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JDogG74 said:
Hows this?
I had already wrote most of it from my own version by the time I read this, and don't really feel that the extra backstory would have helped me. I've edited the Amy Rose dialogue into the first post of this thread, complete with a shitty background. Enjoy.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Wow thanks f93 its ok about the background
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Only 1 "mistake" on the Amy Rose dialogue.
Line 79: restart:"You know, you can come back and fuck me again any time..."
Typo. "any time" -> "anytime"
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Wait, wasn't there a request on my dialogues for amy rose?

JDogG74 said:
I have one could you do a Amy rose dialogue?
Yep, I guess there was. Oh well, I guess I'll work on my Xenomorph V2 dialogue.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Shadow5000 said:
Wait, wasn't there a request on my dialogues for amy rose?

JDogG74 said:
I have one could you do a Amy rose dialogue?
Yep, I guess there was. Oh well, I guess I'll work on my Xenomorph V2 dialogue.
Yeah.. hehe ^^;
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

I'd love to see something like either Raven being slowly hypnotized into giving some supervillain a blowjob, gradually becoming a bimbo cock-addict by the end of it. Or perhaps something like Stocking from PantyStocking getting suckered into standing in for her sister who bailed on a porno shoot, starting off rather disinterested, but then quickly discovering that she has both a knack for sucking big black dick, and that she actually loves doing it. Kinda in-line with this doujin: http://www.fakku.net/doujinshi/panty-english/read#page=19
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Drrr said:
Stocking from PantyStocking
Mmm, Stocking...

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getting suckered into standing in for her sister who bailed on a porno shoot, starting off rather disinterested, but then quickly discovering that she has both a knack for sucking big black dick, and that she actually loves doing it
Okay, yeah. I could probably do that. The doujin helps show what you're looking for, too. And...

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I'd love to see something like either Raven being slowly hypnotized into giving some supervillain a blowjob, gradually becoming a bimbo cock-addict by the end of it.
Your post history suggests you're asking for Raven from the Teen Titans cartoon (which is fine, as I don't have to figure out which comic characterization you mean), and Mad Mod as the villain (I should go watch that episode to get his lines looking right).

Both of those requests are also for dialogues where the girl enjoys it progressively more. The Stocking one really only needs two states, the Raven one would need at least three to work right (initial, slightly hypnotized, fully hypnotized).
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Well, either one works - although I think I'd go for Stocking even more than Raven, definitely.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

I'm doing the Raven one first (about half done now, actually). I'd have to figure out how to use the animtools dialogue commands to get the Stocking one working like I want - she'd change position a couple of times, etc. Thankfully someone started a thread about the exact questions I was going to ask, so it should be simple enough.

I've actually got the three stages of the hypnosis working fairly well, even if it looks really clunky behind the scenes (with such line types as genfalsefalse, gentruefalse and gentruetrue to work with the two variables of partial and full hypnosis to avoid ever having to check the exact value of any variable).
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 9/22/13 - Amy Rose

Awesome! I didn't even expect you to have that much done so soon, even. Lookin' forward to seeing what comes out of it.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/17/13 - SD-Chan's Halloween

I took some time out from failing to write other dialogues and made a much simpler vaguely Halloween-ish one. I'm still working on the other ones, but this one was much easier to write (only the intro isn't just a flat dialogue).
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/17/13 - SD-Chan's Halloween

Suggestions for the Halloween dialogue:

cum_on_face: Damn it! You're going to ruin my makeup.

And I loved the "If anyone rings the doorbell while I'm doing this, you'd better not answer it!" line. Laughed my ass off when I got to that part. +1 ;D
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/17/13 - SD-Chan's Halloween

Well you could have said "candy bar" instead of "chocolate bar" but that matters not. I like the dialogue
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/17/13 - SD-Chan's Halloween

Well, I got the Raven one almost working. For some reason it always gets stuck on a particular intro line. Since it's not a particularly important line, I'll just post the dialogue in the OP with it skipped.
Here's the one which should work, but doesn't. It just stops when trying to [intro6] at the end of intro5.

Edit: Thanks to Karlpaws for figuring out that "finish" was breaking the intro, minor change to dialogue in order to correct this.
 

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I am willing to bet it is because you used the reserved word "finish" in line 6. I ran into that once before but it took me a bit looking at your script, running it and changing a few things before I caught that.

I changed it to kill just for simplicity and re-ran it, and it went through the intro.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/17/13 - SD-Chan's Halloween

Wow, these dialogues are great. Hmmmm, they gave me some ideas ... ...
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/21/13 - Teen Titans Raven hypnotized

So wait.. how do I advance this thing, exactly? I'm not sure how to initiate a Finisher.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/21/13 - Teen Titans Raven hypnotized

Shadow5000 said:
Hmmmm, they gave me some ideas ...
I don't really mind people making dialogues with similar ideas to my ones, or even ones modified from my own. So good luck with that.

Drrr said:
So wait.. how do I advance this thing, exactly? I'm not sure how to initiate a Finisher.
Just make him cum a few times - the Finish counter tracks that, and restarts (ie putting the penis in her mouth again, then removing it) after each one will give different lines (some of which raise the hypno variable).
So it starts off with her unwilling (lots of angry mood), after he cums 3-5 times she will start being affected by hypnosis (largely normal mood, with bursts of being happy) and after 6 or more any restart will shift her into fully hypnotized mode (which is largely happy and ahegao moods, along with enthusiastic lines).
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/21/13 - Teen Titans Raven hypnotized

Well, I've done that about 12 times and I'm still getting the same dialogue over and over, which is why I'm asking.
 

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Re: f93's Dialogue Thread updated 10/21/13 - Teen Titans Raven hypnotized

Drrr said:
Well, I've done that about 12 times and I'm still getting the same dialogue over and over, which is why I'm asking.
That's strange. I know finish2 works (just tested that), but it doesn't seem to trigger the other ones. I think it might be the ones with {"style":"Him"} that are breaking for some reason, which is unfortunate because those are most of the ones that set the hypno variable. Which means that the dialogue doesn't actually work at all right now. Whoops.

Edit: And my attempts to fix it by forcing that style in restart somehow lead to it just displaying the default finishes lines ("once", "twice", "three times").
 
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