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Single Sentences of Ryona

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by morosenoodle, Feb 15, 2015.

  1. morosenoodle

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    WHAT ARE "SINGLE SENTENCES OF RYONA"?

    Some of you may already know what this post is about; for those of you who don't, the idea is really quite simple. This is a thread, open to everyone, in which you may post any number of self-contained, one-sentence long ryona stories. There are no rules - any victim, any situation, and topic - beyond "keep each scenario to a single sentence" (a popular variation is the "Single Paragraph of Ryona", but let's how the Sentence version goes over before moving on).

    Different people treat SSoR in different ways - as a writing exercise, for brainstorming story ideas, as a way to cut the foreplay and skip to the moneyshots, or even as a forum game. If you feel like writing, but haven't the time nor inclination to slog through nine paragraphs worth of exposition at the moment, give this thread a try!

    You are encouraged to submit more than one sentence in each post, for ease of reading and to prevent spamming, but remember: no full-length stories! Make 'em all self-contained! Hermetically seal those fuckers!


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    Get Started Then, Would You Kindly?
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    The last thing Sakura heard before her skull met the pavement was the cruel, mocking laugh of her unstoppable opponent.


    With her flavorful bouquet of flesh, bone, leather, and gunmetal, the fat mutant frog fancied Rebecca Chambers to be the most delicious morsel he'd ever tasted.


    A single mighty punch and Kasumi crumpled to the floor!


    There was no pain as the zombie bit down on Maggie's chest, only warmth; warmth and joy, for she knew that her sacrifice meant her friends would live to see another morning.


    "I should probably put those back inside me" thought Kitana, numbly, as she stared in quiet shock at the length of intestines uncoiling from her severed waist.


    Stephanie's eyes went wide as a deer's as she clicked through Pixel's browser history; what is this "Ryonani dot com" ...?!
     
  2. TheCrimsonRisk

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    Question: are we allowed to use each others sentences as a jumping off point (i.e. could I write about what happens after Kasumi falls to the floor?) or should every post have its own independent single sentences?
     
  3. Raden

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    This would be considered spam anywhere else... I dunno, we already have the Punishment Series thread for short entries. We're trying to say that a single paragraph is too long now so we cut it further into a sentence?

    As a mod, I look at this as spam, but I will leave the judgment up to the administrators. As a writer who just spent almost four months writing something, I am.... not a fan, to put it as lightly as I can.
     
  4. TheCrimsonRisk

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    I really don't see how this could be considered spam. As the topic creator stated, it works well as a writing exercise and for brainstorming. It's also a good entry point for people who might be creative but not have the time to dedicate to putting a full or even a short story together. This can only promote a sharing of ideas and that's a good thing.

    A single, succinct sentence can create some vivid imagery. As they say, "brevity is the soul of wit".
     
  5. morosenoodle

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    Precisely. Being able to capture vivid imagery and compelling narratives with but a single sentence is actually quite difficult to do, and it's a useful creative writing exercise for anyone, from beginners to porno-Tolstoys. It's also a great way to get people who don't have a lot of time to spend on writing internet smut involved in the writing process!

    Hey, it's a free forum! The one thing I'd say is that SSoR aren't really meant to form extended narratives, and it's easy to slip into a "telephone" thread situation; you know, where the thread winds up being one single story, only told sentence by sentence, post by post. BUT, if something someone else wrote inspires a sentence (or even a full story!) of your own, then there's no reason you shouldn't take advantage of this opportunity. I'd say yes, feel free to use jumping off points, but don't feel obliged to do this.

    Anyways, staying on-topic, here are some more:

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    Trish Stratus hit the arena floor hard, as yet unaware that she would never walk again.


    Voldo thrusted and gyrated, crawled and slipped, writhed and wriggled his way through the tangled pile of defeated females which he'd gathered in the center of his vault.


    Scraps of her clothes were found over the next few weeks, but the BSAA ever learned for certain what had become of Sheva Alomar.


    He knew the Boss was going to dispose of her with that fancy-ass hydraulic press machine, but as Fat Jack kicked Lucia Morgan repeatedly in the ribs, he could not help but reflect on the continued importance of human labour and the artisan's ability to take pride in his own work.
     
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    River stared with shock as blood blossomed from the blade in her stomach.

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    But no amount of sheer will could contest absolute rules; Asuna's health reached zero and she disappeared with a scream.
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    And the miscalculation spelled the end for Saber; Lancer's blade bounced off her sword and bit into her chest.
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    The slayer stirred feebly once, but an intense pressure appeared on her back and she collapsed with finality into the earth.
     
  7. 90sSegaFan

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    I'll give this a shot with three of my all time favorites:

    April O'Neil's bikini strap snapped off after being power bombed to the floor by Krang's android.

    Kano stood laughing over Sonya's spasming blood stained and battered corpse.

    With her arms hung high over her head and suspended in the air, a pool of blood began to form under Blaze's beaten body.
     
  8. TheCrimsonRisk

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    Automatic "Like" for "porno-Tolstoys", which is coincidentally the name of my electronic noise pop band :p
     
  9. morosenoodle

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    In an instant, Rydia's soft, warm flesh was transformed permanently into cold, hard stone.


    The lights of Fallen London twinkled forlornly as the Blind Bruiser tipped Cap'n Sandra's lithe young body over the railing and into the cold dark zee.


    Within five seconds of the bell, it became clear to everyone that Luanne Platter's experience in the Foxy Boxing leagues had NOT prepared her for this title match against King Hippo.


    "The most wonderful thing about Dip", mused Judge Doom, at long last stepping back from his poor captive Jessica, "is that it leaves no evidence behind!"


    Captain Shepard sobbed softly to himself as he thrust his member, once again, deep inside the metallic goo that used to be his beloved Kelly Chambers.


    Ten kicks were necessary before Candy Cane finally went down.


    Thinking she was just playing possum, and traumatized by their previous experiences with Gotham's number one burglar, the Joker's thugs ran in terror from Catwoman's rapidly cooling body, missing their once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to see what was "under that pretty little costume".


    "You're going to select Continue... right?" Bayonetta asks you, the fearful realization slowly creeping across her face.


    Ed Boon had shrunk all their boobs to, quote, "reasonable size", but as Kabal advanced on Kitana with his pneumatic hose in hand, by GOD, he knew how to fix THAT.


    Happosai's secret technique caught Akane right in the temple, laying her out for the rest of the evening.


    Mr Darcy grew sick of Elizabeth's incessant nattering, and so struck the harridan roughly about the chops in a most ungentlemanly fashion.


    The youma fleshsmith worked tirelessly throughout the night, calling on his centuries of experience to craft Sailor Moon's broken body into exquisite palace furniture.


    For Kitana, the stroke of death was as a lover's pinch... mostly because it was delivered by Lui Kang.
     
  10. TheCrimsonRisk

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    Having spent a lot of time with Catwoman in "Arkham City", I love this one.

    Let's try our hand at this shall we...

    *****

    A chill traveled through Blair's body as the knife slit her outfit from her neck down to her lower back, exposing her skin to the cold, wet air of the dungeon.

    Ronda smiled as she tightened the judo choke on Arianny, content that she had taught the cocky ring girl a lesson in respect.

    The people could only watch in horror as the heroic Miss Marvel squirmed in the clutches of the Blob.

    "I don't want this...I don't want this...I don't want this..." Misty repeated over and over again as Giovanni slid off her red suspenders and stuck his hand down the front of her jean shorts.

    Bane had beaten her within in inch of her life and as as the villain lifted her over his head, Selina already knew her fate.
     
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    As her head bounced off the mat from a brutal piledriver, a dazed and disoriented Alexa Bliss laid on the mat unaware of the further torment that was be dealt to her by ryback.
     
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    As the moonlight shimmers above a dark alley, three gotham thugs grins lustily as they imagine, what a nice night they're going to have with batgirl who was there, lying beaten and broken after a severe beating.

    "You know, Kasumi, I just wish that moments like this would never end," I said while swinging the crowbar repeatedly to her bleeding body.

    And after Lex Luthor destroyed supergirl's will to fight back, he proceeded to strip her in front of his men, giving her the greatest humiliation.
     
  13. Locusta

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    Unable to respond to Bison's insult, Juri's battered ribs cracked and buckled under the dictator's weight.

    Before she could react, Samus was literally baked alive within her suit.

    Face down in a pool of blood and vomit, Xena knew that the Gods had finally won.

    The Queen of Blades' mocking laughter was abruptly muted as her powerful body was torn in half.


    :p repetitive perhaps lol ..and grammatically offensive at that . but you know, this is actually a decent exercise for a rusty descriptive writer getting back into the habit, or for someone who would like to write but is intimidated by a full length work.

    I'd like to see a thread honoring ryonani poetry and haiku! It could be interesting.
     
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  14. SufferingLily

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    Guess I'll try my hand at this, looks fun :D

    Power Girl sank to her knees as the kryptonite took its toll, rendering her helpless as Mercy prepared for the final blow.

    The soft drizzle mingled with the drool that crept from Kasumi’s mouth and her face turned red as Ayane tightened the grip around her throat, wearing a smirk of satisfaction.

    Samus gave out a hoarse cry as her power armor exploded around her and left the bounty hunter nearly naked under the space pirate’s leering gaze.

    Jaycee’s entire body shuddered as her back smashed across king’s knee and she screamed nearly loud enough to drown out the terrible cracking of her spine… nearly.
     
  15. Tonug

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    "Samus gave out a hoarse cry as her power armor exploded around her and left the bounty hunter nearly naked under the space pirate’s leering gaze."

    Very nice!
     
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    A kneeling, bound, gagged, naked and unmasked Barbara Gordon helplessly stared up at her enemy as he snapped a photo, signifying the grim reality she felt to her core: she was Batgirl no more...
     
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    Krysten's life flashed before her eyes as her opponent took hold of her head and with a quick twist, a loud snap and a sharp cry of pain, the darkness took her.
     
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    Yumiko cried out as she was thrown across the vaulting horse, her bruised belly protesting and the further rough treatment.

    As Rashan Sidh collapsed, only one thought passed through her head; how could she, a great and powerful Wizard, be defeated by a mere Rogue?!