Pregnant whore (1 Viewer)

Dude MacCool

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I expect this to be a fairly niche dialogue, to say the least. Modified from the dialogue found packaged with the download here: http://superdeepthroat.undertow.club/index.php?topic=1322.0
so credit goes to its original author. I just fixed some grammar (may have missed some, though EDIT: After playing with it, I KNOW I missed some capitalization, which I will get around to when it isn't the middle of the night/really early morning), made some references to the girl being pregnant, and somewhat dirtied up the already fairly dirty dialogue. I hope someone will enjoy it.
 

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Yendorhawk

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Late on the wagon, but fixed up the dialogue (mainly grammar and what not, what the original poster missed). Original's unchanged (outside of fixing errors). V2, only change is the dialogue's centered more around being the guy's whore rather than the neighborhood's.
 

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