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Kargan3033

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The Dungeon Of Terror
Chapter 1

It was a warm summer's day when five people got a letter that contained an intriguing invitation, and a DVD with some highly unusual entertainment on it.

Ryoma Hikari got out of his luxury sedan along with his body guards at the location that he had been told to go to in the unusual invitation to met with the man who had not only sent him the invitation but also the highly arousing video of two girl fighting one another before the red headed girl in the video went all lesbian rapist on the dark haired girl that she had beaten into submission after a hard fight.


I wonder who these people are? “ he thought to himself as he saw two other men and two women at the same location as him as he felt slightly tense that he and the strangers with him were walking into an ambush.

Who the hell are these people? “ Alistair Angelsin thought to himself as he saw two other men and two women at the location he had been told to go to in the strange invitation he had gotten a day ago, he looked at one of the other men and saw that he was a japanese man who looked to be in his 50's with black hair and beard that was just started to to whiten with age along with two other younger japanese men that stood at a height of five foot, nine inches and looked to weight about a 160lbs of muscle.

Next he looked at one of the women and saw that she stood around the five foot, seven inch mark with a curvy body and large breasts, she looked to be in her early 20's with long platinum blond hair and icy blue eyes as for her weight he could not tell as she was dressed in a conservative business jacket and skirt.

Next he looked at one of the other men and saw that he stood at a height of six feet, five inches tall with a medium build, short black hair and a short black beard with strange eyes that were completely white which made him think that the man was blind but yet when the strange man looked right at him he knew he was not blind as he as feeling sightly uneasy.

When he looked at the other women he saw that she was around the five foot, four inch mark with short black hair with black eyes and fair sized breasts who looked to be in hear early to mid thirties and he noticed she had a slightly sadistic look in her black eyes.

The man simply known as the Gambler was watching the one of the men who looked to be in his early fifties with short black hair, black eyes and a tall, thin build who stood at the five foot, ten inch mark looking at the dark haired women with his pure white eyes and he could see that the the older man was becoming attracted to the middle aged dark hair women.

Sarah Ortega De la Cruz lit up a smoke as she was waiting for the stranger who send her the invitation to meet him as she looked at the four men and one other women.

" Gods that was exciting! " she thought to herself as she took a drag from her smoke as she thought back to the video that had come with the invitation that showed a cute, young blond haired grail being beaten into a crying fit by a slightly older red haired girl who then face raped the crying blond girl.

But what had really made her hot and wet between the legs when she watched the video was that she knew that the beating and rape of the cute, crying blond girl was not faked because she was running a bussine that specialized in ryona porn and no matter how realistic she made the videos they did not excite her because she knew it was all faked.

" Damn it!, I need to get laid! " she thought to herself as she felt herself becoming warm and damp between the legs as she thought back to that video she had been sent by the stranger who had sent it to her along with the invitation for a face to face meeting.

Seraphina Black was smoking a joint as she was waiting for the stranger who had sent her the invitation for a face to face meeting as well as the video of of a girl fighting a tall muscle bound man who beat and raped the young girl to death which had so aroused her that she went full S&M rape on one of the family's maid servants.

Given that she was from not only an *old money* family but also she and her family are decedents from old European nobility she along with the rest of her family had some how say we say *unconventional* tastes for the *finer* things in life as well as being so rich they could live the most debouched and depraved lifestyle for years on end and not even make a dent in the family fortune.

Suddenly there was a strange sucking sensation that filled the area that startled the gathered people before a glowing neon green swirling portal opened in front of them all.

From the glowing swirling came a man who stood at the five foot, eleven inch mark, what set this strange man apart from other men was not only his short stark white hair and shockingly deep, dark cobalt blue eyes but also that four men and two women got the feeling this was not a man to take light from the sense of power that was radiating from the strange man.


Welcome my friends, I am Grayson Dreadmoore and I am happy to see all of you here. “ the strangely disturbing white haired man said with a friendly tone of voice and a slightly cocky smirk on his face.
 

Kargan3033

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I know it's a bit slow going but trust it it'll be worth the wait for the *action* to kick in


The Dungeon Of Terror
Chapter 2





Grayson Dreadmoore could see the looks of fearful confusion in the eyes and on the faces of his guests and felt the right corner of his lips turn up into an amused smirk.



I know you are most likely to be confused at this moment in time but don't worry you are in no danger so relax and let me fill you in on what's going, ok? “ he said with a friendly and smirking tone of voice that was under-laid with a tone of voice that made it clear to Ryoma and the others that he could not only be a good friend and a man to work with and gain untold riches but all you piss him off your death will be a long time in coming.

Ryoma vowed to all the gods, demons and devil that he was going to be on his very *Best* behavior.


Oh SHIT! “ Seraphina thought to herself as she felt both badly intimated and misleadingly aroused by Grayson.


The Gambler took a closer looked at Grayson and just knew he would not only not cross this man but treat him with the up-most respect and honesty as he realized that he was vastly outclassed by Grayson.

Sarah felt herself becoming a boiling swamp of lust as she knew that this man was a deadly predator in human form as she could see that nearly hidden violence in his calming blue eyes that made her feel so powerless and insanely horny.


Note to self, DO NOT! Piss this man off, just don't do it, it's not worth the *pain*. “ Alistair thought to himself as he took a moment to look at Grayson and even though it was devote desire not to piss off Grayson he could not help but to take an interest in the young man who who had badly intimidated him.

I know each of you have something in common with one another and with me and that is we have some *Special* taste in entertainment. “the others heard Grayson say to them with a conspirtal tone of voice and a knowing look on his face that made them feel a deep sense of shame.

Why should we trust you for? “ Alistair asked Grayson after working up the nerve to speak to him.

I know none of have any reason to trust me and I get that, lets just say I'm a *Businessman* and I'm looking to expand my market base by offering a fair and honest deal with you five. “ Grayson said to Alister and watched as look of interest appear in Alister's as well as a look that said, *So he wants to wheel and deal, GAME ON!*


Sara looked at Seraphina and they smiled at one another as they felt their competitive sides kick in because they were damn sure that Grayson was not only richer then the Gods but he was also highly arousing and that there could be one *Bitch* that belonged to Grayson and that neither of them where going to hold back trying to prove that they were the *One* he was to claim as *HIS*.

The Gambler was thinking of just what kind of business that Grayson was into as he got the feeling that Grayson was a man of wealth and taste that went way past what humans would call a *Lifestyle Of The Rich And Shameless.* by light years.

Ryoma could not help but let out a grim smirk as he was damn sure that Grayson would be called The Apex Predator of the business world with more then enough money, power and guns by the metric shiton that he could easily topple every nation on Earth without some much as braking a sweat which not only made him feel a certain amount of respect for a fellow *Businessman* but also excitement as he was going about getting the *Best Deal* he can out of everyone else in this meeting.


I know that you are wondering what the portal that behind me is, well lets just say that the location of where I do Business as well as entertain my guests is not on this world. “ Grayson said to his guests and hopefuly business partners.

Don't worry I assure you that none of you will be harmed or messed with in anyway unless you bring it on yourselves and the portal is big enough that you can drive your vehicles into it. “ he added and as expected he saw the others get into their vehicles and knew that they would follow him to his office and home.

After Grayson walked into the portal Ryoma and the others drove their vehicles into the portal and when the last vehicle drove past the entrance to the portal, the portal winked out of existence.
 

Soba

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This is a nice start. The build up for the main story is great, can't wait to see the next chap.
 

noche

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This is a nice start. The build up for the main story is great, can't wait to see the next chap.
i want to see how the girl will interact whit each other, i assume Cassie and Erza will be the first to take point and act as the defacto leaders, will Robin star acting as advisor for the one she perceive as the leader (but always keeping a thing grip of her magic tome close of her chest) maybe Cassandra will quickly draw her sword and shield and demand some answers...
great start
 

Kargan3033

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Thanks for the feed back, sorry I haven't posted anything as of late I have not been feeling well but I have been working on it slowly so I should have one last set up chapter done soon before the *fun* starts.
 

Kargan3033

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i want to see how the girl will interact whit each other, i assume Cassie and Erza will be the first to take point and act as the defacto leaders, will Robin star acting as advisor for the one she perceive as the leader (but always keeping a thing grip of her magic tome close of her chest) maybe Cassandra will quickly draw her sword and shield and demand some answers...
great start

The girls will not be interacting with one another at first but they will later on in the story.
 

Kargan3033

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The Dungeon Of Terror
Chapter 3

After driving through the portal Seraphina and the others found themslve in what looked to be a large parking lot in front of a strange building that could only be discribed as a cross between castle grayskull from the old 1980's kids cartoon called He-Man and the Masters of the univerce and a hi-tech office building.


Well this is a surprising turn for the strange. Alister thought to himself as he and the others got out of their vehicles and made their way to the enternce of the strange building where Grayson was waiting for them.

Welcome to my humble home, I hope you will enjoy you're stay. “ Grayson said to The Gambler and the others as he led them into his home.

WOW! “ Sara thought to herself as she and the others found themselves in a richly apointed entry way that had floors of white marble with viens of gold and amatyst running through it.

The next think she noticed was that there were a fair number of young naked girls with nothing but a leather collar around their necks and that many of the strange naked girls were not human.

Grayson looked at Ryoma and the others and he could see that they were deeply impressed by the rich interor of his home as well as his sex slaves as he led to him to his living room.


Man I thought I was rich and shameless, but this guy takes the cake.” Sara thought to herself as she saw that the livingroom was about five thousand feet in area and that there were large leather couches and coffee tables all around the room and that there was a large, fullly stocked bar between tended by a large, naked muscle bound women of questionable origins as well as young naked slave girls standing next to the bar.

Make yourselves comforable, my home is your home and that you are free to enjoy my slaves within reason. “ Grayson said as he saw the others take a seat as they were looking around the livingroom and most notable the bartender and the sex slaves standing by the bar.

Once he was seated Ryoma say a naked slave girl walk up to him and kneel before him, “ What is your heart's desire my Master. “ the young sex slave said with a meek and revrent tone of voice.

He looked the kneeling sex slave over and saw that she aprred to stand at a hight of five feet, four inches tall with pale white skin and dark green short hear and that her tits were about a mid sized C-cup with small, hard pale pink nipples.


I'll have a cup of hot black coffee. “ he said to the kneeling sex slave and when she got to her feet he looked into her eyes and saw the look of joyful subservince in her dark green eyes which told him that she was a well trained sex slave which aroused him slightly.

Oh how Nice! “ Seraphina thought to herself as she saw a young naked sex slave kneel before her and saw that she stood at a height of five feet even with healthy pink skin, look platinum blond hair that was a shade lighter then her own platinum blond hair hair with large tits that seemed to be a large C or a small D-cup.

The next think she noticed was that the kneeling slave girl before her had western type elven ears that made her a little more warm and damp between the the legs.


What do you want my Mistress? “ she heard the kneeling elven salve girl say to her with a calm but slightly aroused tone of voice that made Seraphina lick her lips with growing arousal, “ I'll have a cold Long Island ice tea. “ she said to the kneeling sex slave and when the young elven sex slave got to her feet and turned away from her to go and get her drink she saw that the elven sex slave had a snug and pert ass that put the delightful mental image of her whipping the elven sex slave's ass with a long bullwhip that made her very hot and wet between the legs.

Alistair watched as a naked snake girl slithered up to him and bow respectfully while asking him if he wanted anything while adressing him as her master.

And even though he never cared for monster girl porn there was something about the bowing snake girl that struck a cord with him as he looked her over and saw that her human half had pale white skin, long blood red hair as well as light green eyes and large D cup tits that had long, hard dark red nipples while her long snake half had dark green scales.


I'll have a cup of coffee with a bit of milk and two sugars. “ he said to the bowing snake girl as he felt it was a good idea to keep his wits about him given the strange sittuation he found himself in and watched as the snake girl sex slave slithered up to the bar to get his drink.

Well HELLO there. “ Sara thought to herself as a young dark haired slave girl knelt before her and saw that the young naked slave girl had lightly taned skin, dark brown eyes and large C cup tits with dark pink and very hard nipples that made her lick her lips in an evil and aroused manor.

I'll have a martini shaken, not stired with a twist of lime. “ she said to the kneeling slave girl as he wondered just how far she could go in *enjoying* the young naked slave girl that was severing her, and watched as the slave girl got to her feet and made her way towards the bar to get her drink with an enticing sway in her snung looking ass.

Once he saw that his guests had their drinks and were fairly relaxed Grayson began to speak, “ I'm sure many of you are wonder what kind of bussines I am into and why I have chosen each of you to be my bussines partners. “ he said and watched as Ryoma gave him a thoughtful look.


Yes I am cuirous as to what kind of bussine you are into. “ he heard Ryoma say to him as he took a sip of his drink.

That is simple really, I'm not only into adult enetertainment but also many other forms of bussines such as providing arms to those who desire them them as well as well as long trem ownership of female companionship, chemical recreation and information brokrige, as well as the sloving of any kinds of *trouble* that people might have with other people as well as finacal sevices and income generation that would be frowned upon in so called *Civilized* society. “ Ryoma and the other heard Grayson say to them which told them that their host had his hand in many highly illegal bussineses that would make many governments frown at his shenaigains if not outright terrorfied at the dirty dealings he was into.

Interesting, tell me more. “ Ryoma said as the young slave girl that was serving him gave him a hot and bothered look that feither aroused him.

Well when it comes to adult entertainment I think it would be best to show you what kind of adult entertainment I can provide those who desire such fine entertainment. “ Grayson said and snaped his fingers and watched as Alister and the other had a look of mild surprise as a large hologrpahic screen appered into from of them.
 

Kargan3033

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Still feeling kind of bad but I felt inspired enough to start the *Fun and Games* early.


The Dungeon Of Terror
Chapter 4


WHAT THE HELL! “ Robin Lefler thought to herself as she opened her eyes and saw nothing but darkness, she quickly chanted a light spell and when it activated she saw that she was in a large, dark cave.

How the hell did I get here? “ Robin thought to herself because the last things she recalled before finding herself in this strange cave was that she was at home reading a history book before she felt herself becoming faint.

She quickly checked herself over and saw that not only was she unharmed but also had her adventuring gear with her as well as her enchanted sword, “ Well I might as well get going if I'm ever going to find my way out of here. “ she thought to herself as she pulled out her compass to find her way north, one she knew witch way was north she started walking as she was trying and failing to understand how she had been taken from her home and placed in this dark, dank cave.

After walking for what seemed like an hour or two Robin thought she heard a strange sound up ahead of her, she tightened her grip on her sword and slowly made her way forward while the ball of light from her light spell stayed above her head, “ Oh hell! “ she muttered to herself as she saw a swarm of giant ants a head of her and saw that they were feeding on a body of some kind.


Well there don't seem to be too many of them. “ Robin thought to herself as she started to chant a fireball spell and watched with a faint smirk as the fireball streaked from the finger tips of her left hand and expload in the middle of the swarm of giant ants and incinerating them all.

No problem. “ she said to herself as she felt pleased with herself even though giant ants where not really all that much of a threat to her given her skill in swordsmanship and magic once the flames of the fireball spell died out she made her way towards the body that the giant ants had been feeding on as she felt slightly nausated by the stench of deep fried giant ants unaware she was being watched.

Can't tell what this is. “ Robin thought to herself as she saw that the body had been badly chewed up by the giant ants as well as being badly chard by her fireball spell.

After looked over the chewed and chard body Robin put it out of her mind as she started to walk once more.


I wonder how the others are doing? “ she thought to herself as she was thinking about her friends and adventuring companions and wondered if they were looking for her once they realized she was missing as she was starting to feel uneasy for some odd reason.

After walked for awhile Robin decided to stop for a brake as well as to renew her light spell, once the light spell was recast she sat down on a small outcropping of rocks and took off her backpack to get at her iron rations, “ I could have memorised a conjuer food and drink spell but I think it would be a good idea to keep myself maxed out on my combat spells. “ she said to herself as she took a bite out of her dried beef jerky as she realized that if this cave was like the usual dungeons she had delved into there there would be plenty of wondering monsters to deal with, as well as some loot to be had.

After finishing her dried beef jerky Robbin took a large drink out of her water skin and as she was drinking she thought she heard to sounds of voices.


Damn, no rest for the wicked so it would seem. “ she thought to herself as she corked her water skin and stashed into into her backpack then re-slung her backpack over her shoulders as she took up her sword and got read for combat.

Cave Goblins. “ she thought to herself as she saw four scrawny humanoids walk into the radius of her light spell and took a moment to look the cave goblins over and saw that the tallest of the cave goblins stood at a height of four feet, seven inches tall.

Next she saw that the cave goblins had pale, warty green skin, beady yellow eyes, a large, flared pug noses as well a long floppy ears and yellowed sharp teeth with two over sized tusks where the lower canines on a human being would be.


Looks like a scouting party, this should be fairly easy. “ Robin thought to herself as the cave goblins let out a cry of surprise and quickly cast a magic missile into the back of one of the cave goblins that was running away to most like warn a nearby settlement of cave goblins that an intruder was near by killing it outright.

The three remaining cave goblins realized in their dim minds that who ever this intruder was that she would most likely kill them in cold blood if they ran away, so they let out a screeching war cry and charged Robin with the intention of either killing her or capturing her.


Not very smart are you's, if you all ran away at the same time one of you might have gotten away. “ Robin thought to herself as she realized that all species of goblins were not well known for their intelligence.

She realized that she did not have time to cast a spell as the three remaining cave goblins charged her so she slashed out at the closest cave goblin opening up a bloody wound on it's belly that caused the cave goblin to scream in pain and terror as it's intestines spilled out of the bloody wound.


One down, two to go. “ Robin thought to herself as the second closest cave goblin powered forward with the intention of stabbing her in her flat, toned belly but she was quicker and quickly side stepped to the left and counter slashed the charging cave goblin as it stepped past her, her enchanted sword cutting through the cave goblin's crude leather armor and severing it's upper spine dropping him to the ground while screaming in pain and terror.

The last cave goblin manged to lightly slash Robin caused her to hiss in pain as the cave goblin's crude and dirty iron sword bit deeply into her lower right leg.


Die you little bastard! “ she snarled as she swung her enchanted sword down on the cave goblin's unprotected head, splitting his skull and spilling his brains and blood onto the floor of the cave.

Well that was fun, Not! “ Robin muttered to herself as she slightly hobbled over to the cave goblin with the severed spine as it was trying to weakly crawl away and stabbed it through the back of it's neck, killing it instantly.

After making sure that the cave goblin scouting party were dead Robin unslung her backpack and took out her water skin and began to clean out the wound on her lower right leg to make sure she did not get a septic infection from the cave goblin's dirty sword then cast a minor healing spell on her leg.

Once that was done she rested up for a bit as the pain in her lower right leg began to fade into a minor throbbing, once Robin felt rest up enough she put her water skin in her backpack, re-slung her backpack on her shoulders and began to check the dead cave goblins for loot.


Gods I thought they stunk on the outside. “ Robin muttered to herself as she was checking over the cave goblin she had gutted as it's body gave off a rank stench as she found that the gutting cave goblin had a crude leather water skin that was filled with what appered to be crude goblin moonshine, next she found that the dead cave goblin had a few chunks of slightly rotting, bloody and questionable meat.

Gods I'm so going to need a bath after this. “ Robin thought to herself as the dead cave goblin's body released the contents of it's bladder and bowels which made Robin gag slightly as she found that the only loot that this dead cave goblin had on it was three copper pieces and one bent silver piece.

After looting the remaining dead cave goblins Robin had a total of ten copper pieces, four silver pieces and one small, crudely cut ruby.


Come for the killing, stay for the looting. “ Robin muttered to herself with a mocking smirk as she was surprised that the dead cave goblins had even this much loot on them.

After taking a moment to compose herself Robin set off once more to find her way out of the dark, dank and dreary cave.
 

Kargan3033

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I have the next chapter nearly done but I'm taking a brake so not to strain my brain, should have it done and posted later on if all goes well.
 

noche

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Still feeling kind of bad but I felt inspired enough to start the *Fun and Games* early.


The Dungeon Of Terror
Chapter 4


WHAT THE HELL! “ Robin Lefler thought to herself as she opened her eyes and saw nothing but darkness, she quickly chanted a light spell and when it activated she saw that she was in a large, dark cave.

How the hell did I get here? “ Robin thought to herself because the last things she recalled before finding herself in this strange cave was that she was at home reading a history book before she felt herself becoming faint.

She quickly checked herself over and saw that not only was she unharmed but also had her adventuring gear with her as well as her enchanted sword, “ Well I might as well get going if I'm ever going to find my way out of here. “ she thought to herself as she pulled out her compass to find her way north, one she knew witch way was north she started walking as she was trying and failing to understand how she had been taken from her home and placed in this dark, dank cave.

After walking for what seemed like an hour or two Robin thought she heard a strange sound up ahead of her, she tightened her grip on her sword and slowly made her way forward while the ball of light from her light spell stayed above her head, “ Oh hell! “ she muttered to herself as she saw a swarm of giant ants a head of her and saw that they were feeding on a body of some kind.


Well there don't seem to be too many of them. “ Robin thought to herself as she started to chant a fireball spell and watched with a faint smirk as the fireball streaked from the finger tips of her left hand and expload in the middle of the swarm of giant ants and incinerating them all.

No problem. “ she said to herself as she felt pleased with herself even though giant ants where not really all that much of a threat to her given her skill in swordsmanship and magic once the flames of the fireball spell died out she made her way towards the body that the giant ants had been feeding on as she felt slightly nausated by the stench of deep fried giant ants unaware she was being watched.

Can't tell what this is. “ Robin thought to herself as she saw that the body had been badly chewed up by the giant ants as well as being badly chard by her fireball spell.

After looked over the chewed and chard body Robin put it out of her mind as she started to walk once more.


I wonder how the others are doing? “ she thought to herself as she was thinking about her friends and adventuring companions and wondered if they were looking for her once they realized she was missing as she was starting to feel uneasy for some odd reason.

After walked for awhile Robin decided to stop for a brake as well as to renew her light spell, once the light spell was recast she sat down on a small outcropping of rocks and took off her backpack to get at her iron rations, “ I could have memorised a conjuer food and drink spell but I think it would be a good idea to keep myself maxed out on my combat spells. “ she said to herself as she took a bite out of her dried beef jerky as she realized that if this cave was like the usual dungeons she had delved into there there would be plenty of wondering monsters to deal with, as well as some loot to be had.

After finishing her dried beef jerky Robbin took a large drink out of her water skin and as she was drinking she thought she heard to sounds of voices.


Damn, no rest for the wicked so it would seem. “ she thought to herself as she corked her water skin and stashed into into her backpack then re-slung her backpack over her shoulders as she took up her sword and got read for combat.

Cave Goblins. “ she thought to herself as she saw four scrawny humanoids walk into the radius of her light spell and took a moment to look the cave goblins over and saw that the tallest of the cave goblins stood at a height of four feet, seven inches tall.

Next she saw that the cave goblins had pale, warty green skin, beady yellow eyes, a large, flared pug noses as well a long floppy ears and yellowed sharp teeth with two over sized tusks where the lower canines on a human being would be.


Looks like a scouting party, this should be fairly easy. “ Robin thought to herself as the cave goblins let out a cry of surprise and quickly cast a magic missile into the back of one of the cave goblins that was running away to most like warn a nearby settlement of cave goblins that an intruder was near by killing it outright.

The three remaining cave goblins realized in their dim minds that who ever this intruder was that she would most likely kill them in cold blood if they ran away, so they let out a screeching war cry and charged Robin with the intention of either killing her or capturing her.


Not very smart are you's, if you all ran away at the same time one of you might have gotten away. “ Robin thought to herself as she realized that all species of goblins were not well known for their intelligence.

She realized that she did not have time to cast a spell as the three remaining cave goblins charged her so she slashed out at the closest cave goblin opening up a bloody wound on it's belly that caused the cave goblin to scream in pain and terror as it's intestines spilled out of the bloody wound.


One down, two to go. “ Robin thought to herself as the second closest cave goblin powered forward with the intention of stabbing her in her flat, toned belly but she was quicker and quickly side stepped to the left and counter slashed the charging cave goblin as it stepped past her, her enchanted sword cutting through the cave goblin's crude leather armor and severing it's upper spine dropping him to the ground while screaming in pain and terror.

The last cave goblin manged to lightly slash Robin caused her to hiss in pain as the cave goblin's crude and dirty iron sword bit deeply into her lower right leg.


Die you little bastard! “ she snarled as she swung her enchanted sword down on the cave goblin's unprotected head, splitting his skull and spilling his brains and blood onto the floor of the cave.

Well that was fun, Not! “ Robin muttered to herself as she slightly hobbled over to the cave goblin with the severed spine as it was trying to weakly crawl away and stabbed it through the back of it's neck, killing it instantly.

After making sure that the cave goblin scouting party were dead Robin unslung her backpack and took out her water skin and began to clean out the wound on her lower right leg to make sure she did not get a septic infection from the cave goblin's dirty sword then cast a minor healing spell on her leg.

Once that was done she rested up for a bit as the pain in her lower right leg began to fade into a minor throbbing, once Robin felt rest up enough she put her water skin in her backpack, re-slung her backpack on her shoulders and began to check the dead cave goblins for loot.


Gods I thought they stunk on the outside. “ Robin muttered to herself as she was checking over the cave goblin she had gutted as it's body gave off a rank stench as she found that the gutting cave goblin had a crude leather water skin that was filled with what appered to be crude goblin moonshine, next she found that the dead cave goblin had a few chunks of slightly rotting, bloody and questionable meat.

Gods I'm so going to need a bath after this. “ Robin thought to herself as the dead cave goblin's body released the contents of it's bladder and bowels which made Robin gag slightly as she found that the only loot that this dead cave goblin had on it was three copper pieces and one bent silver piece.

After looting the remaining dead cave goblins Robin had a total of ten copper pieces, four silver pieces and one small, crudely cut ruby.


Come for the killing, stay for the looting. “ Robin muttered to herself with a mocking smirk as she was surprised that the dead cave goblins had even this much loot on them.

After taking a moment to compose herself Robin set off once more to find her way out of the dark, dank and dreary cave.
i don't know how i miss this chapter... :wat:
btw i just re read what information i post on robin and is pretty lackluster so... good job fill in the blanks, sorry about that.
so each girl gone have her on chapter? neat idea.
get well and i will read you soon.
 

Kargan3033

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Aug 10, 2015
i don't know how i miss this chapter... :wat:
btw i just re read what information i post on robin and is pretty lackluster so... good job fill in the blanks, sorry about that.
so each girl gone have her on chapter? neat idea.
get well and i will read you soon.

No worries about the lack of info on Robin, gives me room to spin her into what I want in the story, each of the girls will have a few chapters focused on them and depending on how things go I might bring them all together as a group.

Glad you are enjoying the story.
 

noche

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All be together is not a given? Damn! for what i know about the character only Yukari cant fight alone that well, she pretty much a support(she get better whit time) alright i am more in now!
 

Kargan3033

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All be together is not a given? Damn! for what i know about the character only Yukari cant fight alone that well, she pretty much a support(she get better whit time) alright i am more in now!

It's not a matter of not wanting them to be in a group it's more of a matter if being able to given that I feel like shit both in body and mind, when I set out to make this story I intended to make the best story I could with the focus on the girls signally and in a group.
 

noche

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is very easy to read and enjoy, the OC are simple but effective, Grayson look like a very overpower dude, normaly a will displease that kinf of character but as antagonist is perfect (i hope that he will fight the girls at some point and beat all them whit easy) a like the setting but i guess i see the potential i a like what i see
 

Kargan3033

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Aug 10, 2015
is very easy to read and enjoy, the OC are simple but effective, Grayson look like a very overpower dude, normaly a will displease that kinf of character but as antagonist is perfect (i hope that he will fight the girls at some point and beat all them whit easy) a like the setting but i guess i see the potential i a like what i see

Thanks for your feed back but I don't think I'm going to have Grayson fight the girls, he's more of a business man then a fighter but he can kick ass if he needs to as well as having a large number of underlings at his command if he needs a problem taken care of as well as having enough weapons and fire power to turn the Earth into a ball of glowing radioactive gas if he needs to, going to slowly reveal more about him in later chapters.
 

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