Mike's Dialogs of Intrigue *now with Sunset Shimmer and Flash Sentry!* (1 Viewer)

[michealdark]

Okay, I kinda cheated with this one, as a good portion of it is still the default. But I made some modifications to it that might appeal to asphyxiation fans out there.

Spoiler: Change Log

1.Changed thread name, as I'll probably be adding more dialogues later
2.Modified the snuff scenario. One piece of dialog didn't trigger right, so I tried to re-work it.
3. Added a Sunset Shimmer/Flash Sentry scenario

 

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Re: A possible snuff scenario dialog

I just checked your dialogue with the DialogueChecker ( http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=3820.0 ) by Pim_gd and it only reported one error. :)

Spoiler

Dialogue was checked in 82 ms with v3.02 of the DialogueChecker.

I found 1 issue(s) with your dialogue, of which 0 were severe, 1 were major issues, and 0 were minor issues.



Line Usage - Major: Line 38 is unused!

Line 38: pass out:"You're dead, my pretty[ADD_TEARS]"{"style":"Him"}



Once you've fixed these issues, try letting me look your dialogue over again. Maybe I'll find something new.

 

[michealdark]

Re: A possible snuff scenario dialog

Thanks. Yeah, I need to fix that since it doesn't trigger right.

edit: Made the adjustments. Hope it's alright now

 

[michealdark]

Added a Sunset Shimmer/Flash Sentry scenario. Tell me what you think