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[onlinehero]

Yall didn't seem to enjoy this one too much :/
What should i change for next time?

Character maybe? :P
I dunno about others but I've noticed that I'm lot more interested in reading when it's about some superheroine/video game girl that I know. Images help too.

 

[mm_mml]

Most people prefer to just lurk instead of comment and agree about the character thing. imo its more enjoyable if its ryona about a character I already know about