The Pit Dialogue - Kitty x Principal Long (1 Viewer)

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Hey everyone, long time lurker here. I recently have tried my hand at making some Dialogue and have found it rather challenging sometimes. I've made a few but this one is not from scratch, this one is heavily modified from a Dialogue posted in 2015 you can find that one here The Pit - Kitty Summers & Coach Black

Both the original and my edited one is based on the Pit comics from John Persons. The character code I used for the edited Dialogue is: charName:Kitty;mood:Normal;bodyScale:0.99625;arms:onlegs,onlegs;throatResist:50;hair:samus,1,1,1,1;iris:normal,56,100,137,1;breasts:112;skin:light;nose:normal;ear:normal;lipstick:0,197,64,109,0.851;eyeshadow:55,26,99,0.5;sclera:255,255,255,1;blush:196,80,77,0.35;freckles:60,24,24,0.8,0;mascara:0,0,0,1,20;nailpolish:0,0,0,0;eyebrow:normal,180,142,61,1,89,67,51,1;hairhsl:0,1,1,1;skinhsl:0,1,1,1;hisskinhsl:0,1,1,1;bg:3;hisBody:male;hisPenis:0,1.399,1.2460000000000002;balls:1,0.9877500000000013;hisSkin:1;hisTop:none,238,242,245,1;hisBottoms:none,27,29,29,1;hisFootwear:none,0,0,0,1;collar:none,0,0,0,1,232,240,255,1;cuffs:none,0,0,0,1,0,0,0,1;gag:none,0,0,0,1,0,0,0,1;panties:thong,255,255,255,1,0,0,0,1;top:none,212,0,0,1,0,0,0,1;armwear:none,0,0,0,1,0,0,0,1;bottoms:jeanshorts,63,118,162,1,212,0,0,1;tops:croppedtank,63,180,162,0.761,0,0,0,1;legwear:shortsock,255,255,255,0.8,0,0,0,1;footwear:school,255,255,255,1,255,255,255,1;eyewear:none,0,0,0,1,0,0,0,1;headwear:none,255,208,25,1,49,100,106,1;tonguePiercing:none,183,187,195,1,0,0,0,1;herTan:none,0;autoCloseEye:Normal;autoCloseMouth:Normal;breastfirmness:Normal,0.30000;cumRGB:255,252,247,1.10000,0.50000;moremoods:Normal;throatvanillabulge:0.43000;throatcumbulge:0,0.50000;superbellysize:0:0;himNotLetGo:Normal;nippleButton:Auto;swallowguzzle:0,0;ignoreherclothingpenis:IgnoreClothing;animtoolsVoice:0,1;moreclothingBG:School;Overtop:none,0,0,0,1,0,0,0,1

I know its a rather long code. Id love some constructive criticism so I can move on to making my own from scratch.
 

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Slingerbult

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Nice first go! One thing to consider is not using her speech lines that trigger when she can’t really speak, like first throat. You can also use more triggers, like moods and hand positions, to create a more varied dialogue.
 

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