Attention whore dialog

thegnu

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Here is my second attempt an time to give a lil something back, I had edited an fooled with few dialogs, read over some of the great ones on here an even started one that turned out to be way to ambitious for a noob . (although I may return to it later.) this was written on slingerbuilts bundle. use a school background , a somewhat flat chested girl sexy yet plain jane type , an play along with her for a while . input appreciated . enjoy.
 

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Garfunkel

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Not bad at all. Didn't really spot any typos. There was a very long pause between first deepthroat and until she commented the first time, but maybe it was just my Flash acting up. On the second try, she was more talkative, which is good. Thanks!
 

thegnu

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Cool thank you. I started working with this dialog a little more , I am attempting to add more features an what not when I have that finished I will re release.
 
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