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Starlit Encounter

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by DeathKitten, Jan 14, 2012.

  1. DeathKitten

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    1/7 Starlit Encounter

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  2. blitzrunner

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    I like your style of writing, especially how you break up scenes to show time passing. It reminds me of some of my favorite old sci-fi novels I read when I was kid (Steve Perry). Its a good read, although because I don't recognize the character, I have a hard time trying to imagine how the characters look, despite whatever physical descriptions exist... its kind of a flaw in how i approach reading... thats not to say I didn't enjoy the read.

    but yesh, you offered to post some of your other stories, and I would say this... WHY NOT? I know I'll read them, and I'm sure others will too... so yes, I'm asking if you'll post those stories with Chunli, Mai and whoever else =)

    Thanks for the post by the way.... who are the characters? or are they Originals? Keep up the writing good sir
     
  3. Raden

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    Death and nudity isn't really my thing, but your story was really well written and descriptive. Very good.
     
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