DA Merrill Dialogue (1 Viewer)

secret_goblin

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Hello!

As a fan and a lover of mods. I was inspired by RajasGrime's Merrill hair and my love for Dragon Age, I created my first Dialogue.

I present for your consumption: DA_Merrill.

Thanks.
 

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SpectralTime

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This is a very good dialogue that well-captures the actual character. So... rock.

On the other hand... I feel it could use a bit of proofreading.
 

secret_goblin

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SpectralTime said:
This is a very good dialogue that well-captures the actual character. So... rock.

On the other hand... I feel it could use a bit of proofreading.

Thank you. I do have to say that spelling and punctuation are not my strong suits, having been a computer major in college.
 

Omnomimous

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secret_goblin said:
Thank you. I do have to say that spelling and punctuation are not my strong suits, having been a computer major in college.

I did a quick proofread and fixed the few errors I noticed. If someone could give me a quick explanation of how to upload it when clicking the browse button does nothing, then...
Meh, screw it. It's in the spoilers.

dialogue_name:"DA_Merrill"
CUSTOM
intro:"I'll try not to do this wrong. The way you want. I mean I'll try to do this the way you want. I'm babbling again. Let's go."
intro:"[HAPPY_MOOD]Over here, you- you vile, mean thing -giggle-"
intro:"Isabela taught me some things she says you will like."
intro:"[HAPPY_MOOD]why are you smiling? Is it something dirty?"
intro:""Where do I put that? There? It won't fit!"
intro:"I don't think that's a real snake. How would you keep it in there without it getting away? I mean- Oh, I'll stop talking now."
intro:"I learned a dirty spell from anders. Do you want to see it?"
intro:"[HAPPY_MOOD]Yes, ma vhenan?"

general:"[HAPPY_MOOD][LOOK_UP]I love you. I say that a lot. It makes things clearer, more reasoned. Oops, I'm babbling. I need to stop. Please stop me. -giggle-"
general:"I want your mark upon me*, YOU*."
general:"Things are about to get exciting!"
general:"You'll get more than you bargained for!"
general:"You brought this upon youself, you know."
general:"If you tell Varric about this, I will strangle you."
general:"It is hard like stone."
general:"Is this what they do in the Blooming Rose? I thought it was a brothel. What does this have to do with broth?"
general:"This would be nicer if we could do it in the sun. But then I guess everyone could see us. I don't know how I feel about that."
general:"Have I mentioned that I love you?"
general:"I'm glad you took me from the alienage. I want to stay with you always."
general:"Let's turn away from Messerre Pointy-Face. It feels like he is watching me."
general:"Aveline says only slatterns like to do this. does that make me a slattern? I think I like being a slattern."
general:"Did you hear something? Besides us, I mean."
general:"Do you think we could go swimming later?"
general:"Is this dirty? I feel dirty."
general:"I was told dirty is bad. But I like this."
general:"Maybe I need to stop talking."
general:"I'm so nervous. What if I do this wrong? What if I bite? Will you not want me to do this again?"
general:"Maybe Isabela could join us next time. I would like to see how she does it."
general:"Even mages need exercise."
general:"Do you think Andraste did this for the Maker?"
general:"I have to say, this is a nice break from being chased by Templars."
general:"-giggle-You're not going to say anything?"
general:""Ma vhenan."
general:"Are you happy? I am."
general:"Creators! That's a big one!"
general:"Creators!"
general:"Keeper help me!"
general:"[HAPPY_MOOD][LOOK_UP]The Keeper always said not to stop pulling hair. But you can pull mine.-giggle-"

restart:"Maybe I'll become a Cum Mage. Do you think there is such a thing?"
restart:"Maker's Breath! More!"
restart:"Even the parts of me that weren't black and blue are bruised now."
restart:"You are like the Dread Wolf himself! *FINISHES* already and you want more?"
restart:"Is this going to be a new tradition*, YOU*?"
restart:"So the first time in my mouth...an accident, right?"

interrupt:"-Oh, for the love of-"
interrupt:"-mmmm!"

cough:"[ADD_TEARS]-ack"
cough:[ADD_TEARS]-hack"

resistance:"[LOOK_UP]Please help me do this. You will, won't you?"
resistance:"Oh dear. I wasn't ready."
resistance:"I'm a little overwhelmed here!"
resistance:"It's much too long!"
resistance:"That should have worked. why did that not work?"
resistance:"That didn't go quite like I thought it would."
resistance:"Oh, I have an idea!"
resistance:"Oh, let me try again."
resistance:"I've tried everything. Can you help me?"
resistance:"I don't know why, but I feel nervous."
resistance:"It is not a spell I am familiar with."
resistance:"[SHOCK]It's enormous!"

first_throat:"[SHOCK]This is good, right?"
first_throat:"[SHOCK]Oh, that's gonna hurt-"
first_throat:"[SHOCK]It's no good. I can't..."

first_dt:"[SHOCK]My goodness, that was exciting!"
first_dt:"It occurs to me: How did Throating get it's name? Can you show me?"

pull_off:"[ADD_TEARS]Creators!"
pull_off:"[ADD_TEARS]Keeper help me!"
pull_off:"[ADD_TEARS]Creators! That's a big one!"

held:"[ADD_TEARS]I know Dalish are meant to be close to the earth. But we still need to breath!"
held:"[ADD_TEARS]I couldn't move!"
held:"[ADD_TEARS]I can't move!"

wake:"[COUGH]Can I just lie down for a moment[DROOL]."
wake:"[COUGH]Keeper Marethari? Is that you?[DROOL]"
wake:"[COUGH]I was in the Fade![DROOL]"

vigorous:"You are going as deep as the harbor![DROOL]"
vigorous:"It is my risk to take!"
vigorous:"This is so...intimate.[DROOL]"
vigorous:"It is like magic. It just takes practice."
vigorous:"Your swording is excellent[DROOL]."
vigorous:"[COUGH]Are you sure this is right? I've probably messed this up."
vigorous:"I'm sorry I can't do this anymore.[DROOL]"
vigorous:"[COUGH]I'm tiring."
vigorous:"Treat my mouth like the Deep roads!"

pre_cum:"Ma serannas! Oh, that was close[DROOL]."
pre_cum:"don't worry*, YOU*. I'm cumming!"

cum_on_face:"I think it's over. Do you think it's over? Is it over?"
cum_on_face:"More? Really*, YOU*? Even more? This is ridiculous!"
cum_on_face:"Does this mean I get my baby griffon? I'll name him Feathers. He'll be extra fluffy."
cum_on_face:"Is this like vallaslin? Does it come off? Do I have to keep wearing it?"
cum_on_face:"Is this what Isabela means when she talks about the salty spray in her face?"
cum_on_face:"Ma vhenan, I was thinking. Can we do this again?"

cum_in_mouth:"Ugh! This tastes terrible."
cum_in_mouth:""It's wonderful! Thank you!"
cum_in_mouth:"Shall I swallow? Am I supposed to swallow? I think I will swallow.[SWALLOW]"

cum_in_throat:"Bottoms up![DROOL]"
cum_in_throat:"[COUGH]I'll have to ask Isabela how she does this without choking."

cum_in_eye:"By the Creators! My eye? Really? Of all places. You did that on purpose*, YOU*.-giggle-"

swallow:"You're very kind. Thank you."
swallow:""I came...Did you?[DROOL]"
swallow:"Well, that was nice of you!"
swallow:"Did you enjoy that, ma vhenan? I did!"
swallow:"This is so much fun. I'm glad you asked me!"

DEFAULT:
general:"CLEAR"
resistance:"CLEAR"
interrupt:"CLEAR"
cough:"CLEAR"
first_throat:"CLEAR"
first_dt:"CLEAR"
pull_off:"CLEAR"
held:"CLEAR"
wake:"CLEAR"
vigorous:"CLEAR"
pre_cum:"CLEAR"
cum_on_face:"CLEAR"
cum_in_throat:"CLEAR"
cum_in_mouth:"CLEAR"
cum_in_eye:"CLEAR"
swallow:"CLEAR"
drool:"CLEAR"
restart:"CLEAR"
 

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