Can we please go to your home before morning arrives? I want to do more, and sucking you isn't enough for me anymore."
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters and triggers.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space at start of new line on line 130, col 7 near "finish5:" ! (...)"
Line 130: finish5:"[ANGRY_MOOD][LOOK_UP][ARMS_HIS_LEGS][TAP_HANDS] *YOU*! Can we please go to your home before morning arrives? I want to do more, and sucking you isn't enough for me anymore."
Stripped Line 130: finish5:" ! Can we please go to your home before morning arrives? I want to do more, and sucking you isn't enough for me anymore."
Variables - Major: Undeclared variable ("sigh") in a variable insertion (*sigh*) on line 132, col 22, near "finish7:"[NORMAL_MOOD]*sigh* (...)".
Line 132: finish7:"[NORMAL_MOOD]*sigh* all right, all right. I guess I'll keep sucking and wait.[ARMS_LOOSE] Boys will be boys..."
Line Usage - Major: A trigger ([f8]) on line 133 refers to a non-existing line.
There is at least one line (Line 134) that seems to be the line this trigger is looking for, but it didn't parse correctly.
Please refer to the issues found for that line to fix the problem.
Referenced Line (Line 134): f8:[NORMAL_MOOD] To be honest, you really have awakened an inner harlot I never knew existed. I feel so free![HAPPY_MOOD]"
Line 133: finish8:"[f8]"
Once you've fixed these issues, try letting me look your dialogue over again. Maybe I'll find something new.
