poke trainer (1 Viewer)

[warhawk47]

My take on a pokemon trainer dialogue.
Not a "human battle" like the other poke trainer dialogue.
Backstory is this: You taunted her into betting one of her pokemon against yours in a battle. You win. Instead of giving it up she begs and pleads with you to reconsider. So you settle for a more... beneficial approach.

I'd like to include more poke puns but at the same time i didn't want it to sound quite as silly as the other poke trainer dialogue. I want it to sound realistic (for a pokemon game).
Any suggestions are welcome.

 

[DevilJinKazama]

I read through the dialogue and fixed some grammar and spelling issues I came across.

Didn't alter the dialogue in any way that's ~too~ noticable.[attachurl=1]

 

[warhawk47]

Grammar you say? O.o ill have to have a look. Thanks.
All i saw was that you switched the interrupts and coughing triggers to a neater format. They were directly transferred from the original dialogue so this was pointless.
If there's anything else then let me know.

 

[DevilJinKazama]

I was mostly some aesthetic changes.
Things like "Believe" instead of "beleive", "friend" instead of "freind", and "done soon" instead of "soon done".

And I rearranged the interrupts and coughs into a neater format.

Like I said, I didn't change it too much, just fixed some things that I came across that needed a li'l fixin'.

 

[Wathayus]

The Text is Impressive Good Work.

Please Post a Text Between Trainer and Pokemon.

Realy good work and Thx ^^

 

[warhawk47]

The Text is Impressive Good Work.

Please Post a Text Between Trainer and Pokemon.

Realy good work and Thx ^^

You mean like face fucking a pokemon?
JUst worried that would sound a lot like "Pika"