Dialogue was checked in 167 ms with v2.10 of the DialogueChecker.
I found 25 issue(s) with your dialogue, of which 0 were severe, 0 were major issues, and 25 were minor issues.
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 591, col 29 near "(...) it. I (...)"
Line 591: RESIST_E2L1:"[COUGH]Force it. I deserve it." {"set":{"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 712, col 31 near "(...) alive? You (...)"
Line 712: wakeE2L0:"Wha? I'm still alive? You should plug my throat again."{"set":{"LVL":"+3","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 713, col 31 near "(...) alive? You (...)"
Line 713: wakeE2L1:"Wha? I'm still alive? You should plug my throat again."{"set":{"LVL":"+2","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: Double space on line 714, col 31 near "(...) alive? You (...)"
Line 714: wakeE2L2:"Wha? I'm still alive? You should plug my throat again."{"set":{"LVL":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Sentence starting with a comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 720, col 14 near "CHANGE_HAPPY2:", (...)"
Line 720: CHANGE_HAPPY2:"*ME*,БББББББББ call me *YOU*.[HAPPY_MOOD][CHANGE_HAPPY3]"{"style":"him","set":{"EMO":3,"LVL":0,"InInc":0,"GenInc":0, "HeldInc":0, "SlapReady":0, "GrabInc":0, "ResistInc":0, "CumInc":0}}
Stripped Line 720: CHANGE_HAPPY2:", call me ."{"style":"him","set":{"EMO":3,"LVL":0,"InInc":0,"GenInc":0,"HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0,"GrabInc":0,"ResistInc":0,"CumInc":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 738, col 72 near "(...) prefer, ?""
Line 738: INTROE3L2I0_CONT:"[LOOK_DOWN]...or maybe in my tight little asshole, if you prefer, *YOU*?[LOOK_UP]"
Stripped Line 738: INTROE3L2I0_CONT:"...or maybe in my tight little asshole, if you prefer, ?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 747, col 35 near "(...) throat, , (...)"
Line 747: introE3L4I1:"Please rape my throat, *YOU*, as hard as you can." {"set":{"InInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 747: introE3L4I1:"Please rape my throat, , as hard as you can." {"set":{"InInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 750, col 19 near "(...) god , (...)"
Line 750: introE3L5I0:"Oh god *YOU*, my pussy is so wet." {"set":{"InInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 750: introE3L5I0:"Oh god , my pussy is so wet." {"set":{"InInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 755, col 24 near "head_grabbedE3L0G0:"Yes, ?" (...)"
Line 755: head_grabbedE3L0G0:"Yes, *YOU*?" {"set":{"GrabInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 755: head_grabbedE3L0G0:"Yes, ?" {"set":{"GrabInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 759, col 26 near "head_grabbedE3L1G1:"Please , (...)"
Line 759: head_grabbedE3L1G1:"Please *YOU*, slide it down my throat." {"set":{"HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 759: head_grabbedE3L1G1:"Please , slide it down my throat." {"set":{"HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 768, col 26 near "head_grabbedE3L4G1:"Please , (...)"
Line 768: head_grabbedE3L4G1:"Please *YOU*, shove it down my throat, hard." {"set":{"GrabInc":0,"HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 768: head_grabbedE3L4G1:"Please , shove it down my throat, hard." {"set":{"GrabInc":0,"HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before exclamation mark) on line 770, col 50 near "(...) please !" (...)"
Line 770: head_grabbedE3L5G0:"Fill my mouth with cum, please *YOU*!" {"set":{"GrabInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 770: head_grabbedE3L5G0:"Fill my mouth with cum, please !" {"set":{"GrabInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 773, col 17 near "SLAP_PREP_E3:"Yes ?""
Line 773: SLAP_PREP_E3:"Yes *YOU*?"
Stripped Line 773: SLAP_PREP_E3:"Yes ?"
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Double space on line 859, col 50 near "(...) squeezes cock (...)"
Line 859: heldE3H3T1:"[COUGH]I bet my vain gulping for air squeezes *YOUR* cock just right." {"style":"thought","set":{"HeldInc":"+1","SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 859: heldE3H3T1:"I bet my vain gulping for air squeezes cock just right." {"style":"thought","set":{"HeldInc":"+1","SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions:
Space before period for new line on line 862, col 28 near "(...) out, . I (...)"
Line 862: heldE3H4T1:"Don't freak out, *ME*. I can do this." {"style":"thought","set":{"HeldInc":"+1","SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 862: heldE3H4T1:"Don't freak out, . I can do this." {"style":"thought","set":{"HeldInc":"+1","SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Double space on line 920, col 18 near "(...) hope is (...)"
Line 920: CUMIN_E3C0:"I hope *YOU* is happy with me." {"style":"thought","set":{"CumInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 920: CUMIN_E3C0:"I hope is happy with me." {"style":"thought","set":{"CumInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Double space on line 921, col 32 near "(...) guzzling cum." (...)"
Line 921: CUMIN_E3C1:"Mmm, I love guzzling *YOUR* cum." {"style":"thought","set":{"CumInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 921: CUMIN_E3C1:"Mmm, I love guzzling cum." {"style":"thought","set":{"CumInc":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 935, col 45 near "(...) right, ?" (...)"
Line 935: hand_job_strokeE3L0H0:"Am I doing this right, *YOU*?" {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Stripped Line 935: hand_job_strokeE3L0H0:"Am I doing this right, ?" {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 947, col 49 near "(...) cum, ?" (...)"
Line 947: hand_job_strokeE3L2H2:"May I please help you cum, *YOU*?" {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Stripped Line 947: hand_job_strokeE3L2H2:"May I please help you cum, ?" {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 955, col 25 near "hand_job_strokeE3L4H0:"Oh , (...)"
Line 955: hand_job_strokeE3L4H0:"Oh *YOU*, I'm so horny right now." {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Stripped Line 955: hand_job_strokeE3L4H0:"Oh , I'm so horny right now." {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 960, col 32 near "(...) please , (...)"
Line 960: hand_job_strokeE3L5H0:"[LOOK_UP]Oh please *YOU*, I need this cock inside me." {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Stripped Line 960: hand_job_strokeE3L5H0:"Oh please , I need this cock inside me." {"set":{"HandInc":"+1"}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 971, col 57 near "(...) this, ?" (...)"
Line 971: HANDJOB_H4:"Does it feel good when I stroke it like this, *YOU*?" {"set":{"HandInc":0}}
Stripped Line 971: HANDJOB_H4:"Does it feel good when I stroke it like this, ?" {"set":{"HandInc":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Grammatical error (space before question mark) on line 972, col 40 near "(...) it, ?" (...)"
Line 972: HANDJOB_H4:"Do you like how I stroke it, *YOU*?" {"set":{"HandInc":0}}
Stripped Line 972: HANDJOB_H4:"Do you like how I stroke it, ?" {"set":{"HandInc":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Double space on line 977, col 19 near "(...) you for (...)"
Line 977: wakeE3L3:"Thank you *YOU* for choking your kinky little cock slut. It makes me so horny."{"set":{"LVL":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 977: wakeE3L3:"Thank you for choking your kinky little cock slut. It makes me so horny."{"set":{"LVL":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Grammar - Minor: The following issue was found after stripping the line of delay characters, triggers and variable substitutions.
Keep in mind that you can place characters in YOU/YOUR/ME/MY variable insertions, like "Hello*, YOU*!".
Space before comma (grammatical error) on dialogue line on line 978, col 17 near "(...) god, , (...)"
Line 978: wakeE3L4:"Oh god, *YOU*, my pussy is just dripping. What kind of demented slut have I become?"{"set":{"LVL":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Stripped Line 978: wakeE3L4:"Oh god, , my pussy is just dripping. What kind of demented slut have I become?"{"set":{"LVL":"+1","HeldInc":0,"SlapReady":0}}
Once you've fixed these issues, try letting me look your dialogue over again. Maybe I'll find something new.