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Your first porn scene

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by tonyh5144, Jan 13, 2012.

  1. tonyh5144

    tonyh5144 Potential Patron

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    Ever wanted to be a porn star (those of you who aren't ;))? This is your big chance!

    Don't be nervous - you have an experienced partner to guide you through your first scene. She'll whisper to tell you what to do and make comments when she gets an opportunity - those bits are in brackets. She also says her lines from the script - those are in quotes. You don't have any scripted lines, but you can put in some ad libs if you want...

    I hope you've been controlling yourself for the last few days - I doubt she's going to be satisfied with just one cumshot!

    Technical note:
    This uses custom dialogue types, so she can direct you instead of just reacting to what you do. There are types for requests for vigour, holding her down and making her faint, which are set off by a general request type. So when she's supposed to ask you to do something I put [req], and the req type chooses from [rvig], [rhold] and [rfaint].
    Similarly, there are types for the different places to cum, and a general "cum request" type to pick a place to ask for.

    I discovered that you can have more than one finish1/2/3/4/Other line, so I used that to make the probability of her asking for more dependent on how many times you've cum already. Unfortunately, the fact that you sometimes get more than one cum line means you sometimes get one finish line wanting more and another line not wanting more. Ideally there'd be a way of setting a flag to indicate "she's said one of the finish lines already - don't put another in until he cums again".

    The full dialogue text:
    dialogue_name:"Porn initiation"

    intro:"CLEAR"
    general:"CLEAR"
    resistance:"CLEAR"
    first_throat:"CLEAR"
    first_dt:"CLEAR"
    pull_off:"CLEAR"
    held:"CLEAR"
    wake:"CLEAR"
    vigorous:"CLEAR"
    pre_cum:"CLEAR"
    cum_on_face:"CLEAR"
    cum_in_mouth:"CLEAR"
    cum_in_throat:"CLEAR"
    cum_in_eye:"CLEAR"
    swallow:"CLEAR"
    drool:"CLEAR"
    restart:"CLEAR"

    intro:"(Hi there, stud... I'm gonna pop your film cherry! Shove it in my mouth and I'll guide you...)"
    intro:""Wow, what a cock!" (It is pretty impressive!)"
    intro:""Get that thing in my mouth!" (I love that look on your face when you don't know what to do! Trust me...)"
    intro:"(Don't worry, I know the script... do it right and I'll repeat it off-camera!)"
    intro:""You want to fuck my face?" (Put it in and I'll tell you what to do next!)"
    intro:"(Ooh, I've got a handsome stud this time! I love fucking first-timers!)"
    general:"(That's it, stud, do that again!)"
    general:"(You taste great - I'll ask for you for my next film!)"
    general:""Oh, babe, I should hate this, but I love it so much!" (This is fun... I think I might extend this scene a bit!)"
    general:"[req]"
    general:"(I love the way you're looking at me - but don't cum too soon, we've a lot to do before then!) [req]"
    resistance:""You're so big, babe... be gentle!" (That's right, push it into my throat!)"
    resistance:""Don't stop there... gimme more!" [good]"
    resistance:""I can't wait till I can get it all the way down!" (Now stretch my throat...)"
    resistance:"(Push harder, big boy, and I'll take you to heaven!)"
    first_throat:""Oh yeah... almost got it through!" (Push me right down, then pull me off slowly.)"
    first_throat:""You love that look on my face, don't you?" (Now fill my throat right up and take it back out.)"
    first_throat:""I'm not sure I can take it any further!" (I can - go on, push it right in...)"
    first_throat:""I don't think I can fit any more in... but you're just going to push me down, aren't you?""
    first_dt:""You pushed it all the way in..." (Now put it back in and let me pull off.)
    first_dt:""Wow... what a feeling!" (Put it right down again...)"
    first_dt:""*YOU! *You really stretched my throat!" [good]"
    first_dt:""Aak! That really stretched me!" (That's right, now push me right down till I push back against you...)"
    pull_off:"(Now we take it up a level!) [req]"
    pull_off:""Don't put it so deep*, YOU*, please!" (Ignore that...)[req]"
    pull_off:""That's too deep!" (Take no notice!) [req]"
    pull_off:""I had to breathe, darling..." [req]"
    pull_off:""You're too big for me to stay on you!" (But we can have fun if you make me stay on!)[rhold]"
    held:""Oh* YOU*, you're making my head spin!" (That's great!)[req]"
    held:""Can't... breathe..." [req]"
    held:""Please* YOU*, don't choke me!" [req]"
    held:""Oh, don't do that*, YOU*, you'll make me faint!" (Now look as if that turned you on!) [rfaint]"
    wake:"Ooh... "What happened??" (Well done, you did that just right!)"
    wake:""Omigod, that was scary!" (Just what we needed!) [req]"
    wake:""Ohh... did I faint*, YOU*? Hope I didn't miss anything... hee-hee!" [req]"
    wake:""Oh... *YOU... *what...?" (You look worried! Don't be, you did it just right... I always come round!)"
    wake:""Oh, my love... I'm so ashamed to say this, but... I loved that!" (Have you ever made a girl faint before?)"
    vigorous:""Oh, babe... you'll make my throat sore, but I don't care!" [req]"
    vigorous:""Slow down* YOU*!" (Don't - that's just right...) [rvig]"
    vigorous:""You'll tear my throat! I hope you've got some lotion for it!""
    vigorous:""OHH! I'm.... AAAHH! OOOHH!! Oh YES baby, you make me cum so hard! AAAHH!!" [req]"
    vigorous:""Ooohh... you stretch me so wide, my love, and I adore it!" [req]"
    pre_cum:""Ooh... I think I just tasted your precum! Are you nearly there?" (Hope so - I want to find out how much you make!) [rcum]"
    pre_cum:"(Time for you to cum...) [rcum]"
    pre_cum:""Mmm, your cock's pulsing in my throat!" (Feels great!) [rcum]"
    pre_cum:""You look so cute when you're straining to cum, my love!" [rcum]"
    pre_cum:"[rcum]"
    cum_on_face:""Yeah, splatter my face* YOU*!" (Lovely!)%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_on_face:""Your cum's all over my face! You really covered me!" %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_on_face:""I'm your cumslut, baby! You've claimed me for your own!" %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_on_face:""Do I look sexy with your cum all over my face?" (Yes, I know I do!) %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_mouth:""Mmmm, that's wonderful - it makes all the times you rape my mouth worthwhile!""
    cum_in_mouth:""You want me to swallow it*, YOU*?""
    cum_in_mouth:""Ooh, that's so thick and salty!""
    cum_in_mouth:""That's such a weird taste!""
    cum_in_mouth:""So much cum in my mouth..." (and so tasty, too!)"
    cum_in_throat:""I'm so full of your cum!" (Nice action, mate! %0d*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_throat:""You shot it straight down into my stomach!" %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_throat:""Mmm, you filled me up from your big hose!" (Well done! %0d*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_throat:""Oh, baby, you've made me your slut! I felt your cock moving in my throat!" %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_eye:""Owww! That stings*, YOU*!"%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_eye:""Eeeh! Don't do that*, YOU*... please!" (Don't worry, it isn't all that bad...)%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_eye:""Hey! You bastard... don't do that again!" (Well done!)%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    cum_in_eye:""Oh, babe, I'll even take this pain if you'll stay with me..."%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    swallow:""That slips down so nicely..." (I love that!) %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    swallow:""You love to make me swallow your cum - and I love seeing your face when I do it!"%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    swallow:""Your cum's so thick!" (and tasty, too!)%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    drool:""Oooh... too much cum... I can't swallow it!" %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    drool:""I'm yours, baby, and your cum on my tits proves it!" (Don't think I really mean that, big boy!) %0d(*FINISHES*)"
    drool:""Look how thick it is, even mixed with my spit!" (How long have you been keeping all that cum?)%0d(*FINISHES*)"
    restart:""H-hey, wait... you've not even gone soft! Oh God, not again..." (Yeah, go on, stud, do it!)
    restart:""Again? Aren't you running out of cum?"[req]"
    restart:""So many loads and you're still hard? I must really make you horny, I suppose!" [req]"
    restart:""You're never satisfied with just once... you're insatiable*, YOU*!"[good]"
    restart:""Wow, you've got so much endurance!" (And a very lickable cock!)[req]"

    finish1:"We're not done yet - you've got to cum at least once more!"
    finish1:"I'm not finished with you yet - I haven't deflowered you properly if you've only cum once!"
    finish1:"Hope you didn't think we were finished!"
    finish1:"There's more to this script yet!"
    finish1:"Yeah, believe it... you've just been sucked off by a pornstar! And now she's gonna do it again!"

    finish2:"Right, that's two cumshots - now how about a third?"
    finish2:"One more to go - or maybe more, if I stay this horny!"
    finish2:"Do me again - you're not really a stud if you can't cum three times running..."
    finish2:"Again! I'm too revved up to stop now!"
    finish2:"And now we start all over again! God, I love my job..."

    finish3:"Hey, you're good at this! Want to go again?"
    finish3:"The director's saying "again"... it wasn't in the script, but I'm happy!"
    finish3:"I can tell you love fucking my mouth - so let's do it again!"
    finish3:"That's great, mate - any more's a bonus!"
    finish3:"Now shove it in hard, so I have to gulp again!"

    finish4:"Four times and you're still hard! I'm so glad I decided to take you in hand!"
    finish4:"You OK to go again, stud? The crew want more, but if you're tired out that's OK..."
    finish4:"Wow, you must be tired after that!"
    finish4:"Better stop now... I mustn't tire you out!"
    finish4:"We're making everyone late... but I don't care! Fuck my mouth again!"

    finishOther:"Wow! You're a natural - how many times have you cum now?"
    finishOther:"We should do a whole video together - you're a one-man bukkake!"
    finishOther:"This is great! I can keep going for hours if you can..."
    finishOther:"Fuck, you're almost as hungry for it as I am!"
    finishOther:"Fuck! The crew still want more... hey, guys, we want double pay for this!"

    req:"[rvig]"
    req:"[rvig]"
    req:"[rhold]"
    req:"[rhold]"
    req:"[rfaint]"

    rcum:"[rcface]"
    rcum:"[rcface]"
    rcum:"[rcmouth]"
    rcum:"[rcmouth]"
    rcum:"[rcthroat]"
    rcum:"[rcthroat]"
    rcum:"[rceye]"

    rvig:"(C'mon, faster, harder!)"
    rvig:"(Shove me right down in one then fuck my mouth hard... I can take it!)"
    rvig:"(Fuck my mouth harder... when you see me wince, you know you're doing it right!)"
    rvig:"(Make me gag... it turns some people on!)"
    rvig:"(Bet you can't make me gag, stud!)"
    rhold:"(Now hold me right down on your cock!)"
    rhold:"(Hold me down now - yeah, I mean it!)"
    rhold:"(Now shove it right in and make me choke, big boy!)"
    rhold:"(Now they want to see me struggle on your cock... don't let me go for 20 seconds at least!)"
    rhold:"(Make me gasp for air - I know you won't take it too far!)"
    rhold:"(Push me down, and when I start to push back, hold me on your cock till I cough!)"
    rfaint:"(Time for you to make me faint - hey, don't look so worried, I've done it loads of times!)"
    rfaint:"(Now hold me down till I faint! Yes, I said till I faint!)"
    rfaint:"(Make me pass out now. "How"? Hold me on your cock till I go limp!)"
    rfaint:"(Hold me right down till I faint. You can let me pull off a little now and then, but don't let me escape!)"
    rfaint:"(Now fuck my throat till I faint. Don't let me pull off to breathe - just keep shoving me down!)"
    rcface:"(Shoot your cum all over me! Make sure you get some on my face!)"
    rcface:"(Time for the money shot! All over my face...)"
    rcface:"(Now cum on my face, and we'll do it again!)"
    rcface:"(Put it on my face this time!)"
    rcface:"(Now shoot it on my face! Make me look beautiful...)"
    rcmouth:"(Now you shoot in my mouth, then hold my head back and make me swallow. Not that I wouldn't anyway...)"
    rcmouth:"(Cum in my mouth, mate, and let me drool it on my tits.)"
    rcmouth:"(Shoot it in my mouth - if you can get it in my nose too, it's a bonus!)"
    rcmouth:"(Spurt it into my mouth so I can drink it!)
    rcthroat:"(Cum down my throat, stud!)"
    rcthroat:"(Now spurt right down my throat!)"
    rcthroat:"(Push me right down your cock, and CUM!)"
    rcthroat:"(Now shoot it straight into my stomach!)"
    rceye:"(Get some cum in my eye if you can - yeah, it hurts, but I can handle it...)"
    rceye:"(Want to cum in my eyes? It's in the script...)"
    rceye:"(Now shoot your cum into my eyes, and when I complain hold me down as punishment!)"

    good:"(You're doing great... I can see the crew, they're all wanking!)"
    good:"(I reckon they'll ask you to do another, the way the director's looking!)"
    good:"(This is gonna be a great film!)"
    good:"(This is fuckin' great!) [req]"
    good:"(I don't know why you looked so worried earlier... this is fun!)"
    good:"(Hey, why the nerves? You're raping my face just right!)"
    good:"(I can hardly talk - but it's worth it! You're the best man I've deepthroated in... ooh, two years at least!)"
    good:"(The crew are fuckin' loving this... I think they're gonna add some more to our scene!)"
     

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  2. booster

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    this is technically very well done! looks like a lot of work for this creative idea.
    the downside about this is, that she relatively often asks for choking and fainting, which makes it seem like the production of violence-porn. i'd suggest some variation like:
    let me lick your cockhead
    let me lick your balls
    let me lick your shaft outside
    let me lick up your precum
    rub your cock in my face
    ...lines

    also i wouldn't write [rcum] behind a precum-line because she then makes requests while he squirts on her face
     
  3. hypocrite

    hypocrite Potential Patron

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    Nice one. :)
     
  4. flambot

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    Great little scene. Loved it.
     
  5. tonyh5144

    tonyh5144 Potential Patron

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    Thanks for the comments - they're much appreciated! ;D

    Good idea - perhaps that could be another type like [rlick] or [rvar]. Come to think of it, she doesn't necessarily have to ask for one of the detectable things - I just did that so she could tell when he'd done something and what he'd done.
    Of course the individual user could edit the req type to suit his/her preferences - or perhaps I should include some extra lines commented out!

    True, though if you're careful you can often pull out when the white flashes first appear so he doesn't cum without further stimulation. (She'd probably say "That's what you have to do to be a pornstar - it isn't just fucking, you know..." ;)) The difficulty with having her ask for a place to cum earlier is that you may get two conflicting requests (as happens with the finishN lines) - which is OK if she's just making it up as she goes along, but doesn't fit the concept of having a script.

    Now that's an idea - wouldn't it be amusing if she could detect when he cums before she's finished making the request...
    Code:
    "(Easy there, tiger... if you can't control yourself better than this, you'll run out of cum before we get through this script!)"
    "(Hey! If you want to get paid for this, you better listen before you shoot your cum!)"
    "(I love cum on my face so much, I can't really be annoyed you did that... but I think the director might have a few choice words when we've finished!)"
    "(Yes, I know I'm irresistible... but you don't have to show it that way! Now next time, wait till I tell you where to put it!)"
     
  6. Bruce

    Bruce Vivacious Visitor

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    Great dialogue, kudos mr tony!