A couple of years ago I posted an erotic story on the site the greyarchive. I highly recommend the site for anyone who enjoys erotic fiction, particularly if its based around superheroes, fantasy, science fiction, and video games. I based my story on ryona style superheroine fantasies. I intended it to be ongoing. Unfortunately, I only wrote the first chapter and did not get around to continuing the story. I think it would be good to post the story and see if there are any talented folks here who want to contribute to the story. You could make editing suggestions to my original chapter, make suggestions for future chapters, or even (and hopefully) help me to continue the story by writing your own installments. What I'd also like is if there are any artists here, or if someone could find an artist, to do artwork based on this story. Once completed, I'd post the installments of the story up on the greyarchive, giving credit to whoever helped me. The premise of the story is simple. Girl gets superpowers. Girl becomes superhero. Girl gets defeated regularly and becomes the ultimate ryona victim. Here's a character bio for anyone who wants to help out. Name: Megan Summers Hero name: Teen Girl Age: 17 (should I up the age to 18? Literary wise, I don't think there's a law against 17 year olds in sexual situations) Height: 5'7 Appearance: Perfect figure for a girl her age. Toned, hourglass figure. Big breasts - no defined size in the story. I wouldn't want them ridiculously comically big. Blue eyes. Long black hair. Very pretty. Powers: High durability to damage. What would normally kill or fatally wound a normal human won't do the same to Teen Girl but it would leave a mark. High amount of endurance to pain. The current levels to which she can endure pain are unknown. But she can endure incredibly high levels of pain for hours at a time without passing out. Super strength. She can lift cars, but not above her head. She can punch through walls easily. Flight. Her speed is not currently set, but flying the height of commercial airliners makes her uncomfortable. Fast healing. Not Wolverine fast. If she's been wounded and damaged seriously it can take her days to recover but she will recover almost fully in that time. A note on her durability and healing. I don't know if you guys have watched the hentai Sexy Magical Girl. I recommend it highly. But in that hentai, the heroine is raped by tentacle monsters, and she's able to endure an incredible amount of stretching by inhumanly large phalluses, to the point that they even stretch out her stomach without killing her. I was thinking of having something similar in a future installment. Teen Girl's healing would be so powerful that she returns to an almost virgin like state after such an encounter. Villain bios - Professor Painatologist. Real name unknown. Age: 50 Height: 5'9 Professor Painatologist is a mad genius with a fetish for pain. He uses his seemingly inexhaustable access to advanced mechanical and biological technology to administer pain on beautiful women. Responsible for the deaths of an unknown number of victims. Mr. Ross Age: 48 Height: 5'10 A geography teacher at the Godfrey High School. Mr. Ross is a balding, overweight, disgusting sleaze willing to blackmail young girls for sex. Name: Huai Age: 32 Villain name: Razorclaw Height: 6'4 Huai is a member of an as yet unknown criminal syndicate. He leads a group of criminals operating in the city. Huai is a master of the martial arts. He takes advantage of a special technology, wearing a full body metallic black suit which augments his strength and speed, also sporting 3 7 inch metal claws on each hand. Jetpack Age: 28 Height: 5'7 A member of Huai's team. He wears the same metallic suit which augments strength and speed, while also wearing an advanced jetpack which gives him human flight. He sports twin knucklebusters which upon impact discharge electrical energy and he wears a belt holding grenades. Big Package Age: 30 Height: Without costume, 6'5. With costume, 8'2. The 3rd member of Huai's team. The Englishman has a large bulky frame even without the armour through years of bodybuilding. With the armour, his already considerable strength is augmented 15 fold. His suit is mostly a robotic exoskeleten for the purposes of increasing his bulk immensely while allowing him to have full control. Lucas Age: 26 Height: 5'9 A robotics scientist who works for Huai. He has used stolen weapons technology to develop gear for crimnals. Raptor (Real name unknown) Real age unknown. Around 36 years old. Height: 7'0 Raptor is a rapist and murderer who has been the test subject of scientific experiments by the US government. A chemical substance called sadisium has increased the man's height, strength, intelligence, senses, agility, durability, every aspect of him has been increased immensely. Teen Girl is around 5 times stronger than an olypmpic level bodybuilder, Big Package is 15 times that, Raptor is 50 times that. Without further ado, I'll post the first chapter of my story - Teen Girl. Warning: The story features a girl of 17 years old, which may make some uncomfortable. The story features quite nasty torture. And there are villains with nasty intentions of rape. If any of these things are an issue, mods can feel free to remove this topic and post. This is an edited version of my story. No content has been removed from the story that's on greyarchive. I've simply made a few corrections, such as past and present tense corrections. I'm also going to include the original warning.