Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Incredibly Devoured, May 14, 2012.
My first dialogue. Hope you like it!
YAY someone other than me is doing anime dialogue again YAY. ;D
Not bad. More references to the character's world would be nice. Except for a very few lines it could be said by anybody else. Something along the lines of "I wonder if aquarius does that with scorpio", "Wow it's really big, but I bet taurus' is even bigger" etc.
I can just picture Lucy right now.
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