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Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga (UPDATED part 4!)

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by Slingerbult, Sep 23, 2012.

  1. Slingerbult

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    SLINGERBULT'S SUBMISSIVE SCHOOLGIRL SAGA
    This is a progressive SDT trilogy revolving around an aspiring Professor of Theoretical Physics and one of his freshman majors, who talks too much in class. On the surface, she has an assertive and witty approach to life, sex and boys. Deep down, however, she's not that experienced and hides a rather submissive side that you, as a more experienced man than the jocks she normally dates, may unlock through the correct blend of hard and soft techniques! A generic schoolgirl (to my own taste) named Rebecca is provided for in the dialogue text files along with appropriate backgrounds (see link below) if you so desire. I really recommend playing through all three parts in order, as much of the appeal will otherwise be lost.

    Key fetiches of the trilogy: Dominance/submission, schoolgirls, (legal) age play, light abuse (slaps and hair pulls), crying, anal/A2M
    (CC) 2012 Slingerbult (some rights reserved)

    PART 1: LUNCH BREAK QUICKIE
    Background: A freshman Physics major talks too much in class and her Professor has just the thing to shut her up.
    Style: The trilogy has rather innocent beginnings. Part 1 is much like a game where you can either fail and make her angry, or succeed and score another date.
    Starting settings: Normal mood, holding, mouse cursor behind her back. Start in Happy mood to skip intro in later runs if you wish.
    *She needs to be horny (ahegao) before you go for the throat or start cumming, or else she'll get pissed and you'll loose.
    *There are two ways to get her horny once she's happy (after intro dialogue). One is keyed to an intro line and another to a specific action. Either only works when held (other dialogue lines will toggle this). Pay attention to what she's saying and doing and you'll figure it out.
    *Even if you follow these rules, she won't (yet) accept vigorous throat fucking, being choked out or cumming in inconvenient places.
    *If the restart/ending dialogue doesn't trigger for some reason, you can just hold her down to trigger it again. Do not try this when she's not horny ;)

    PART 2: AFTER SCHOOL SPECIAL
    Background: Having succeeded in part 1, the schoolgirl cums by the Professor's place for an evening adventure.
    Style: Part 2 is a much darker piece focusing on bringing out her submissiveness. You can't really fail in this part, but it's still linearly progressive with a start and a finish.
    Starting settings: Happy mood, holding, mouse cursor behind her back. Start in Normal mood to skip intro in later runs if you wish.
    Go with the flow and give her a chance to talk once in a while, and you'll complete this one without problems!

    PART 3: SKINNY DIPPING
    Background: Completing part 2 successfully, the schoolgirl invites you to go skinny dipping. But what is she really in the mood for?
    Style: A mix between the styles in part 1 and 2, the final part is more interactive than your average dialogue and caters to different tastes (rough, forced, vanilla, romantic etc.) depending on mood and play style.
    Starting settings: Your mood of choice (affects starting dialogue). Holding her skips the progressive intro in normal/happy mood.
    1) Pulling her up grabs or releases her when released or held, respectively (essentially toggling between the two).
    2) Pulling her down slaps her when held, or pulls her hair when released. She won't always appreciate this.
    3) You're not supposed to change mood through the Options menu in this dialogue. Rather, certain more or less logical actions will change her mood (for example, slapping her in Normal mood will make her Angry, but slapping her when Ahegao won't change her mood). See the Mood Changing Dialogue section for details.
    4) There are three endings, two "bad" and one "good". Basically, if you treat her too roughly you will get the douchebag ending. If you're simply all vanilla and no fun, you will get the LJBF ending. And if you strike a good balance and time everything right, you will eventually reach the good ending.

    PART 4: Loader Addendum - A PLEASANT SURPRISE
    This addendum to the trilogy is a fully automated dialogue for the loader! As a contrast to the other dialogues, this mini porn movie is completely non-interactive - just press play and enjoy the ride. Before you do though, you need to load gollum's awesome Dialogue Actions and No Genitals mods. As always, mouse cursor to the left. Also, if you're a loader afficionado, make sure you're using standard settings as customized settings may screw with the dialogue's timing. Note: This ONLY works with the loader and the required mods, not with vanilla SDT. Background for this scene is courtesy of Hauser and incorporated in the Rebecca4 character file.
    In this scene, Rebecca has prepared a surprise for her favorite Professor, as he walks into the classroom to finish up for the day... You'll probably enjoy this "SDT Movie" more if you've played through the interactive trilogy first, but you can consider it a stand alone episode.
    EDIT: Updated thanks to denirth on June 20 2013 to work better with new Loader triggers etc.

    FEEDBACK AND KARMA IS ALWAYS APPRECIATED :)

    Backgrounds found here:
    http://superdeepthroat.ryonani.com/index.php?topic=2912.0

    Now that the series is finished, you will also find a complete custom character library with all three Rebeccas with backgrounds embedded below for your convenience!
     

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  2. pinosante

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    This is sheer genius. Super creative, super hot. Only thing I'd like, is to see more lines to create some more diversity. But it's really good stuff.

    Kudos, you are a true deep throat pioneer!
     
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    Man, I have no idea ow to use dialogues. I just keep getting the GAME OVER script right away and it just loops forever. :P
     
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    Just don't force her (don't make her gag). Wait her out, until she asks to lick the tip, and then let her slowly lick the tip. That will allow for a mood change. And then you can start fucking her throat. She'll say that it's ok to do that as well. Pretty cool dialogue :)
     
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    Nice progressive flow in this craft. Cant wait for the 2nd and 3rd editions to drop. During gameplay, I might have found a spelling mistake. Other than that, spot on!


    cum_in_mouth:"Mhm... [LOOK_UP]Schwallow? [cim1]" {"mood":"Ahegao"}

    "Schwallow"?
     
  6. Slingerbult

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    Re: Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga

    ElQ, check that:
    *you're not starting in angry mood
    *you're starting with him holding (if not she gets throated when you click play)
    *mouse cursor is to the left (otherwise she'll throat herself when released during intro)

    Pino: you can also get her ahegao if interrupting the blahblah-loop at the right moment.

    Aarl: her mouth is full of cum, hence "Schwallow" ;)
     
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    Thanks, that helped. But is there an easy way to restart the dialogue after the GAME OVER thing?
     
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    I'd like to see some shots of people's schoolgirls for this scene.
     
  9. Karasu-sama

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    This is pretty epic, and I'm loving it! But, I'm not sure if I need a walkthrough or if some of the lines just aren't triggering for me.
     
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    you took it to the next level Slingerbult!
     
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    Re: Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga

    Pressing X and then C to switch back and forth to the character works, it restarts the dialogue. On top of that, setting the girl mood to "happy" right away, will skip the intro dialogue. And then you can try again...
     
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    Re: Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga

    Thanks for that handy tip pino, didn't know that worked :)

    Karasu: Yeah, the lick penis action is sometimes hard to trigger, but you can basically just wait out the intro line instead. First he'll grab her, then she'll soon start yapping about how she's not to blame for talking in class and get stuck in a loop. She's ahegao for half the loop (look at her eyes), so if you throat her at the right moment, you're good!

    Thanks for the praise so far, glad you like it :) Best case, part 2 will be up this weekend. I'll also update part 1 then, so keep those improvement suggestions coming.
     
  13. Impaller

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    Re: Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga

    Yeeeeeeees!!! That's a great dialogue!
    As @booster said: You took it to the next level!

    Thanks and keep up the awesome work ;)
     
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    For some reason everytime she deepthroats for the first time the prof instantly starts cumming. Am I doing something wrong?

    Great dialogue by the way!
     
  15. Slingerbult

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    Flambot: yup it's supposed to be that way, to support the context of a quickie between classes. Part 2 will be much longer, scripted for at least 2 restarts. For part 3, I'm trying to wrap my head around a semi-infinite concept that can go into two alternate endings depending on how you treat her :)
     
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    Your work is inspirational, I never would of thought it was posible to create a win/lose senario with this game, but lo and behold you did it. Kudos my good sir, KUDOS!
    P.S. Can't wait for next installment.
     
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    Oh wow. Can't wait to try them out. Hope part 2 is out soon! Good stuff.
     
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    Re: Slingerbult's Submissive Schoolgirl Saga (now with Part 2!)

    BAM! Part 2 is up!

    EDIT: Discovered a dialogue progression bug of sorts. If you hold her down with space bar before the general dialogue where he declares that he will choke her out, the held dialogue progression supposed to come after that still shows (making little sense). I have corrected this now through some mood changing mojo, but I'll wait with an updated version in case more bugs are discovered in the near future.
     
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    part 2 was fun to play with all these very innovative new features! and like i already said: you are a groundbreaking pioneer, Slingerbult!
     
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    Wow, these dialogues are surprisingly intricate! Awesome work!