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Modified Monologues - English and Dutch

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Some Dumb Guy, Sep 1, 2011.

  1. Hi all,

    I tried to make a monologue with the intention to make the girl seem more willing. I made a Dutch translation as well, for those who are just curious or actually understand it.

    Please let me know how it works out for you if you decide to try it out!

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  2. RajasGrime

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    Dialogue_dutch.txt is now the best dialogue mod there is.
     
  3. DevilJinKazama

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    I'll have a look at the Dutch Dialogue.

    I should be able to pick out any anomalies.
    Mostly cuz I'm Dutch, probly :P


    EDIT: Hmm.. Seems more like you made the Dutch version and then translated it to English?
    In any case, the Dutch version is of good quality.
     
  4. RajasGrime

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    Steenkolen English, best English.
     
  5. Thanks for the replies sofar!

    Despite being of Dutch origin, I started out with the English version first ;D
    The transition is pretty flat, that I must admit, but I'm planning on tweaking and adding more lines to sauce it up a little for both versions. I guess it will eventually result in two different dialogues.
     
  6. TheRaptor

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    I added some more lines to your dialogue. Hope you like it. :)
     

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  7. OMFG dude! :D You went all out, didn't you?

    A few lines are cheesy, some are actually pretty clever, some are pure genius and some made me downright ROFLMFAO. Great stuff!
    Any chances on making a joint effort in creating dialogues? Please let me know how you think about it.
     
  8. Gennosuke1

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    i'm dutch to haha so cool
     
  9. TheRaptor

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    i'm glad you liked it!
    what kind of dialogue would you like to make?
    i was thinking of making one where she doesn't love it that much, more like a normal girl would.
    if you have any dialogue you would want to collaborate on, i would love to read it.
     
  10. I'm afraid I was kind of two steps ahead with that, as you probably already noticed ;)

    This could be fun!