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[mm_mml]

Always a fan of more Tifa and a heroine that has the power to just wreck people but being forced to not use that power for other's entertainment.

 

[sooperhero1]

Awesome start and an interesting idea! I can't wait to see how this goes!

 

[kained]

Very well written, very descriptive. It was a great idea to have Tifa blackmailed into throwing the fight, and the buzzer to let her know to kick out and prolong her suffering was inspired. Great first ryona story. I look forward to seeing more. Have a look at some of my stories too. My Teen Girl story for example, I haven't been able to update in a long time due to heavy studying.

 

[Kargan3033]

Nicely done Ghost13 I loved the surprise ending with the Boss and the little girl.