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[PC] Corrupting the priestess

Discussion in 'Adult Games' started by pyorgara, Jan 14, 2016.

  1. pyorgara

    pyorgara Vivacious Visitor Content Creator

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    Hello everyone!

    I have completed my first game and want to share it with the world. I tried to keep it as simple as possible since I am sure you all know the pain of playing a high reaching game but it stops somewhere in the middle because the author aimed too high and burned out. That said, I did write the equivalent of a small book (a little more than 200 pages) so there is plenty of content.

    Originally, I was working with an artist but she got a good job offer almost right at the start of the project and could only do a little bit of art on the side. So it turned into a text game with some chibis.

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    You play as Marcus, a very successful businessman that is about to foreclose on a church when a very tempting offer is dropped in his laps by Aliane, the gorgeous high priestess.

    You can download it here: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Pyorgara/398129/Corrupting-priestess
    If you enjoyed it and want to support me as I work on my next game: http://patreon.com/Pyorgara
     
  2. gardenvarietyshark

    gardenvarietyshark Avid Affiliate

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    Not bad for a first game! Your writing is there already for game-level dialogue and descriptions, and you can clearly improve even further with broader expression and vocabulary. Should only be a matter of practice. The language was correct, too, which is rare to find in H games (and not just the badly translated Japanese stuff) - a fluent reading experience draws the reader in.

    The visuals are a throwback to the Flash dating sims of yore, but luckily the game doesn't rely on them. While basic, they do flesh out the world and UI nicely, and nothing too overt struck out; a good way to experiment with Unity and user interaction. Hiring/working with an artist was a good idea, it should be a funding goal.

    Speaking of, I'm not sure paywalling voting completely is the best of ideas if you're looking for quick input. Voting in general can be aggravating if it concerns main story material and not extras and bonuses, since you lose creative freedom and the ability to reshape things later - free voting, paywall bonus scenes? You could still paywall free-form input, as that takes time to go over and can otherwise be a nuisance.

    Releasing a finished, tasty morsel like this as a sample should convice people of your ability. Now it's just a matter of picking the right subject/fetishes and releasing regularly to keep people interested.

    I prefer not to use Patreon and monthly instalments for sleaze, but I'll probably be inclined to buy a finished product once one eventually comes out, or maybe early access if it's on offer.
     
  3. pyorgara

    pyorgara Vivacious Visitor Content Creator

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    Thanks!

    My decision for the vote paywall is that I do really want to hear from my fans about what they want in my games but I want to wait until I get a big enough pool to start it so that it's not all decided by two or three fans.
     
  4. tigera

    tigera Potential Patron

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    Can someone upload it to mega or mediafire? I'm having troubles accessing the site, it doesn't open for me :/
     
  5. pyorgara

    pyorgara Vivacious Visitor Content Creator

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    Hello everyone!

    CtP is now on version 1.1
    -Minor bug fix.
    -Changed the file names to CtP.
    -Made a "The End" button instead of using the sex one to remove confusion.
    -Added an item to the store to help remove some end of the game grinding.
    -Added Linux version.

    Hey Tigera. I use mega for all my download links. If you are not already, you should use firefox to download. Mega seems to hate IE.
     
  6. tigera

    tigera Potential Patron

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    I am using it. The problem is for some reason the hentai foundry website always redirects me to youtube. Same problem with other browsers :/
     
  7. pyorgara

    pyorgara Vivacious Visitor Content Creator

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    Youtube? That's weird. It kind of sounds like some weird virus on your machine.

    Here are the links. Maybe you'll have better luck over here.
    Win - https://mega.nz/#!jZlkHJaZ!-NXrfW3sov_fC7IL36nstoOImB1lC3pFoy6bqOw-UrQ
    Mac - https://mega.nz/#!DRVXnbBJ!_LWR9DRzKTlHSMn45hXqXwxTApzeDZVKOs93A-C0ohw
    Linux - https://mega.nz/#!uA8DwJTL!MBlcTkbuoy7lW8xcM3KnTlvORa6uhRLBGVAe4Qc5EXA
     
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