TheCrimsonRisk
Ryonani Teamster
- Joined
- Jun 10, 2010
Another collaborative effort with Raden. I wanted to do something different, writing from the perspective of the attacker. That's a potentially dark path to tread, so who better to accompany me than my fellow fiction writer? The format will be a series of log/diary entries, so it might be confusing at first. Comments are more than welcome!
Kasumi - The Mist Catchers
Mirimudo’s Journal – Operation: Mist Catcher, Day 1
The preparations were complete. Months and months of planning to ensure that the operation would be successful. Her allies were disabled or distracted. She would be isolated. The kunoichi’s run was finally at an end. Kasumi was coming home.
*****
I’d studied every inch of footage the Mugen Tenshin had of her, which wasn’t as much as I’d hoped. Still, I was known for my meticulous nature and there wasn’t a detail that would escape me. The way she angled her body as she flipped through the air. The swirl of petals that followed her wherever she went. The sound of her breathing and the beat of her heart. If there were a hair astray, I would make note of it. One must go to these lengths to hunt that which cannot be hunted.
Studying her from a few hundred yards away, I tense up. My fingers dig into the binoculars. Never been this close to the target. Can’t lose focus now.
*****
She sensed my presence. My camouflage was flawless and I’d gone as far as to mask my scent, but the moment I got within twenty feet of her she knew something was amiss. Her nose crinkled, her eyes widened and I could see she was readying herself for an attack.
I had thought that she would be vulnerable as she took a moment to reflect in front of the shimmering pool. This was a mistake. As I sprung from my hiding place, she immediately turned to face me. She said something that I ignored. I knew better than to give her any information or any time to formulate a strategy. Instead, I pounced.
The element of surprise was the only reason I was able to lay a finger on her. I got in close, so close that the intoxicating smell of cherry blossoms filled my nostrils. My hands gripped her shoulders and I moved to restrain her arms. She slipped free and moved to create distance between us. Another question: “who are you?” or “who sent you?” I give her nothing.
In addition to my keen observational skills, I prided myself on my physique. I may not have been the biggest or the most skilled fighter in the clan, but I made up for it with raw power. One good shot is all it would take for me to slow down and then incapacitate Kasumi. One good shot was more than she would allow.
Again and again, my fists whizzed by her head. My hands clutched at nothing as I tried to grab her waist. I grew frustrated at her illusiveness, nearly shouting out at her to engage me directly. That would only let her know how effective her style was. I was wasting my energy. I had to wait for her to make a mistake.
With an artist’s precision, she chipped away at me with piercing strikes and heavy kicks. I knew she couldn’t finish me with a single blow. Her persistence was admirable. If I wasn’t careful, I would be like a large boulder just waiting to crumble. Luckily, she overextended on a kick that jarred my skull and I was able to take the leg and trip her. Holding on, I used my free hand to drive a hammer fist into her soft belly. Her hands moved to cover up the area and I dove down next to her, dropping an arm around her neck. If I could secure my legs around her, she would be asleep in seconds.
I threw one leg over, which gave me some leverage on the choke. She gasped and I paused for a half second. Something about her pained voice...I...I had to end this quickly. Her defence was excellent. Clearly she was experienced dealing with grapplers who had wanted to twist up and torture her. Thugs and ruffians. All I did was for the clan.
Showing extraordinary flexibility, she positioned herself at an angle I’d never seen before and my choke attempt was neutralized. I scrambled to move to another position. It was too late. Kasumi flipped up and over me and this time made no mistake in her attack. Two feet slammed right into the centre of my face. I fell back, for a moment seeing nothing but blackness. I worried I had died, looking up at the furious angel staring down at me.
“Before I put you down for good, you will answer me: who are you?”
Kasumi - The Mist Catchers
Mirimudo’s Journal – Operation: Mist Catcher, Day 1
The preparations were complete. Months and months of planning to ensure that the operation would be successful. Her allies were disabled or distracted. She would be isolated. The kunoichi’s run was finally at an end. Kasumi was coming home.
*****
I’d studied every inch of footage the Mugen Tenshin had of her, which wasn’t as much as I’d hoped. Still, I was known for my meticulous nature and there wasn’t a detail that would escape me. The way she angled her body as she flipped through the air. The swirl of petals that followed her wherever she went. The sound of her breathing and the beat of her heart. If there were a hair astray, I would make note of it. One must go to these lengths to hunt that which cannot be hunted.
Studying her from a few hundred yards away, I tense up. My fingers dig into the binoculars. Never been this close to the target. Can’t lose focus now.
*****
She sensed my presence. My camouflage was flawless and I’d gone as far as to mask my scent, but the moment I got within twenty feet of her she knew something was amiss. Her nose crinkled, her eyes widened and I could see she was readying herself for an attack.
I had thought that she would be vulnerable as she took a moment to reflect in front of the shimmering pool. This was a mistake. As I sprung from my hiding place, she immediately turned to face me. She said something that I ignored. I knew better than to give her any information or any time to formulate a strategy. Instead, I pounced.
The element of surprise was the only reason I was able to lay a finger on her. I got in close, so close that the intoxicating smell of cherry blossoms filled my nostrils. My hands gripped her shoulders and I moved to restrain her arms. She slipped free and moved to create distance between us. Another question: “who are you?” or “who sent you?” I give her nothing.
In addition to my keen observational skills, I prided myself on my physique. I may not have been the biggest or the most skilled fighter in the clan, but I made up for it with raw power. One good shot is all it would take for me to slow down and then incapacitate Kasumi. One good shot was more than she would allow.
Again and again, my fists whizzed by her head. My hands clutched at nothing as I tried to grab her waist. I grew frustrated at her illusiveness, nearly shouting out at her to engage me directly. That would only let her know how effective her style was. I was wasting my energy. I had to wait for her to make a mistake.
With an artist’s precision, she chipped away at me with piercing strikes and heavy kicks. I knew she couldn’t finish me with a single blow. Her persistence was admirable. If I wasn’t careful, I would be like a large boulder just waiting to crumble. Luckily, she overextended on a kick that jarred my skull and I was able to take the leg and trip her. Holding on, I used my free hand to drive a hammer fist into her soft belly. Her hands moved to cover up the area and I dove down next to her, dropping an arm around her neck. If I could secure my legs around her, she would be asleep in seconds.
I threw one leg over, which gave me some leverage on the choke. She gasped and I paused for a half second. Something about her pained voice...I...I had to end this quickly. Her defence was excellent. Clearly she was experienced dealing with grapplers who had wanted to twist up and torture her. Thugs and ruffians. All I did was for the clan.
Showing extraordinary flexibility, she positioned herself at an angle I’d never seen before and my choke attempt was neutralized. I scrambled to move to another position. It was too late. Kasumi flipped up and over me and this time made no mistake in her attack. Two feet slammed right into the centre of my face. I fell back, for a moment seeing nothing but blackness. I worried I had died, looking up at the furious angel staring down at me.
“Before I put you down for good, you will answer me: who are you?”
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