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The Slut Within

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by yurinicolau, Apr 28, 2012.

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For my new project I'm doing a rape dialogue, so what do you think is best?

  1. An innocent and shy girl that will be subdued and become a cockslave... (lots of begging and less an

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  2. An innocent and shy girl that will be against her will the whole dialogue (lots of begging, but no a

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  3. An agressive girl that will be subdued and become a cockslave...(lots of threats and angry_mood face

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  4. An agressive girl that will will be against her will the whole dialogue (lots of threats, but no ah

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  1. yurinicolau

    yurinicolau Potential Patron

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    An innocent girl... A huge cock in front of her... MORE THEN 200 LINES OF DIALOGUE... The rest is up to you...

    This is my master piece! I spend more then just several hours doing it... And it has become the biggest and hottier dialogue I have ever seen here... There is plenty of scenarios possibles... Wanna play rough or maybe you are more the gentle type, do it and see what happens! All actions and options where contempled in this dialogue.

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    A girl that is struggling not to be a slut while a tremendous hard burstful cock begins to corrupt her will... She can't believe in it's size... She is amazed... She can feel the warmth coming from the hard on... She is horny... Deeper the cock goes, closer the slut inside becomes to blossom... She wants to surrender to the desire... But she is reluctant, she doesn't want to become a slut... She has rules and conditions... But one by one he starts to break... Until the only thing that remains is the lust to suck... At the end she can only surrender and accept that she is now, a cockslave...

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    -THE SLUT WITHIN-

    Spoiler more the 200 lines of dialogues in codelines? You must be kidding... Your computer would crash with that much information! :D
    BAZINGA!!!

    Download it here:
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    TIPS:
    -Set the cock size for an oustanding value (Who said size didn't matter? In this dialogue, the bigger the better!)
    -Set her intro resistance to a very high value (this will prolong her struggle)
    -Set her throat resistance to a very high value (this will make her gullet hole tight)
    -Set her hands to be on his legs at the beginning (some dialogue lines will make her change positions later)

    What did you like most about this dialogue? Dislike something? Post it here!
     

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  2. AaRL

    AaRL Swell Supporter

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    I have to ask. Whats up with all the %01? Its in a ton of lines.I opened this in Notepad. Then in Wordpad. Then within the games editor itself. Maybe a formatting error, but why did I get this? (Posted a sample)

    pull_off:"Hands behind your back... [ARMS_BACK] %01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01It's my turn now...[HOLD][FACE_FUCK_STYLE]"{"held":"false","style":"Him"}
    pull_off:"Mmm... You suck like a sex nymph...[NORMAL_MOOD]"{"held":"false","style":"Him"}
    pull_off:"Now... %01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01Put your hands on your thighs... [ARMS_LEGS]%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01[HOLD]AND LET ME DEEPTHROAT YOU..."{"held":"false","style":"Him"}
    pull_off:"Now... %01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01Put your hands on your thighs... [ARMS_LEGS]%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01[RELEASE]DEEPTHROAT ME..."{"held":"true","style":"Him"}
    pull_off:"Slowly...%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01%01 Yes... That's my girl... "{"held":"false","style":"Him"}
     
  3. hypocrite

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    It's a bit too gentle for my tastes, but still nice work. :)
     
  4. yurinicolau

    yurinicolau Potential Patron

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    What is the %01 for?

    I'm glad you ask! This is old school man... The "%01" is used to pause the dialogue a little, it's like a phantom line since it doesn't actually occupy space at the dialogue box in the game (in other words, you can only see the "%01" at editor or the ".txt" file). I used a lot of them specially at the thoughts lines, because these kind pass a lot faster then the speak lines, so every time I wanted her to give an dramactic pause for the scene.

    So that's it! Now you can just enjoy "The Slut Within" without any concerns...
     
  5. ramius

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    Great work, this is now my favourite dialogue. It must of taken ages to get it just right, the game almost plays itself at times.
     
  6. yurinicolau

    yurinicolau Potential Patron

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    Rape dialogue

    Somebody just asked me to do a rape dialogue... And I'd like to do make a couple of polls first... You'll find the first poll at the top of the screen, and here is another one about blindfolds and gags:

    1) BLINDFOLDs (They are cool, but in SDT they hide most emotions of her, so we would'd be able to see most of her reactions);

    2) GAGs (They are hardcore stuff... And It'd be logical to use on her to prevent any bites from her, but in SDT she cannot speak with a gag, so the dialogue lines would be centered at his speaches an her thoughts);

    Just do a reply saying if you'd prefer a dialogue centered in both of them, one of them or without them.

    Thank's people!
     
  7. Trafalgar

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    I would love to see a gagged dialogue.
     
  8. LeaValk

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    Yeah, blindfolds would hide the eyes emotions a bit much like you said. A gagged dialogue where she could only think about what was going on and happening to her would be something different.
     
  9. rick410xx

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    very nice work, 200 lines of quality dialogue, that takes some serious skill! and thx for posting the info about the %01, i need to try that out. as for blindfolds, they are okay but i personally like to see her eyes and expressions. if you are going to do a gag too you're already quite limited with expressions, since you can only do thought. a gagged dialogue would be interesting to see, and you're great at doing thought dialogue so i'm sure you'll be able to pull it off.
     
  10. homair

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    thanks, enjoyed this dialog a lot, many lines makes u want to replay again and again! good job 8)
     
  11. throatfucker

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    Was very nice
     
  12. stang

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    I took the liberty of correcting some spelling errors...hope this is ok with the OP.

    Excellent work!!!
     

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  13. phantomx

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    really good .
     
  14. CGma

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    Best Dialogue I've seen so far, good job!
     
  15. SeaFox

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    Funny, wth the spoiler thingy! ;D
     
  16. resolute49

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    I like the concept. I thought she should be a virgin to blow jobs who ends up a totally addicted cocksucker.
     
  17. ty379

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    Yes, Yes... the gag dialogue please. With alot of vigerous action and him enjoying her while she is passed out. I cant wait ::)
     
  18. Kudo530

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    Very nice, I like it ;D