ZERO's dialogue: Update 9/15 (1 Viewer)
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anonymous
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Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)
I'll be honest, I've been very skeptical of the whole dialogue thing, and I don't really care for dialogues in general... but my sheer love for the Zelda series and Saria in general forced me to read your dialogue.
It's not bad, but plenty grammar/punctuation errors, which is a boner killer for me.
Regardless of whether or not I like dialogues or your dialogue, I approve and I applaud you.
I'll be honest, I've been very skeptical of the whole dialogue thing, and I don't really care for dialogues in general... but my sheer love for the Zelda series and Saria in general forced me to read your dialogue.
It's not bad, but plenty grammar/punctuation errors, which is a boner killer for me.
Regardless of whether or not I like dialogues or your dialogue, I approve and I applaud you.
DevilJinKazama
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Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)
Your Saria looks pretty good.
I'm kinda looking forward to seeing what you can make of the rest.
If I might be so bold: If you're doing Leliana, what about Morrigan?
I'd absolutely LOVE to have my SDT Morrigan have some of her spirit.
Your Saria looks pretty good.
I'm kinda looking forward to seeing what you can make of the rest.
If I might be so bold: If you're doing Leliana, what about Morrigan?
I'd absolutely LOVE to have my SDT Morrigan have some of her spirit.
Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 (Saria Self mode)
I think I fixed some of the grammer mistakes, if you could point out the mistakes in a pm I could fix them right away and it would help with future dialogue. Not that you have to or anything, I mostly glad you even read my post! ;D Also to know your a Zelda fan is an extra win!
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I think I fixed some of the grammer mistakes, if you could point out the mistakes in a pm I could fix them right away and it would help with future dialogue. Not that you have to or anything, I mostly glad you even read my post! ;D Also to know your a Zelda fan is an extra win!
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Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/11 again (fixed grammer(Maybe) and some mistakes)
My only big problem was that you used "your" when you meant "you're". I fixed some other things if you want to look it over, but I'll remove the attachment in a bit.
Also, you said "chocking", when it's "choking"
My only big problem was that you used "your" when you meant "you're". I fixed some other things if you want to look it over, but I'll remove the attachment in a bit.
Also, you said "chocking", when it's "choking"
Re: ZERO's dialogue Updated 9/12 ZELDA! and some other things
It would be good, if Leliana and Morrigan monologue will be based on their romances ^^
Also Morrigan monologue should have place after events from Witch Hunt (You heard about that DLC - It allow Morrigan and Warden finally be together)
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Also, you could write dialog for Merrill or Isabela from Dragon Age 2. Or even for Bethany ^^
It would be good, if Leliana and Morrigan monologue will be based on their romances ^^
Also Morrigan monologue should have place after events from Witch Hunt (You heard about that DLC - It allow Morrigan and Warden finally be together)
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Also, you could write dialog for Merrill or Isabela from Dragon Age 2. Or even for Bethany ^^
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