A catgirl dialog (1 Viewer)

[Robit92]

Hello, First time uploading a dialog of mine. I wrote this up as a happy if slightly ditzy catgirl who only refers to herself in third person. Let me know what you think.

 

[astounded]

I like the concept and find her referring to herself in the third person sexy.

You may want to try to add more thought lines or lines from him so that there is some dialgue while her mouth is otherwise engaged.

Keep it up! I look forward to more.

 

[Lizoran]

Not bad for a first
I can totally see you doing better
keep working and you'll get it

 

[Adrien]

A very fun one, and original. More lines plz, and as its said above, more thoughts plz

 

[Robit92]

Thank you for the feedback. I will continue to work on it.

 

[Adrien]

Hurry up please my sexy catgirl is waiting ;-)

 

[Robit92]

Added some thoughts for her, and added a few lines for him.