Archknight7
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- Jan 5, 2015
These are some dialogues I took a bit of time to fix up with the help of the dialogue checker. Humanoid Girl was written by Curious, and The Saeko Busujima and Saya Takagi Dialogues were written by Voktikriid.
I like Humanoid dialogue, but not all the lines would load right and/or work as intended. So I used an empty template to fix the structure of it and to get the restart lines to work properly.
As for the other dialogues, I just used the suggestions by the dialogue checker to iron them out and (maybe? Could of made it worse...) fixed some sentence errors. I've also edited them to have variants to use the *YOU* wildcard.
You can find the originals (and/or other dialogues) in their respective threads.
Curious dialogue thread
Voktikriid HSoTD Dialogues
Hopefully these will be of use!
I like Humanoid dialogue, but not all the lines would load right and/or work as intended. So I used an empty template to fix the structure of it and to get the restart lines to work properly.
As for the other dialogues, I just used the suggestions by the dialogue checker to iron them out and (maybe? Could of made it worse...) fixed some sentence errors. I've also edited them to have variants to use the *YOU* wildcard.
You can find the originals (and/or other dialogues) in their respective threads.
Curious dialogue thread
Voktikriid HSoTD Dialogues
Hopefully these will be of use!
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Dialogue_Humanoid Fixed.txt
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Saeko Busujima Fixed.txt
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Saeko Busujima Fixed (YOU edit).txt
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Saya Takagi Fixed.txt
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Saya Takagi Fixed (YOU edit).txt
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