Slut stir up you! (1 Viewer)

ksk

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Hello!

This is my first dialogue and my first posting!


Situation:
The slut is accustomed to deepthroat blowjob,and stir up you.
She will show her serving techniques(self mode),and sometimes, she will enjoy being forced by you(forced mode).

In these 2 dialogues,sometimes you take turns offence and defence(the words like "my turn","grab my head"..).
At that time, please switch to manually.

I'm not familiar with English(I use translation software).
I think there is a mistake in grammar,and Stiff sentence.

If someone like these dialogues,please fix!
And I want more slutty word(Slang) for these dialogues.

Thank you!
 

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Queen of Clubs

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I did some slight editing to the forced version (to make it sound more natural, as you said you used a translator) I have tried to keep it as close to the original as possible.

EDIT: I made some really amateur mistakes on that version...so I have uploaded a new and improved version (whilst still keeping as close to KsK's original as possible)
 

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ksk

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Sep 25, 2011
THank you for fix!!
The dialogue became more wonderful!

I want to know more slutty and cool texts in english...
 

ksk

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Sep 25, 2011
female_boss

Hello

I tried to create a new dialog.
Maybe,grammar still fucked up...but enjoy it!
If possible,please correct as you like!

Situation:
She is your boss (company,army,pirates,bandit,secret society,etc).
You made ​​a great achievement at work,and she promise if you could do, she would give you any reward what you want.
And your demand is her throat...
 

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female_boss_forced.txt
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Xiombarg

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Looks like an interesting set of Dialogs here!

Goes well with my 'Office Lady' persona. I'll have to post that set of hair/BG/Code somewhere...

Always nice to see more fuel for the Imagination ;)
 

ksk

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Sep 25, 2011
Thanks!

I made it to express "High‐handed female give *you* the reward".

But I am not not familiar with English.
I need more fix about the grammars and representations.
 

booster

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hi ksk, the boss dialogue is a great idea, thank you for that! i hope you're not offended that i allowed myself to pimp it. keep in mind that english isn't my native language either, so there are surely some mistakes left, but i'll fix them if someone points them out
 

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ksk

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Thank you !

Both great dialogue!

Now,I'm struggling to make new dialogue..
About "Deal with the devil"
 

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