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Tomb Rider - Lara's humiliating defeat

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by Seth, Jun 17, 2012.

  1. Seth

    Seth Potential Patron

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    Inspired by this art made by Eyeteeth. It was just asking for a story.
    Share your feeling with the author of the art http://www.ryonani.com/guro-death/1230-eyeteeths-doomed-heroines-6.html
    English is not my language, I did my best to write so I hope it's understandable.

    Strong kick send Lara on the floor. She noticed her gun flying in the air and with the wet sound falling into the water. She was fighting in the underground cavern under the ancient temple of Maya. Her enemy, German adventurer Herman von Gargen, stood right in front of her with his gun pointed into her.

    “Ok, bitch, don’t move”, he said. Lara was looking into the barrel of the gun. She knew that this man was merciless; he killed many people who stood in his way. She rose her hands up in the sign of the surrender.

    “Very good, I like when sluts know their place.”, said Herman, smiling with wicked grin, “Show me your tits, Lara”
    “What?”, she asked with the surprise and disgust.
    “Are you deaf, you stupid cunt? Show me your tits! I want to see these famous cow udders of yours, lady Croft!”

    Lara breathed heavily. This man was dangerous and opposing him was stupid. Her pride and dignity were screaming, but she did as he told her, pulling her top up and revealing her famous, magnificent breasts. Herman whistled.

    “Yeah, that’s nice pair of tits you have here, Lara. Play with them a bit! I want to see your slutty side.”
    “Please, Herman…”
    “Slam!”, his gun hit her head. Lara saw the stars, and could feel the taste of blood in her mouth. This man wasn’t joking. His gun was pointed at her and he could kill her in single second. She slowly rose on her knees and moved her hands to her breasts, caressing them slowly. Her fingers pressed her caramel nipples.
    “Good, very good…”, Herman took his cell phone and started to take pictures.
    “Play with your pussy, bitch”, he ordered and Lara moved her hand down into her shorts. Soon her moans were echoing in the cavern. Despite the situation, she was getting horny. But when she was close to the climax, Herman approached her and kicked her with his boot straight into her belly. She fell down on the cold, stone floor, moaning from pain.

    “No pleasure for you, cunt”, Herman grabbed her by her hair and moved her head up, onto the same level with his zipper. Barrel of his gun was pressed into her forehead, while he revealed his cock.
    “You know what to do, bitch. Suck and maybe I’ll spare your miserable life!”

    Lara understood that she was in grave danger. He could kill her easily. There wasn’t anyone who’d help her. She wasn’t able to fight anymore. So she opened her crimson lips and accepted his hard cock inside her mouth. It was filthy and disgusting. She wanted to bit that piece of meat off.
    “Remember slut, just touch it with teeth and you’ll get a nice hole in your head”, he said. Lara knew he wasn’t joking. She started to suck. Moving her tongue around his dick she was doing her best to please him. She licked his balls as well, serving him with her mouth. Herman moaned from pleasure while her crimson lips were moving up and down his cock.

    “Oh yeah, bitch… you’re skilled, aren’t you? I bet you were giving head to everyone. You probably sucked dozens of dicks. I know such sluts, they’re acting high and mighty but they know that their place is on their knees, with dick in their mouth.”

    His words were hurting her pride, but Lara was doing her best to not listen to him. She wanted to end if as fast as possible and escape.

    “Come on slut…”, he said, pulling his dick out of her mouth and shooting his semen onto her face. White stains covered her pretty face. Cum was dripping down her chin. Herman wiped his cock clean with her hair and moved behind her. Lara could feel the barrel of his gun pressed to the back of her head.

    “Who’s the worst slut in the world?”, he asked, still holding his cell phone and recording.
    “Me…”, she said with frighten voice.
    “Who’s the cum hungry whore?”
    “Me….”
    “Who’s the worthless bitch?”
    “Me…”
    “That’s right, you’re nothing more but a fuckmeat!”, he kicked her back. Lara hit the floor and rose slowly. There was silence. She rose on her legs, not knowing what’s going on.
    “Run you bitch!”, he cried. Lara wasted no time. She started to run. Moment later bullet hit her knee. She fell down again with cry filled with pain. Another shoot echoed in the cave and her second knee turned into the bloody mass of broken body and bone. Lara was crying from pain.

    “Isn’t it ironic? You just made your first porn movie and just after this you’re gonna rot in this cavern.”, said Herman, “But worry not, I’m gonna post this movie into the web as soon and I’ll return. All the world is gonna remember you as a cock sucking whore.”

    Third bullet hit her head. Soon after Herman left the cave, rats started to gather around Lara’s dead body.
     
  2. eyeteeth

    eyeteeth Swell Supporter Ryonani Teamster

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    very good, thank you :D
     
  3. Raden

    Raden Club Regular Ryonani Teamster

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    hmm, and I thought mine were getting violent. Might be just a little too much even for me, but then there is bound to be someone who enjoys it, and as I have learned you cannot please everyone with every story.

    I am sure this caters to someone, but it isn't my thing personally.
     
  4. Seth

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    Well, it was just a sudden impulse, I saw this picture and suddenly get whole story in my head.
    Just like humiliation stuff.
     
  5. TheCrimsonRisk

    TheCrimsonRisk Club Regular Ryonani Teamster

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    I agree that this is usually not my thing, but I thought you did a good job elaborating on that picture. It's cool how one image can get all kinds of ideas running through our heads, isn't it?

    What is your native language, by the way? I ask because I thought your English writing was fine. Clear and to the point. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
     
  6. Seth

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    I have it very often, but it's first time I tried to write somethin inspired by picture. Seems that it wasn't bad idea.
    I'm billingual (speaking both polish and slovak languages), but since they're not much popular in the web, I'm trying to polish my english enough to be able to communicate with people. But there's big difference between simple communication and writing a story. I'm happy that people found it good enough.