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Mike's Dialogs of Intrigue *now with Sunset Shimmer and Flash Sentry!*

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by michealdark, Oct 1, 2015.

  1. michealdark

    michealdark Potential Patron

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    Okay, I kinda cheated with this one, as a good portion of it is still the default. But I made some modifications to it that might appeal to asphyxiation fans out there.

    1.Changed thread name, as I'll probably be adding more dialogues later
    2.Modified the snuff scenario. One piece of dialog didn't trigger right, so I tried to re-work it.
    3. Added a Sunset Shimmer/Flash Sentry scenario
     

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  2. tmb

    tmb Vivacious Visitor

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    Re: A possible snuff scenario dialog

    I just checked your dialogue with the DialogueChecker ( http://www.sdtmods.com/index.php?topic=3820.0 ) by Pim_gd and it only reported one error. :)

    Dialogue was checked in 82 ms with v3.02 of the DialogueChecker.

    I found 1 issue(s) with your dialogue, of which 0 were severe, 1 were major issues, and 0 were minor issues.



    Line Usage - Major: Line 38 is unused!

    Line 38: pass out:"You're dead, my pretty[ADD_TEARS]"{"style":"Him"}



    Once you've fixed these issues, try letting me look your dialogue over again. Maybe I'll find something new.
     
  3. michealdark

    michealdark Potential Patron

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    Re: A possible snuff scenario dialog

    Thanks. Yeah, I need to fix that since it doesn't trigger right.

    edit: Made the adjustments. Hope it's alright now
     
  4. michealdark

    michealdark Potential Patron

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    Added a Sunset Shimmer/Flash Sentry scenario. Tell me what you think