I've modified this topic because it actually makes sense to have a topic for anyone to post any clever tricks, effects, or workarounds that they come up with to spice up the dialogue. Plus, this would be a good place to inquire for tips on achieving certain goals. So here's a trick for if you want to add some actual dialogue into your dialogue, instead of just the girl monologing. It's actually not that difficult. All you need to do is use the URL encoded line feed character: %0A Use that to break up lines, so if you want to start things off with a bit of chitchat: Code: intro:"*YOU*: Are you ready, baby?%0A*ME*: Mmmm, *YOUR* cock is so big and hard today! I can't wait!" ...will display as: Illusion: Are you ready, baby? Mari: Mmmm, Illusion's cock is so big and hard today! I can't wait! Simple as that. You can use it for any entry, so if you want the man to be a bit polite, you could go with something like: Code: first_throat:"*YOU*: Are you okay*, ME*? Are you sure you can handle it?%0A*ME*: It hurts my throat a little, but I'm willing to keep going, for you..." And then when she starts to gag, you will see: Illusion: Are you okay, Mari? Are you sure you can handle it? Mari: It hurts my throat a little, but I'm willing to keep going, for you... Or you could just as easily go in the opposite direction (both in tone and in dialogue order): Code: pull_off:"*ME*: Stop! Wait! I can't breathe!%0A*YOU*: Don't you fight me, or you'll really find out how it feels to get choked." And then when she tries to fight for her breath, you will see: Mari: Stop! Wait! I can't breathe! Illusion: Don't you fight me, or you'll really find out how it feels to get choked. ...and so forth. One caveat, though. The dialogue parser doesn't know one role from the other in this situation, so if she's coughing during the "male" part of the dialogue, the coughs will appear in his words. Similarly, if you pull her back on and interrupt the sequence during one of his lines, he will get stopped with an "-mmph" or whatever. But as long as you can tolerate that, this gives you quite a bit of flexibility to create some responses and make the male participant an active part of the dialogue. I hope this gives you guys lots of ideas. Have a blast (pun fully intended).