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The Legend of Shepard [Mass effect, FemShep] (1 Viewer)
TheCrimsonRisk
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- Jun 10, 2010
This kind of story is too graphic for my liking, but I admire your commitment. You have a gift for anatomical detail, something that not everyone can write about. You also did an excellent job of building up Shepard's fear of becoming a husk but then changing her fate to something far worse. I'd say this story was raw and perhaps overly long, but there's so much good stuff here that I look forward to your next story.
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