Which of these general scenarios is of the most interest? (1 Viewer)

Holymolydude123

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I am looking at writing a short story or collection of short stories. The ultimate end will be a custom film, but that is a ways down the road. The point of this topic is to look at three general ideas and gauge the interest in each and perhaps create some discussion.
All three will be similar in that they are more focused on the physical side of our fetish, mostly fight films with the sexual stuff being the lesser of content.

A
Two heroines take on and seemingly defeat a villain, but he ultimately reveals he faked the loss and goes on to destroy the girls separately and then both at once. After their defeat he takes both their bodies and leaves only one alive.

B
Two villains attempt to summon their master. Two heroines try to stop. While the heroines easily win the fight, they fail to stop the summoning and must face the new villain. This new villain is able to defeat both heroines at once, then revive his fallen ally. The two villains take advantage of the already defeated heroines and leave only one alive.

C
A villainess is unable to defeat a heroine alone, so she summons a new villain to be her slave. The new villain refuses to bend a knee but the villainess forces the matter. Together the two take down the heroine and have their way with her. After this, the summoned villain reveals he is far more powerful than the villainess thought and he proceeds to take over. The villainess joins forces with the heroine but even together they cannot stop the villain. The villain ends up destroying both and taking a slave of his own.
 

Frroyt

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In (A) and (B) the heroines are too weak. To lose when you have 2-1 odds in your favor is an embarrassing defeat that doesn't agree with the whole premise that you have super powers. Actions speak louder than costumes. The superheroine ACTUALLY has to beat guys to prove her worth. In scenario (B) two ordinary villains present little challenge. Fine, but it should take at least two supervillains to present a meaningful challenge to a champion. I'm not saying that she has to be invincible. Even history's greatest fighters have suffered defeats. But, if we are to believe that she is truly a great warrior, it should take at least 3-1 odds and dirty tactics to take her down. Even better, she should still score some moral victory, even in the face of defeat. Jesus Christ didn't die on the cross just to feed a pack of wild animals. He willingly gave his mortal life to free humanity from sin. Win or lose, a superheroine must succeed in saving someone in order to recognized as a defender of justice.

I like (C) the best. At least the plot is a little more convoluted for a change. All to often, it reduces to 'she walks in and the bad guys take her!' But, I still don't get why this is always a demonstration of who is really stronger than who. Haven't we long since established that the so-called superheroine is nothing more than a pathetic wannabe and an utterly powerless weakling? How many times do you have to prove it? And, a truly omnipotent being would not get involved in conflicts of interest that only concern mere mortals, nor would he have any need for a slave. To keep something presupposes that it has value. Therefore, it doesn't follow that she should be treated like garbage.
 

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