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Part 1
In the dead of night, around 11 PM, 19-year-old Ayanna was about to go to bed after a long day of work. Still in her work uniform, she took everything off and hopped in the shower. As soon as she turned the water on, she heard her front door opening. Curious, she wrapped a towel around her and peeked downstairs to find the door closed and nobody there. Thinking it just may have been her boyfriend coming home early from his overnight shift, she didn't question it and returned to take her shower.
While she bathed, she heard footsteps coming up and they stopped just outside of the bathroom door. "I'm almost done, baby.", she said. After a few minutes, she turned off the water and stepped out of the tub, wrapping the towel around her. She walked to the door, seeing the outline of feet just outside. Confused, she opened it, "Why would you stand in front of the do-OOUFFF!" Just as she opened the door, a gloved fist had interrupted her and drove deep in her stomach.
She immediately doubled over in pain and began to violently cough, holding her stomach. She looked up and was frightened to see that it wasn't her boyfriend, but a man in a mask. His 6'5 towered over her 5'1, he wore all black, the only noticeable thing about him was his green eyes and he was built like a brick house.
He grabbed her by the hair and threw her into the hallway as she screamed. She managed to stand up and tried to run, but he was too quick for her. He got a hold of her and slammed her back-first onto a nearby wall. Disoriented, soaking wet naked and shaking, she pleaded, "P-Please don't hurt m-me... I'll give you my money, just let me go!"
Her please fell on deaf ears as he reeled his massive fist back and punched her stomach again, "HURRRGH!!", a deep thud sound was made on contact, her eyes shut tight from the pain and she grabbed her stomach. Struggling to get air in her lungs, her body twitched.
He forced her to straighten up, and he rammed another punch in her midsection, "UGGGGH!!" She fell on her knees and held her stomach, her forehead on the ground. She coughed and gagged whilst crying. A few seconds later, the man kicked her side like a football, causing her to be on her back.
Feeling nauseous and dizzy, all poor Ayanna could do was softly cry and cough. She tried to get some air in her, but that was immediately stopped by the man's boot slamming into her lower belly. She gasped in pain and coughed up a drop of saliva, too much in pain to even hold her stomach.
The man then got on top of her and started to pound away at her already beaten stomach. Her loud grunts soon turned into low groans as she was slowly losing consciousness. The last punch somehow seemed like the hardest one she received yet, his fist so deep in her red stomach that it almost disappeared. She kept gasping for air and twitching from the pain, her eyes were glazed and her cheeks drenched in tears.
With his job done, he unmasked in front of her and gave her a kiss on her cheek before quickly running out of the house, leaving her in shock and tremendous pain.
Police arrived shortly after and discovered her. They called for an ambulance for her. One of the officers found a note near the bathroom door and sighed when he read it, clearly knowing who did this: 'From your friendly neighborhood Gut-Punching Maniac. See you at the next house'
In the dead of night, around 11 PM, 19-year-old Ayanna was about to go to bed after a long day of work. Still in her work uniform, she took everything off and hopped in the shower. As soon as she turned the water on, she heard her front door opening. Curious, she wrapped a towel around her and peeked downstairs to find the door closed and nobody there. Thinking it just may have been her boyfriend coming home early from his overnight shift, she didn't question it and returned to take her shower.
While she bathed, she heard footsteps coming up and they stopped just outside of the bathroom door. "I'm almost done, baby.", she said. After a few minutes, she turned off the water and stepped out of the tub, wrapping the towel around her. She walked to the door, seeing the outline of feet just outside. Confused, she opened it, "Why would you stand in front of the do-OOUFFF!" Just as she opened the door, a gloved fist had interrupted her and drove deep in her stomach.
She immediately doubled over in pain and began to violently cough, holding her stomach. She looked up and was frightened to see that it wasn't her boyfriend, but a man in a mask. His 6'5 towered over her 5'1, he wore all black, the only noticeable thing about him was his green eyes and he was built like a brick house.
He grabbed her by the hair and threw her into the hallway as she screamed. She managed to stand up and tried to run, but he was too quick for her. He got a hold of her and slammed her back-first onto a nearby wall. Disoriented, soaking wet naked and shaking, she pleaded, "P-Please don't hurt m-me... I'll give you my money, just let me go!"
Her please fell on deaf ears as he reeled his massive fist back and punched her stomach again, "HURRRGH!!", a deep thud sound was made on contact, her eyes shut tight from the pain and she grabbed her stomach. Struggling to get air in her lungs, her body twitched.
He forced her to straighten up, and he rammed another punch in her midsection, "UGGGGH!!" She fell on her knees and held her stomach, her forehead on the ground. She coughed and gagged whilst crying. A few seconds later, the man kicked her side like a football, causing her to be on her back.
Feeling nauseous and dizzy, all poor Ayanna could do was softly cry and cough. She tried to get some air in her, but that was immediately stopped by the man's boot slamming into her lower belly. She gasped in pain and coughed up a drop of saliva, too much in pain to even hold her stomach.
The man then got on top of her and started to pound away at her already beaten stomach. Her loud grunts soon turned into low groans as she was slowly losing consciousness. The last punch somehow seemed like the hardest one she received yet, his fist so deep in her red stomach that it almost disappeared. She kept gasping for air and twitching from the pain, her eyes were glazed and her cheeks drenched in tears.
With his job done, he unmasked in front of her and gave her a kiss on her cheek before quickly running out of the house, leaving her in shock and tremendous pain.
Police arrived shortly after and discovered her. They called for an ambulance for her. One of the officers found a note near the bathroom door and sighed when he read it, clearly knowing who did this: 'From your friendly neighborhood Gut-Punching Maniac. See you at the next house'
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