Well, it's been a while, huh? Three years later, I've got a new dialogue in the making. In writing terms, I think it's pretty much done. In coding, however, I'm sure it can use work. I used the Pim_gd's checker, but the 'continue' phase where it progresses into facefucking and the restart lines where she eventually goes ahegao don't always trigger, which is a pain. Also, I feel like it progresses too quickly to brutality when it's supposed to have a bit of a slower build up, but I'm uncertain how to do that well through coding. I've read the guides, but so far haven't had much luck in experimentation. I pretty much need these things spelled out as you would to a five-year old. Any tips from the experts? Also, I should note for anyone who downloads that this is another fairly brutal one. If you aren't into nonconsent and abuse, it's probably safer not to click. Thanks for any help!