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samurai girl

Discussion in 'Dialogue' started by DearSfan31, Nov 24, 2011.

  1. DearSfan31

    DearSfan31 Potential Patron

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    I've done it again. Inspiration has demanded me to make another dialogue. This one's based more or less on Taki. For some reason I keep getting inspired by soul caliber characters. The story this time is you've challenged the dojos best swordswoman to a battle. You've wanted to get her in bed for a while now so you decide to make things interesting. You make a bet with her. If she wins, you kneel before her and acknowledge her as the best samurai in the land. If YOU win, she kneels before YOU and does what you've always wanted her to do. Since this is hentai, you won. Tell me how it is and if you think it needs improvement. As always, enjoy fellow pervs
     

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  2. Croix

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    Besides of some typeos, its really good. Tho could be better if you include some of the new action tags.
     
  3. Faceless

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    Taki's a ninja, though.
     
  4. DearSfan31

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    Ya I know but her attitude was what inspired me