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My Girlfriend has DID

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by TetsuyaHikari, Oct 19, 2011.

  1. TetsuyaHikari

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    Hey guys! I've got a new dialogue for ya and it's pretty interesting. It was difficult to write out, but I hope you think it's good enough, heh. So, here's a dialogue for a girl with a multiple personalitiy disorder (Dissociative Identity Disorder). I have chosen 10 different personalities for her and it was kind of difficult, but Here they are:

    Daddy's girl
    Timid
    Yandere
    Tsundere
    Depressed
    Stuck up
    Happy
    Willing slave
    Aggressive slave
    Scared

    I guess I kind of cheated with the "willing" and "aggressive" slave mindsets, but I think it worked out well enough. Also, you should be forewarned, the Depressed and Scared personalities are kind of..extreme. It's going to get even more crazy if my friend decides to record the lines for this. However, I just tried to keep a sense of realism with it instead of straying away from how she would actually behave, given her personality.

    Oh and "Happy" should actually be, "Cockloving slut" pretty much, heh. It's not really the kind of thing you see in real porn, but I was going for more of a girl that gets happier and happier throughout the scene, until finally, she just completely loses it when you cum. I have an interest in ahegao stuff, so that's why you'll see the intentional misspellings during some parts. Just try to imagine her with her mouth open, drooling, her mind broken, that sort of thing, then it will make more sense.

    It probably seems a bit repetitive with all of the hearts I have added to the dialogue this time, but with the Happy personality, it was fitting. Plus, the Happy personality has barely any lines compared to the whole dialogue, so it's not like you'll be seeing them that much anyway (unless random loves giving you the Happy lines every time you play, heh). I do it sometimes with the yandere lines as well, but once again..only because it was fitting at the time.

    My friend is going to have quite the time with this, to say the least, lol. It will be an excellent experience for her though, playing out all of these personalities and just going from a happy cockloving slut to a scared girl crying while begging her boyfriend to stop. In any event, I hope you guys enjoy it!

    Oh and before I forget, there's no real story here or any specific settings that fit the dialogue since her personality will keep changing, so just choose whatever you want :3

    EDIT: Oh! There's one more thing, lol. There's actually a Deus Ex reference in here, but it's fitting for the character given the situation. I couldn't believe I pulled that off, haha. It's funny, but so amazing at the same time because the line totally works.

    Can you find it? :3

    EDIT 2: Thanks to Kojiro for pointing out my god awful mistake of originally calling this schizophrenia, lol. I don't know what I was thinking. Geez >_<

    EDIT 3: Well, what do ya know. There's some inconsistency in this dialogue! That's a surprise, lol. There's a line that has, "till death do us part" in it. It's one of the yandere lines.

    It sounded rather fitting for that personality, but if she's really just a girlfriend, then they haven't got married yet. Derp. Y u do dis to me brain? Well, whatever. I'm leaving it in anyway, lol. Nothing's perfect, I suppose.

    Just imagine for that moment, she's your wife or something..I don't know. I doubt many people will even complain about this, but I just felt a little silly for not noticing it sooner X3

    EDIT 4: Melody sent me a sample she made earlier for this dialogue and wanted me to upload it for you guys to hear. I don't know how she plans on doing this, but..she's going to attempt to use a different voice for each personality. Is that crazy or what?! If she can do it like she says she can, this will be amazing >_<

    There's some background noise here, but meh..disregard it. It's just a sample anyway, heh. The final release won't have any of that present in it :3

    EDIT 5: Thanks to Necrous for pointing out a few typos I had in the dialogue. I uploaded the fixed version. Thanks! +Karma for you :o
     

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  2. kojiro

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    Re: Schizophrenic Girlfriend

    looks like multiple personality not schizophrenia
     
  3. TetsuyaHikari

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    Re: Schizophrenic Girlfriend

    Hmmm..that's weird. Whenever I saw stuff on TV about schizophrenia, it was always people who had multiple personalities. I guess I'll change the filename and stuff then, lol. Thanks!

    I guess I should have done more research before settling on a name for this =3=
     
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    Re: Schizophrenic Girlfriend

    lol the way tv/hollywood portrays mental problems is ridiculous and thats why alot of people usually thinks a schizo is someone who has multiple personality disorder, i used to myself ;)
     
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    Re: Schizophrenic Girlfriend

    Well, I fixed it now, heh. Thanks again! I feel like an idiot though. The more you know though, I guess X3
     
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    Multiple Personalitys, Schizo, Crazy... Just sounds like a normal Woman to me. haha! Great Text though!
     
  7. TetsuyaHikari

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    Thanks! It was really hard trying to come up with the yandere lines. You just don't really ever see yandere characters in sexual situations, lol. So it was hard to imagine how they would react when taking a cumshot, drinking cum, etc. I think I nailed the drooling line for that personality though, heh.

    "....whose name did you just say?" after she spits out the cum. Damn. If I accidentally called out the wrong girl's name after cumming inside of her mouth, then saw her spit my cum out and say that to me, I'd probably shit a brick, lol. That was definitely an, "OH SHI-" kind of moment. It captured the personality very well :3
     
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    This would be a good one to add audio to and make a swf.
    (Rune said Hopefully) ;D
     
  9. TetsuyaHikari

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    Well, Melody just told me she would do it, but she wants to work on the Runaway Girl dialogue first :D
     
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    Sweetness!
     
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    Oh definitely! We talked for a little bit earlier on mic and she gave me a couple of demonstrations of her younger voice and I was like, "omgasoihsaiuhfasifuhaygiusf", hahaha. It was really awesome. It really fits the character well since she's timid and stuff.

    I swear. If the voice doesn't make your heart melt, nothing will. It's incredibly cute >_<
     
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    Looking forward to it. +rep when it happens, sir!
     
  13. TetsuyaHikari

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    Thanks, but just be sure to keep her in mind too! She's done so much work for the Kidnapped Daughter dialogue already (she recorded 182 lines in two days o.o). She's a very dedicated person. I think the Runaway Girl dialogue and this one will be better though (there were some audio issues for the first recording, but mistakes are bound to occur on your first project X3).
     
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    Well, I wasn't really talking about the +rep, lol. I'm just trying to make sure people keep in mind that it's a project between her and myself, but I honestly feel as though she's doing more of the work here. Sure, I came up with the dialogue, but that's not compared to actually acting out the personality, voicing it, and stuff.

    She has as just as big of a role in this (actually bigger, I'd say) as I do.
     
  16. DevilJinKazama

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    Maybe you should reward her for all her hard work with a nice dinner, to thank her for her voice.

    Also, make sure that voice stays crisp. I'm looking forward to hearing it in SDT.
     
  17. TetsuyaHikari

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    Yep. It will definitely stay crisp. There were some distortion issues with some of the lines in Kidnapped Daughter since she recorded them too close to the mic, but those mistakes won't happen in the next two dialogues. She's aware of the mistake, as am I.

    It's very rare that the first project ever turns out as well as you had hoped it would anyway, so I guess we're both prepared to accept that, heh. This one as well as Runaway Girl will definitely be better though. We will strive to improve! I hope you guys enjoy it :3
     
  18. DeliciousFlatChest

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    I made an account just to say this.

    Do you know that Batman character... the one with the cutesy clown costume that hangs around with The Joker?
    Her name is Harley Quinn. I think her voice (accent and all) would suit this transcript amazingly.

    And I would pay money to listen to that voice with this transcript. Lots of money.
     
  19. TetsuyaHikari

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    Heh..you're probably right. Still though, I have to give my friend, Melody, props for trying to use 10 different voices for this dialogue. Granted, I suppose that's child's play for a professional, but she's an amateur much like myself.

    I look forward to seeing how she does. Oh and awesome name. I <3 DFC :3
     
  20. DeliciousFlatChest

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    Hey, there's no reason why there can't be an alternative voice pack.

    Oh, you love me?