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Bodybuilder Ryona (warning: guro and snuff)

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  1. Dilahk

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    Bodybuilder Ryona




    Mina Mitsuoka
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    Mina tall is a young sexy Asian American bodybuilder and model. She is 5'10" and weighs 168 pounds of muscle. She is a young college girl who was one day approached by a fight promoter and told that she can make a ton of money as a fighter, and that it would only be a one time deal. Mina accepted the deal and she followed through on her part.


    Few days later, Mina shows up at the fight club barefoot and dressed in her fitness attire, red spandex bra with blue spandex shorts, her long hair wrapped into a ball on the back of her head.


    Mina is escorted to the arena which is a large steel cage made of chain mesh and she walks into the cage. Inside the steel cage, Mina's opponent for the day is waiting for her. On the arena floor is dried blood from various fighters who have been killed in the past.


    Mina faces her opponent, the opponent looks as though she's dressed up for hollowed, the opponent wears a strange outfit with design patterns on it, a tiara on her forehead and a long cape down her back and a proud beautiful smile on her face. The opponent also appears to be very muscular as well, the opponent though is shorter than Mina as the opponent is actually 5'7" and only 150 pounds of muscle but despite all of this there is much more to her that meets the eye as Mina has just met her and could be in for one hell of a fight.
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    Before the announcement starts, Mina panders to the crowd of spectators as they look on in anticipation wondering what will happen and Mina faces her opponent and brags at her as she shows off her sexy muscular body.


    Mina flexes her arms and her pecs as well as her thighs while she's slightly bent forward and smiles at the opponent, "Hey you! Check out these guns!"
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    The opponent frowns as she takes some offense to Mina's arrogance but remains firm as the opponent doesn't say a word. The crowd suddenly begin to turn against Mina as they start to dislike her showmanship and poses, what the crowd knows about Mina's opponent, is something Mina will have to find out about the hard way.


    Mina moves her left hand close to her hip while leaning to the right and flexes her right bicep showing her arm muscle, she tries to deliver a message that she is stronger than her opponent and that she will easily overpower the match and be on her way.
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    The opponent then smiles and nods her head at Mina as she remains quiet and then as Mina continues to flex, she turns around and shows her back, flexes both arms up while also flexing her back muscles, while Mina does have a cute tight ass as well as nice shapely tits, her muscular frame doesn't look too imposing or threatening and even if it was enough to make the opponent feel intimidated, Mina would still have a hell of a fight.
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    Mina hears the crowd starting to boo her, she does her best to ignore it as she concludes with her final pose as she turns to the side facing the opponent and smiles back at her and flexes one last time.

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    After so much flexing and posing the announcer finally gets the fight started, "Now presenting the challenger…"



    The crowd boos louder before the announcer could even finish, the announcer understands the reason behind the booing and he continues, "Minaaaaaaa Mitsuokaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!"


    The crowd wants to throw food and objects in the arena and only at Mina but thankfully she and her opponent are protected by a large cage. However, opponents in the past had screamed begging to escape the cage. The announcer then gets to Mina's opponent, "Now presenting the undefeated champion…"


    Mina then hears the crowd's attitude change and they all scream and go wild like people who learn of a celebrity being in the area. Mina nearly defecated herself from shock as she starts to feel nervous and gets a strange chill down her spine and throughout her entire body. The announcer continues, "…with a total streak of 279 wins! Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you: Valkaaaaaa Daaaarrrrkaaaaaaannnnn!!!!!!"


    Everyone in the audience then gives a standing ovation to the champion that has never been defeated in her life. Mina gets a nervous feeling in her stomach like she either has to fart or take a huge bowel movement on the toilet for hours. Mina then faces the champion whom she disrespected with her arrogance and Valka Darkaan looks at her opponent Mina and Mina enters a martial art stance, Mina is not a black belt as she never finished getting her way to 1st dan black belt but she hopes she can overpower her opponent with brute strength.


    Darkaan on the other hand doesn't even enter a fighting stance to let Mina know she will engage her. Darkaan speaks to Mina but at the same time as she speaks, she talks with an accent that nobody has ever heard before. Darkaan speaks with an unearthly accent and at the same time her voice gives a guttural echo, "You attempt to disrespect me with your arrogance human. You think a battle between warriors is about raw strength? You shall suffer a fitting end that will forever remind you in the afterlife at how pathetic you were when you were alive. Pray to any telgoo you wish, just know there is no form of Askuftu that has ever proven to have an existing telgoo to intervene and save."


    Mina looks at her feeling confused wondering what Darkaan actually meant by the following words, "What? Telgoo…? Askuftu…?"


    Darkaan explains to her, "On my home world, telgoo is what you humans call deity or god, Askuftu is what you humans call religion."


    Mina understands better but at the same time, she wonders if she is doomed as she is face to face with an alien from a far away world. Darkaan starts off the fight, she takes Mina by surprise as she dashes toward her with incredible speed almost nigh-impossible for the naked eye to see. Mina feels a hard strike at her chest knocking her off her feet and she is hurled far across the arena and her back crashes against the cage and she falls to the ground landing on her front and the crowd goes wild. They all know Mina is gonna pay a high price for showing off like that.


    Mina gets up and she looks at Darkaan, standing still in a pose with her right palm extended. Mina gulps as she tries to figure out what kind of creature the intergalactic alien warrior Valka Darkaan is. Valka Darkaan possesses superhuman speed and strength as well as flight and energy projection. If she wanted to, she can easily use her powers and kill Mina but for now, Darkaan will keep the fight straight forward and simple, so far, Mina has already earned her disgust and anger.


    Mina enters a martial art stance again but then she has a change of heart and she enters a wrestling stance as she bends forward and holds out both open palms and is ready to try and outwrestle Darkaan. The blonde alien warrior raises her right eyebrow giving Mina a "are-you-kidding-me?" type of look and then Darkaan goes along with it as Mina does want to test Darkaan's strength at Mina's very own risk.


    Darkaan and Mina press their palms against the others and their fingers lock tightly and they both try and wrestle each other. The audience cheer on. Mina begins to struggle against Darkaan, Darkaan doesn't show any sign of struggling as her face remains calm and she feels like Mina's strength is like that of a lightweight weakling. Despite the fact that all of Mina's muscles bulge and flex as she puts all her strength into it, nothing happens. Mina's firm buttocks twitch and jiggle like jello as her body vibrates from the struggling of this test of strength. Sweat pours down Mina's face as she grits her teeth and her biceps, forearm muscles, thigh and calf muscles, her pecs, her back muscles and her abs all bulge showing that with all these muscles she is as strong as an ox but compared to Darkaan, she is nothing more than a pathetic lightweight loser.


    Mina slowly drops down to one knee as she is slowly forced down and is losing this wrestling game, Mina lost in her own game of wrestling. She refuses to be beaten but even as she feels pressure in her wrists, she knows that Darkaan is winning and at the same time, Mina refuses to admit that there is someone stronger than herself.


    Darkaan feeling like this test of strength is getting nowhere, she immediately breaks the grip and raises her right knee upward ramming it against Mina's face and Mina's head jerks back hard and blood sprays out her mouth and a few front teeth fly out her mouth as well. Mina gets up onto her feet and Darkaan rams her fist low and hard into Mina's gut and Mina bends forward, her eyes become somewhat crossed and her cheeks puff like a fish as she feels the wind knocked from her, Mina's tight buttocks swinging back and twitching and jiggling like jello and her feet bounce off the ground and then Mina drops to her knees and is bent forward and clutches her hurting stomach in pain.


    Darkaan looks down at the asian bodybuilder feeling even more disgusted as well as embarrassed for her. Darkaan then delivers a hard kick to Mina's right hip knocking her off the ground with incredible force and Mina's muscular body is launched off the ground and hurled across the arena and Mina's back horizontally crashes against the cage and then she lands on her front. The crowd continues to cheer, not caring if the fight will be one-sided or not.


    Darkaan takes her time, her eyes begin to glow bright blue and almost as if wind is blowing against her hair and her cape, Darkaan begins to levitate herself and she slowly hovers her way toward Mina who rolls over onto her back and sees the powerful undefeated champion hovering toward her. Mina tries her best not to feel unfazed at the fact that she is faced with a powerful opponent who is not only winning but possesses other abilities that most humans just don't have.


    Darkaan has faced many men and women in the arena, some of whom died a clean death or a messy death, but the ones who died messy, it's because they've disappointed her. The one's who died clean it's because they impressed her with their honorable warrior hood. For Darkaan, Mina is no warrior, she is a fool who is asking to get her body broken and in the most gruesome and graphic manner.


    As Darkaan slowly hovers her way toward Mina, she tells Mina in her alien voice, "You're body will break human!"


    Mina gulps after hearing that threat. She doesn't want to die in an underground fight club as such. Mina gathers as much strength as she can to get herself back up on her feet, she must survive this battle. Mina gets up on her feet and she screams as she charges toward Darkaan and lunges at Darkaan and she successfully tackles Darkaan to the ground after performing a textbook spear tackle and Darkaan is knocked to the ground by the asian bodybuilder. Mina then straddles Darkaan and she raises her left fist high and pounds it downward. A normal woman would've had her head pounded into ground beef by Mina's powerful strength but for Darkaan, she feels like she is being gently tapped against the face by a lightweight 80 pound weakling of a woman. Darkaan remains unaffected by the pummeling and becomes more enraged at the moment and she grabs Mina's left fist and she squeezes tightly crushing her hand in the process.


    Mina's screams loudly to the top of her lungs as her eyes open wide, and she screams a banshee like howl of pain as she can no longer feel any motor function in her mangled left hand. Mina gets up from Darkaan and slowly staggers away while looking at her badly broken left hand. The fingers are bent out of shape, blood is all over the hand and a broken bone protrudes from the palm and the hand looks so messed up that Mina would probably need to have her left hand amputated.


    Mina can no longer use her left hand as it's badly broken, Mina now uses her good right hand to hold her permanently disabled left arm as she holds it by the wrist. Mina looks at Darkaan who slowly walks toward her and Mina feels even more afraid to die, "Please don't. Please don't kill me!"


    Her plea falls on deaf ears as Darkaan slowly walks her way toward her. Mina wants to throw a punch using her good arm but she is afraid. Mina can't give up. Knowing it's risky, Mina then changes tactics hoping it would have some kind of effect and she performs a high kick aiming for Darkaan's head using her right foot but Darkaan easily knocks the kick away with her left hand almost as if she had seen it coming. Even if the kick had struck Darkaan across the face, it would have little to no effect on her.


    Mina then shakes her head telling herself "fuck it" and she forms a strong fist with her good right hand, the only good arm she can use at the moment and she throws a huge right swing and with enough force to put anyone in a coma for a long time or even kill them but for Darkaan, if the punch makes contact, it may or may not have any effect on her.


    Darkaan sees the fist coming her way and she easily stops the motion of the fist by grabbing Mina's right arm by the wrist with her left hand and Mina gasps in shock as she tries to pull her arm away from Darkaan but Darkaan has a super strong grip. Darkaan then forms a fist with her right hand and she thrusts the fist toward Mina's right humerus and with incredible force and a loud hard nasty crack rings out throughout the arena and Mina screams to the top of her lungs as her right arm has just been broken in half. The broken bone protrudes from the top bicep and blood oozes down the broken arm from the opened wound and the compound fracture makes Mina's broken arm look like its about to tear away from the stump and fall to the floor from how it dangles in a nasty way.


    Mina no longer has any use for her arms and is now completely helpless against Darkaan. Darkaan then punches Mina hard across the face again and with her right fist and blood and saliva sprays from her mouth and a few more teeth also fly out from her mouth and scatter on the floor and Mina spins around haphazard and then she begins to wobble in a punch drunk manner as she can barely stand on her own two feet.


    Darkaan can see that the fight is practically over. Mina no longer has any use for her arms as they are both rendered permanently useless. Darkaan walks up to her and grabs Mina by the throat and she lifts Mina off the ground forcing her to stand on the tip of her toes and Darkaan viciously punches Mina hard in the gut making her face grimace in pain as her cheeks puff and her feet bounce off the ground and her tight buttocks swings back with the butt cheeks twitching and jiggling like jello as she feels the wind knocked from her completely. Darkaan then begins to viciously pummel the bodybuilder in the face over and over again. The sound of Mina's face being pounded by a powerful punch echoes throughout the arena and the crowd goes wild. Mina's face takes punch after punch, blood oozes from her nose like a geyser as the nose gets broken from the pummeling. Darkaan's fist is stained with Mina's blood as Mina's face slowly becomes a crimson mask of blood.


    Darkaan then releases her throat and moves herself to the outer right hand side of Mina and holds Mina by the back of her hair and makes sure everyone in the crowd looks at the bodybuilder as Mina helplessly wobbles weakly in a classic "Finish Her" stance, Mina's head wobbles around and her body wobbles in a punch-drunk manner. Darkaan wants everyone to see the defeated muscular bodybuilder who struggles to stand and is not only beaten but will be finished off in a very painful manner.


    Darkaan then raises her left foot high and she thrusts it downward toward Mina's right shin and a loud snap echoes and Mina makes an agonizing expression as she feels her leg breaking. The broken shin bone protrudes from her leg and blood oozes down and she loses her ability to stand and is about to fall but Darkaan wraps her left arm across Mina's upper back and supports her weight.


    Mina can't even stand up but despite the weight of her heavy muscular body, Darkaan's strength can easily support her weight. Darkaan holds her in a slight position of a vampire ready to lean close and suck blood as she holds Mina at an angle. Mina's blood stained face looks up at the alien who has been dominating throughout the entire fight which has been nothing but one-sided with Mina on the losing end. Darkaan holds up two fingers on her right hand and as she frowns she looks at Mina and tells her, "You're a disgraceful weakling of a human."


    Darkaan then thrusts both fingers deep into Mina's eyes gouging them out and Mina screams to the top of her lungs, she screams so loud her voice sounds like it's about to run dry and Mina would end up mute. Blood oozes from the gouged eye sockets and down her face, the blood on her face streams down her neck and toward her firm breasts.


    Darkaan removes her fingers from the eye sockets and then she does the final insult to injury and she delivers a hard kick to the side of Mina's left knee breaking the leg in half as she dislocates the knee and now Mina no longer has any motor function in any of her limbs.


    Permanently blind and permanently crippled for life, as Mina is badly disfigured and mauled and all that would be left for Darkaan to leave her the way she is or just go for the finishing kill.


    Darkaan then slides her right hand across the back of Mina's firm buttocks and the fingers grip the left hip while Darkaan's left arm is still across the upper back and the fingers grip the left arm pit and Darkaan cradles the blind and helpless asian bodybuilder holding Mina in her arms and Mina continues moaning and screaming as she is blind and can no longer feel any function in her limbs. Mina is more afraid to die than ever now. Darkaan then begins to hoist Mina's heavy muscular body overhead pressing the tall 168 pound woman overhead as she pushes up against the back of Mina's neck with the left hand and pushes up against her buttocks with her right hand and Mina dangles overhead, still screaming but now starts panting as she doesn't know what will happen. The arms and legs dangle limp in the air as Mina faces up at the ceiling although her eyes can't see anything, her broken left leg swings around side to side as the knee is dislocated and as Darkaan gets ready to murder the foolish bodybuilder, she makes sure everyone takes a good look at the foolish fighter that thought she can over power Darkaan with brute strength and will now meet her own death via brute strength that has always been 20x greater than her own. Mina will now die the fitting death Darkaan only sees fit. Darkaan concentrates all her strength while she groans loudly as she pulls Mina down, "NNNNNNGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!"


    Darkaan pulls Mina down while dropping down to one knee and keeping the other extended and Mina's back crashes hard on the outstretched knee and a loud deafening crunch rings out throughout the arena and Mina is forever silenced as her spine is fatally destroyed by Darkaan. Mina's corpse is broken almost wrapped around the knee. Darkaan didn't just break Mina's back, she also disemboweled her, Mina's strong six pack abs exploded in a heap from the impact as her broken spine protrudes from her opened gut, her intestines are spewed out and dangle at the sides. Darkaan had killed Mina with a SUPER BACKBREAKER!!!! Not the first time Darkaan has ever killed anyone with a super backbreaker and it definitely will not be the last time either.


    Mina's mouth forms an 'O' shape, her broken arms are sprawled on the ground, the back of her head touches the floor and her broken legs are stretched out. Although Mina was nearly torn in half from the super backbreaker, the only thing keeping her body together are the flesh still attached to the waist area. Darkaan lets the broken muscular corpse dangle across her leg for a bit and then she releases the back of the neck and the buttocks and moves her left hand toward the throat and the right hand between the legs and as Darkaan gets up, she rips the broken corpse in half and a mushy sound echoes and Darkaan holds up both halves of Mina.


    Darkaan holds the upper half by the throat, the arms dangle limp especially the badly broken right arm. The intestines, blood and other organs spill out from the bottom midriff and onto the arena floor and the broken spine dangles out from the bottom. The lower half is held just between the legs with the palm pressing against the pussy and the fingers wedging between the tight ass cheeks. Blood oozes down the waist stump staining the blue spandex shorts with blood and the other piece of the broken spine sticks out from the top of the waist stump and the broken legs dangle limp in the air.


    A gruesome end for Mina, but Darkaan followed through on her promise to show Mina that Darkaan will break her body as punishment and that she will suffer and die in a fitting end as a means of humiliating her. The audience continue to clap for Darkaan's victory and she drops both bisected halves of the dead asian bodybuilder and she slowly takes her leave from the arena as she now has a new victory to her streak: 280-0. The body carriers enter the cage to collect the remains of Mina, obviously feed her bisected halves to hungry dogs or shred them in a giant meat grinder. Hopefully, Darkaan's next opponent will either give her a good challenge or will be as worthless as Mina.






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  2. Zombie

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    Beter then those standard-snuffmovies-i-try-to-find-but-it-takes-a-hour-to-find-one.

    10/10 ING

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    Now a more serieus one.

    This story is amazing!

    When you said that you where a storywriter i dind't expect it to be so good like this!

    (Btw do you take requests?)
     
  3. Dilahk

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    Thank you, so, so much my friend. :)

    That means a lot. I always did love sexy bodybuilder chicks getting owned and dominated and snuffed (usually clean or gory back broken death).

    I do take requests, tell me anything you want. Anything. :)
     
  4. eswete

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    Breaking up Psylocke sounds interesting.
    She may not be bulky, but she's well built
     
  5. Zombie

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    I got an idea.

    Somewhere between a zombie apocolypse where a girl survivor gets it hard and end being eaten by a horde or one zombie.

    I can make some screenshots form scenes if you want.
     
  6. Dilahk

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    Breaking up Psylocke eh? I love that. I know she's well built but break her apart. That would be a pleasure.

    I've fantasized at times Psylocke meeting her death, a la "Bane style" except it's the lethal version. >:D

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    Feel free to send me all the screenshots. I once did a zombie apocalypse story years ago, I always love it when the girl survivors always get eaten by a pack of zombies, hell even by a girl zombie.
     
  7. Zombie

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    If you PM me what the story might be, I can try to make it look as best as possible.